The Holy Saint in the World Begins by Accepting the Empress as His Disciple

After reading dozens of chapters, there are a few issues that the author needs to pay attention to. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you would rather not write them. It is too abrupt. Why does the apprentice suddenly fall in love with the protagonist? There is basically no overlap in the content description. Secondly, there are a lot of routine novels published now, and your characters must be well established. Otherwise, you won't remember any of the characters after reading them, and you won't be able to attract readers. Again, the characters appear too quickly. How many disciples have appeared in the 100th chapter? A dignified reincarnated empress was reincarnated with memories, and she behaved like a teenage girl who had never been in love. Before her personality was established, several more disciples appeared. As long as you appear slower, it will be easier for you to conceive the plot. Otherwise, it will be easy to turn the character into a passerby as you write. It can be seen that the author has a big stall to spread out, but you must have an outline to write it to that point. Finally, I want to complain. The author, please polish the various names in your book before writing them out. It's really embarrassing for me. The Purple Jade Sword Demon is no longer around, and now there's only the Purple Jade Sword God? Did you inherit the mantle or something? What about the Xuan Emperor Divine Sect and the Seven-Color Huan Yue Sect? These names are too unsophisticated. It can be seen that the author wants to make up a very cool name, but you might as well be honest. At present, if you, the author, do not try to revise the manuscript, it is unlikely that you will get good results. If there is not much content, you may be able to save something by revising it.

Hey, brother, I would like to tell you out of warm-heartedness. First, there is no explosive point in the beginning of your book. The dramatic scene you think you have is actually the place to dissuade readers. Two, you have read a lot of novels, but it is a pity that you have not learned the essence. You have a book about plastic surgery, and there is still hope. I want to teach you, but I have no way to contact you, so I can only give up. Three, your second picture has no explosive points and cannot capture readers. I suggest you revise it. Four: The protagonist should be grounded For example [Starting: A person who survives with a hand inserted through his chest... Forget it, you probably won't learn it either. You need someone to wake you up.

Send it at a glance. The flow of accepting disciples and feeding them back, the first two chapters were sent directly, the taste is too novice (embarrassing slap in the face plot, cool title introduction, just humble when you come in), 6 or 7 years ago, more people may have fallen into this style. It's really not worth spending money to buy recommendation spots. Next time before you publish a book, you can try posting some to a forum or something for everyone to see. How can you enjoy the article as much as you want? Someone is bullying the protagonist? Yes, but you have to push back, and you can't do it in the same old-fashioned way as a few years ago. I think this book was written on a whim.

Don't miss it if you pass by. The novel has been signed and will be picked up this morning. During this period, you should invest quickly. The outline structure of this book is basically clear. The author left his job and wrote the book full-time at home, ensuring that he will continue to update the book. If you think it's good, please support me!

It's already 2022. Why does Mao still have this kind of thing?

Why is it that despite the million-dollar reward, the author's number of appearances has not improved?

I was attracted by the Great God of Silver

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When I saw this title, I immediately saved it. 😊

An elder wanted to send elixirs to flatter his disciples, but he didn't want to see it for a moment.

You are a new author. It seems that you still have too little experience. After reading two chapters, there are a lot of loopholes. I hope that when you write next, you will either not write in such detail, or you will think twice before you act.

I think this book is okay, but the handling of Gou is not good. The supporting characters and villains have good IQs, but the main character's handling of Gou must be highlighted. The plug-in is there, but it is still so defiant. If you are not strong enough, you can do it secretly, wait for the calm for a while, wouldn't it be better to wait until your cultivation level increases before assassinating? There are such things as demons in the world you describe. Isn't it good to keep it quiet and develop slowly? People are greedy. If you reveal the protagonist's inheritance as an emperor early, your cultivation level is still so low. Even if you go against the will of heaven, you won't be able to reach two or three realms. The protagonist has a little bit of intelligence, but Gou can't handle it well. I can't stand it anymore. I express my personal opinions and do not represent the public.

Didn't I promise not to cut the book and keep updating it? It's too baby, so I held it

Let me tell you something. There are many shortcomings in the content of your novel. The world view is collapsed and unclear, and the system levels are not clearly introduced. The role of the protagonist is pitifully small. The role of the supporting role is always added, weakening the presence of the protagonist. The supporting role and the minor role can be mentioned in one stroke. The appearance does not need to be written. One chapter describes the protagonist extensively, and the first ten chapters of a book describe the protagonist's personality. The environment, training techniques, and identity must strengthen the protagonist's presence in the early stage. Your article needs to be revised a lot. The main plot and branch plots must be clearly distinguished, just like fighting monsters and upgrading one by one. You should have never written a novel, and you are a new author. I am wondering how the editor signed a contract with you. The content has not been reviewed. It is obvious that I am trying to trick you. This book of yours will definitely be popular. I am not going to lie to you. There are some problems with the logical thinking of this book and lack of experience.

I feel like the writing is quite good. At first glance, I can tell it's not a new author, but the style is not quite the same as the starting point. Come on!

Just looking at the title and introduction, I have no idea. After all, they are all poorly written. ~Just accumulate experience🙂

Is this introduction a polished outline?

Subscribe to a chapter and cast a vote, come on!

I've read five chapters and it's pretty good. Some of the words are okay. I'll post them after I pay for them.

To be honest, I hope the author can change the opening chapter, after all, it is a bit too discouraging.

Opening a harem in the name of taking on apprentices

When scarlet light appears in the sky, the great spiritual catastrophe known as the annihilation of all living things comes The ancient fairy palace that once stood in the center of the universe and made all the emperors yearn to worship has long been destroyed When the last living being is swallowed by the demon, in the vast sea of ​​​​stars, no one knows the existence of such a universe

Overall, it can be seen that I have tried my best to write. But there is still a slow growth process, but book lovers will only read what they like. It is recommended to read more and learn more.

Once a person is cut, he is cut forever. There are only 0 and 100 times for everything. The author opens a new account.

How was it cut? ? ? ? Don't write anymore?

There are a lot of female protagonists. Once I finish reading, I estimate that there are 50 chapters dedicated to female protagonists.

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