The Saint Helps Me Imitate Cultivating Immortality

Rarely good article, very insightful. Mock writing is easy to write but difficult to master. Recommended reading. . .

Emmm, there is a word called moral mismatch. Personally, I feel that if Bai Yi's character is portrayed as a loser, it will greatly affect the reading experience. On the contrary, if Bai Yi is portrayed as a character with poor qualifications but resourcefulness, he can have some interactions and help when the tool man is simulating, and create an image where the tool man feels that he has great perseverance and great opportunities to achieve these achievements, but in fact it is Bai Yi's layout and planning that has led to these results. I think it will be better. This kind of image of the mastermind behind the scenes. The role of this kind of tool man does not need to be reduced, Bai Yi's sense of existence will not become weaker, the rewards will be more reasonable, and the image will be more positive. There is no need for Bai Yi to be a positive character like Bai Yueguang, but whether he is a decent character or a villain, his personality charm must be reflected. Furthermore, I wish the author more updates and better results🙏

After reading over a hundred chapters, the three female protagonists are just wage earners. The male protagonist doesn't want to date the female protagonist but instead marries a wife who has been with her for over 300 years. Wow, the author is really good at doing things. He put it on the shelf to write about this. However, among the simulator texts, this one is considered a masterpiece. If you ignore the author's personal hobbies, some typos, and the setting that the simulator can reward real people, you can read this book and go for a walk.

Tsk, the more I watch, the less interesting it becomes. This male protagonist should be destroyed. Why do we need him? I substituted the male protagonist, but as a result, the plot was basically invisible. After a few chapters, the male protagonist only appeared in less than 100 words, and there was no sense of substitution at all. The male protagonist could not feel the exhilaration of getting the simulator to change his life, and there was no sense of participation at all. Since the pen and ink were devoted to two female characters, it is better to leave the male protagonist. These two female characters are better than this male protagonist as the protagonist. The male protagonist was too failed to portray, so he left.

After all, when we look at the simulator of the world of cultivating immortals, we just want to see what those memes will look like in the cultivating society, but we dare not choose one or two of them, and the protagonist doesn't know if his brain has been tortured by the simulator, and he doesn't use it. Is it understandable that people are looking for tools because of their lack of skills in the early stage, but they never simulate it? What's the point in that? After all, a simulator that doesn't work well is meaningless.

A good saint turns into a Gou King.

Two problems: the time setting is too awkward, and the rewards are too generous. 1. A hundred years of foundation building and two thousand years of Nascent Soul, but the corresponding system cooling time is only one day. 2. The rewards are too generous, and many of them are permanent rewards. If you give too much in the first place, there will be no rewards later. The two problems are put together. Others have been cultivating immortals for thousands of years before becoming gods or something, but the protagonist group has reached Mahayana in a month or two, and both the plot and the time span will collapse. [The solution to the problem is to shorten the training years, lengthen the system cooling time, reduce system rewards, and lengthen the length of the plot outside the system.

After reading dozens of chapters, from the initial interest to feeling a bit repetitive and boring, I hope there will be other interesting plots. The simulation of the two female characters is too repetitive and they both die without any performance. I have always expected that there will be variables and some sexy operations, but there is no such thing. What I look forward to most in the world of immortality is immortality, cultivation, progress, growth, becoming proud of life, supreme strength, the love of fairies, and the dominance of immortality.

How can I put it this way? The book is pretty good, but the protagonist is too transparent, and I feel that I have no connection with the heroines, which is too plain water. If you just like simulators, you can check it out. If you like the immortal warriors and romance, you may be disappointed.

Although the protagonist gets the best reward every time, I feel that if the protagonist fights the two of them in the same realm, he will be beaten badly... (●—●)

😅Guess how many more chapters the author can write? Mahayana Loose Immortals Human Immortals Earth Immortals Xuan Immortals Heavenly Immortals True Immortals Golden Immortals Da Luo Jin Immortals Immortal Lords Immortal Kings Immortal Lords Immortal Emperors Saints

Why doesn't the protagonist simulate it himself? Can't he get a reward by simulating it himself?

🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭 The starting point is great, play the text cultivation game, and then you can make money by copying it

The three tool men are really capable and awesome, but why is there no plot? ! !

It feels like a running account. There is almost no plot in the main world, and there is basically nothing to see. The dungeon is just a running account. The cultivation progress collapsed. At first, I thought the subject matter was novel, but it collapsed after a short time of reading.

Great author, does this book have a single female protagonist or no female protagonist? Or multiple heroines?

Is it possible that what everyone wants to see is a win-win situation, and not really about the protagonist exploiting others? 😥😥In fact, the rewards obtained by the tool man alone are okay, but compared with the rewards obtained by the protagonist for nothing, it is uncomfortable.

New book friends should not fall into this bad book.

If you don't want to write, then don't write. Can no one see it if you write nonsense? Report the same content over and over again.

This author is really awesome. He never corrects a lot of typos. Even when book friends point them out, they act like they haven't seen them.

After not updating for a few days, it suddenly ended

Okay, okay It's so bad, isn't it?

You should be able to tell that you are too watery

Sure enough, it ended hastily. After resuming the update, I felt something was wrong after reading a few chapters.

Why do I feel like something is missing? It's not being upgraded all the time, and there aren't any scenes.

Too watery... I feel like I lost money by subscribing.

???? What the hell, this is over

Updates every ten days, run quickly 😰