Swallowed Star: Fishing in the Myriad Heavens

It's so verbose. With such a golden finger, you still follow the process step by step, eat from the big pot, and don't work hard to develop (ー_ー)!!

It's too wordy and misses the point. It's just daily nonsense and the number of words is low. There is no sense of substitution. I feel nothing when reading it. Judging from the current chapter, I am not optimistic about this book. Personal opinion

After reading more than 20 chapters, I realized that the protagonist hadn't caught anything very good yet, so I knew that the early part of the book was basically broken. If you time-traveled to Luo Feng's school days, that would be fine. If you time-traveled to Luo Feng, you were ready to leave the earth. Are you still in love, jealous and fighting with children?

Is it okay not to become a disciple and not to compete in the genius battle? Those two things are too cool. I hope you can write a book about the bright starry sky of your own and don't imitate it.

Go write Romance City. Science fiction and fantasy are not suitable for you. It's really long-winded.

Author, are you serious about devouring the world and writing about the harem? The upper limit of the number of people on earth has been set. The vast majority of women found on earth and even in the universe are just burdens, or even vases. Regardless of whether they can match their ideals, the main character just wants to become stronger by getting together less and leaving more. One female protagonist feels a bit redundant, let alone three or four. In fact, I personally feel that the first heroine in Swallowing Starry Sky is Ai Chen and the second is Qian Shui. First of all, these two are very in line with human aesthetics. Secondly, they also have certain talents. In short, they have common topics and the same goals. It is very comfortable to get along with such heroines. Otherwise, the number of vases you raise is no more than rain and clouds. What kind of beauty is there in the universe? There are so many beautiful women, it is really unnecessary and inappropriate to have a harem.

Since it is a harem, we should include all the beauties who appear, otherwise why write about them? Should I save it for others?

There are too many routines, and it's not fun enough to write a cool novel. If you want to write a book with brains, the characters' IQs are too low. You can't even throw a golden finger at it, and it's even more awkward to write something that is about things rather than things. Enough

Is there any heroine with a sexy aunt named "Venina Bolenas"? If so, please send me the title of the book.

After comprehensive consideration, Luo Feng suggested that the author should change the previous paragraph. The country that swallows the stars is two different things from reality. The environment in the novel itself is one of jungle and the strong. There are only a few MPs in the world. No matter how much Luo Feng has face, it is difficult to invite MPs to protect his family. The country is actually a piece of sand. The weak ones have no effect, and the strong ones have their own differences. The selfishness of people cannot be compared with the reality that there are only a lot of ordinary people. The law can restrict people, even though there are almost everywhere people who take advantage of loopholes. What's more, in the novel, it is just a force. What's more, Luo Feng almost died at that time, which is barely a poisonous point. The key is that this is the beginning. If it is not well written, it will easily make people abandon the book.