Swallowed Star: Fishing in the Myriad Heavens

This is so verbose! With such a cheat-like advantage, why bother following the usual procedures, just eating from the same pot, and not putting in the effort to develop yourself? (ー_ー)!!

It's too verbose, doesn't get to the point, just filler words with daily ramblings. There's no sense of immersion, and it's not engaging to read. Based on the current chapters, I don't have high hopes for this book. This is just my personal opinion.

After reading more than twenty chapters, I realized that the protagonist hadn't hooked up anything of value yet, which told me that the early part of the book was basically ruined. If you were to travel back to when you were in school with Luo Feng, that would be one thing, but you've traveled back to a time when Luo Feng is already preparing to leave Earth, and you're still indulging in romance and getting jealous and fighting with kids.

Can I not take a master and not participate in the Genius Battle? Those who do both are doomed. I hope you write your own brilliant novel, and don't imitate others.

Go write romance/urban novels; science fiction and fantasy aren't for you—they're really verbose.

Dear author, are you serious about writing a harem story in Devouring the World? The upper limit of human beings on Earth is already set. Most women found on Earth or even in the universe are just burdens or even just decorative objects. Putting aside whether their ideals can match, the protagonist's desire to become stronger means that they are separated for long periods of time.

Since it's a harem, they should include all the beautiful women who appear in the story. Otherwise, why write about them? Are they just there to be used by others?

There are too many tropes. It's not satisfying enough to write a fast-paced, exciting story; the characters are too dim-witted to be intelligent; the plot devices are just there and they don't know how to use them; and writing things that are ambiguous or nonsensical makes it even more awkward. It's going to be tough.

Are there any novels where the female lead has a sexy aunt named "Venina Bolenas"? If so, please post the title.

Luo Feng, after careful consideration, still suggested the author revise the beginning. The nations in *Swallowing the Stars* are different from reality. The environment in the novel is inherently dog-eat-dog; there are only a handful of politicians worldwide, and even with Luo Feng's influence, it would be difficult to hire a politician to protect his family.