My Casting Material Is the Goddess

The more I read it, the more wordy and cumbersome it became, and it made my head hurt. You wrote it according to the game script, completely treating the protagonist as the player character, but the script and the novel are two different things. Playing the game and reading the novel are two different concepts. For games, the puzzle plot is only a part of the game. In addition to the plot, there are other concerns about the sense of substitution. The novel is different. The novel only has the plot to watch, and the audience's sense of substitution is insufficient. The viewing experience is the first priority. It is said to be a puzzle plot, and the Riddler is the whole story. But after you tell the riddle, you directly reveal the answer to the riddle. Then I still have to solve a shitty riddle! ? The protagonist is completely led by others like a puppet, with no initiative at all. Readers are filled with frustration and frustration. In addition, your novel has an extremely depressing style and plot from beginning to end. It only makes people feel tight in their chests. How can they still read it? And as a witty novel, you didn't write out the most important point of the puzzle novel at all. The clues became clear step by step, the situation unfolded step by step, and the truth was revealed bit by bit by the protagonist. The cheerful feeling of clearing the clouds and seeing the sun was completely missing. The answer to the mystery was already put on the readers' faces at the beginning of your novel, The Gate of the Temple. It would be okay if the protagonist had always taken the initiative in the plot and launched a counterattack, but it didn't No, if the protagonist's role as a puppet was not explicitly stated, and the author did not write it out again and again in the novel, and was manipulated at will by the supporting characters, it might have been a better look. But no, the author has been jumping around in the novel while holding a loudspeaker to tell the readers that the protagonist's IQ is suppressed by the supporting characters. The protagonist is His Highness's dog, and is pulled by His Highness on the rope to go wherever he wants. Overall, I feel that the protagonist of this novel is not the current one, but the severely injured and paralyzed Highness whose name I can't remember at the moment. You see, she was maimed by her relatives and returned from the Jedi. She is surrounded by loyal dogs and a bunch of powerful forces. Nothing can escape her eyes. She is deeply loved by the lower class of the common people. She is talented and invincible. She strategizes and wins thousands of miles. She is deeply wounded and firm in her faith. She has been betrayed by relatives and friends and now the king returns. Isn't this a replica of Mei Changsu? The writing setting you gave me, the author, said that she is not the protagonist. I don't even believe it. If you ask me, you might as well use her as the protagonist. Now, apart from the protagonist's name and the protagonist you forcibly bound to him, what else does this protagonist have? And your writing style and style really need to be optimized. The words and sentences are too cumbersome, so it's better to be more concise. Final evaluation, if it is a game script, the look and feel is acceptable. If it is a novel, it fails as a plot text for me.

The author's title and content cannot be said to have no connection at all, I can only say that they are completely unrelated. The writing is so long-winded that it ends up being incomprehensible.

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