Pokémon One Survival and Infection

Reasonable giving up is better than blind persistence. Some giving up is a pity, but persistence has no meaning.

Unknowingly, such a long time has passed, watching you come all the way. It is really not easy. From the beginning to the ending to the first comment, I have witnessed the growth of the protagonist and the efforts of the author. The author's achievement of 1 million words has undoubtedly dropped a blockbuster among pigeon authors. Without signing a contract, there are probably only a few people on the entire Internet who have persisted for so long. I hope the author will learn the writing skills well. With such perseverance, he will definitely succeed. Come on! Looking forward to your next work👏

I've tried to make her as wonderful as possible! ! ! ! Come on! Mutual encouragement!

I suggest that after writing this book, you can come up with some better ideas. It's not worth it to work so hard to generate electricity for love. Let's not mention the lack of money. After all you have written so much, you probably don't care that much. At least after signing the contract, a lot more people will be able to read your book.

Hey~~No one watched the 123rd day~~I'm so good~

Brother, your perseverance is amazing!

Make a comment: The diligence of the author of this article is worthy of praise. It satirizes those pigeon writers (I feel ashamed). The fact that he keeps writing is enough to give him 5 stars. Setting and plot: This article is based on Pokémon Adventures, the unpopular Pokémon game. The author has added some new ideas to the game's settings. Unfortunately, the portrayal of friendship and character creation in the article is not as good as in the game, and the emotional scenes are slightly deleted. Writing style: Slightly poor. Compared with the writing skills of other fans, it is recommended to omit some unnecessary modal particles to increase the beauty of the article. Recommendation: It is recommended that the plot progress be steady and steady, with a normal narrative, not too watery, and not too much information. If you learn more about writing skills, I believe you can become a top-notch fan. Comprehensive score: 5 points (out of 10)

If you need to entrust something, you can write it here (it can be anything) and also write down the reward and conditions (such as who you want to bring, what you want to give, etc.) In short, that's it

I saw your writer's assistant's post in the middle of the night. Come on, no matter what, just continue the dream of writing.

When did the protagonist Ibrahimovic have a boyfriend?

I am also a new author, and I just came across you on the assistant. I have to admire your spirit.

Very well written. Why can't I reward you? ? ? ? ? ?

Hey, it's a pity that I didn't sign the contract. From the writer's assistant, happy Children's Day.

Come on＼＼\\٩( 'ω' )و //／／

The perseverance is commendable, but the writing is really not interesting. Compared with Chapter 288, there is improvement in the first chapter, but the improvement is not obvious. You have to read it after finishing it. The writing is not smooth, let alone expectations, flaws and the like.

Well, I came here after seeing your post. Being able to write so many words is really impressive. However, after reading the first three chapters, there are many bad sentences. The most important thing is that many punctuation marks are used incorrectly. For example, some places can clearly be used as psychological descriptions, so why are they quoted in quotation marks? It's strange to talk to oneself. There are also some long sentences that are difficult to read. First, the word order is reversed. Second, some places that should be separated by commas are not separated. I think if you read it again after you finish coding, the situation will be much better. Come on, come on, let's encourage each other.

Come on, I looked through the back of your book and it is much better than the front. However, I suggest that you should work harder on the beginning of the next book. Now you have no shortage of experience in writing a long book. After signing the contract, it will be a new starting point. 😁

Awesome, I usually cut the deal if I don't sign a contract within 50,000 words. This is to generate electricity for love.

I just quit the starting point for a few months, how could you finish it... But it's the end!

Come and support us❤️❤️❤️

Some suggestions (open a post qwq) At present, the setting and plot seem to be good, but there are still some small issues that need to be mentioned. 1. In fact... The paragraph at the end of each chapter can be put into the "Writer's Words" area, so that the main text is only the "main text". 2. Check out the advertisements in the circle qwq 3. The writing... There is still room for improvement, huh... 4. By the way, can you not promote our book at the end of each chapter? Although I am very grateful to be promoted like this, it is very embarrassing...

Come on, I really admire you and wish you can reach the top as soon as possible.

Awesome, brother! I saw it from a writer's assistant. He is really the emperor of perseverance! I admire him!

It's a pity that I can't write the scene of the elf battle.

Come on! The next great god is you!

Damn, there's a guy next door who has completed 100,000 words.

Brother, how much is your collection now?