Conan: I Was Eavesdropped on My Heart by Hui Yuan Ai

Give us your opinion. It was pretty good at first, but there are too many private items in some recent chapters, which is a big no-no. Although I've ordered all of it, I've been skipping the most recent chapters. For a fanfic, your understanding of the characters in the original plot should not be printed out in long paragraphs to let readers know how you understand this character. Instead, let the readers have the same understanding as you through the characterization of the characters with your pen. In this way, even different opinions will not "disappoint" readers. After all, there are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand readers. What you wrote is a fanfic, not a movie review, nor a character analysis. Fans can create a second version of the character, and as long as it is well drawn, it won't make readers hate it. For example, the independent Xiao Lan in Coroner, Ai Dian in Snake Essence Disease, etc. You just chose the least favorite way. You can make the character analysis into a setting chapter and show it to interested readers, or you can put it in the comment area and pin it to the top. Instead of doing this in the middle of the plot in the main text, shoot half a chapter of text to do this. I hope the author will carefully consider this writing method. It interrupts the plot too much.

Eavesdropping finally took action against Conan 🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫

Aijiang

Haihara Ai

Author, new books require more updates. If you update more, there will be traffic

A wave of aid

Why is it that every picture you post at the back of your book is half the plot and half introducing the plot of Conan? Can you stop the water? You open another book. The quality of this book is getting worse and worse.

I haven't read it yet, but I still support it. Is it rare to have a fan with Haihara Ai as the heroine? Perhaps? It's because... There are too few good Conan fan stories about Xiao Ai as the heroine.

If there is any infringement, the property will be deleted

Um, wouldn't it be too perverted to be sweet with a woman with a body of seven or eight years old? 😃The more than a thousand episodes of Conan World have actually been at least three years in the past, but the plot time has only been one year. So the protagonist is Haihara Ai, so there's something wrong with her ability.

Can you please stop being irritated? I could still watch it at the beginning, but now it's pure water. There are a lot of paragraphs that have nothing to do with the plot. I don't know what I was watching after finishing it. If it doesn't work, it's better if you focus on the daily life of the protagonist and Xiao Ai than if you make a lot of useless paragraphs😓

Actually, there is a reason why the author's book has poor performance. For example, the title, and the cover. The title could be "Conan: How did she know?" ! 😏😏😏

The plot is okay and the writing is passable. The only drawback is that being an apprentice to Maori is such a bad entry point. This is too toxic for me.

Why do I feel so strongly about dog-licking after just reading the introduction? For those who have seen it, can you tell me what is the current situation of the protagonist?

Please recommend some novels about mourning heroines

Off the charts! Haihara Ai cheating researcher

Read this book and be eavesdropped by Mao Lilan

Come on, author, don't be a eunuch

Since you said you were starting a new book, half or more of each subsequent page is devoted to plot understanding and character introduction. Do you still want to write it well? Can you please lower the word count? I keep saying that your word count is bad, but you still don't change it? Is there any need to read on? Or has the author changed?

Can you write Chi Jin to death? I really am not worthy of Mingmei.

I have almost finished reading the entire book, so I can only share my opinion. The subject matter of the book and the fact that the heroine is Xiao Ai are very attractive to readers. However, there is too little content about Xiao Ai that readers want to read in the whole book, and there are too many complaints about it. The paid chapters are still a bit too much. The writing style can only be said to be okay and passable. I suggest the author reduce the amount of complaints in his heart. I can only say that if it is directed at Ai Jiang, I would not recommend it very much.

Does anyone know about this Conan fanfic? The male protagonist has a system. The system tells him that this is a world of zombies, and everyone wants to eat him. However, no one here has turned into a zombie. For this reason, they are considered to behave strangely. Miyano Shiho is his college classmate who studied in the United States and has a good impression of him.