Elf: I Really Can't Beat Pokémon.

Give the author some suggestions, remember to read them. In terms of plot, the relationship between the people and the elves is very good, which is worthy of approval, but the performance and source of strength are not very good. The performance of the top strength in front of them is not very good. The character is the first echelon in college, and the team's outward performance is very bad. There are only a few events that can be effectively linked to the protagonist's current strength. At the same time, the character is involved in many things that are inconsistent with his strength. In this case, the power of the legend has nothing to do with the character. It only highlights the insignificance of the character. Then, in order to become stronger, the elf becomes powerful inexplicably. Lucario's strength can be said to be reasonable, but the strength of the bear apprentice is really out of touch. There is not enough record and experience, there are few incidents, and there are few performances. Even if it is due to the battle tower, it is not satisfactory. As for the positioning of levels, although the top level is only a backbone, if it continues like this, then the kings will really be as numerous as dogs, and the meaning behind this positioning cannot be reflected at all. In this case, to be a king, you must have championship strength, and to be a champion, you must have quasi-legendary strength. Even if only one elf reaches this standard, then the existence of the four kings and the king above will increase the legendary strength of the champion due to the base problem, and it will not be able to highlight the importance of such strength. Now the plot In the early stage, the strength and status of the elders of martial arts bear masters can highlight the pressure of legendary power on the alliance. However, as the plot develops and people come into contact, the strength will inevitably rise. Even if the champion has only one legendary power, the pressure of the elders on the alliance will be flawed. Even if the alliance takes soft measures to reduce consumption, it is inevitable that the legendary power will depreciate. This is quite disconnected from the current exaggeration and performance of the king and above. My suggestion is to shift the focus to supporting the weaker elves without affecting the advancement of the plot. Before starting to explore the Jiu Continent, the protagonist's strength should be improved as a whole to be comprehensive. One junior king and two advanced top-level ones. Three new top-level ones are already abnormal for professional players. I hope it will not exceed this level. After all, the plot should be very long now, and the protagonist really cannot be invincible in the early stage. Similarly, I personally think that since fighting elves are used as the main force, the content of combat should be appropriately increased. Judging from the current performance, they are really Buddhist fighting. Personally speaking, I really don't get excited when they fight.

Author: How about some villains with normal IQs... I really like it. If the author doesn't know how to write villains, then don't write them. There are a lot of villains who have incomplete brain development and completely undeveloped cerebellum.

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What stands before you now is the top 16 of the Quartz League in 1999, the honorary trainer of the Orange League in 1999, the top 8 of the Johto League in 2002, the top 8 of the Fengyuan League in 2005, the 2006 Kanto region vs. The pioneer area dominance, the top 4 of the Sinnoh League in 2010, the top 8 of the Zhonghe League in 2013, the runner-up of the Kalos League in 2016, and the champion of the Alola League in 2019. The 2022 Galar Pokémon World Championship Champion is Ash Ketchum from Shinshin Town!

🙂 There are more and more typos, the sentences are not fluent, and the plot is weird. Don't you want to start a new book again?

The way he remained silent after the update, I suspect that the author may have become masculine and couldn't bear it anymore and unfortunately passed away🤔

The protagonist is too pretentious when it comes to this strange child puppet bear. Can he use one with a very different skill? The protagonist is going too far.

Gardevoir Sequel

Elf building, dragon suite building! If you have any opinions about the follow-up elves or have any tricks, you can post them on this floor. The elves are mainly fighting type, but of course other ones are also available. Thank you for your support!

Doesn't the protagonist want to open a game company? Raise a group of cursed dolls with sleepless properties and let them work hard from morning to night without sleeping, and their lives will be long.

Bang, change

La Lu La Si

Urban Pokémon fan fiction is tasteless

Come on, author. I hope to at least finish writing this book.

Lalulas should evolve into Eluredor, there is no need to follow the trend and write Gardevoir.

The protagonist's grandfather is very persistent. Only by defeating the elves can he conquer the initial elves. If the protagonist hadn't requested it later, he wouldn't have persisted for 5 minutes. Even though the gyms were all gone, he still didn't know how to adapt. Not every apprentice is like the protagonist.

Other ways for the protagonists of elf novels to make money: playing games, selling elf, gambling, doing tasks, and robbing are all good ways to make money and train the elf. The protagonist of this book has no money and actually wants to do a live broadcast, and he is a melee fighting spirit. If the protagonist wants to promote martial arts and open a martial arts gym, I can accept it, but this kind of behavior is like a monkey, kneeling and asking for money.

Speaking of personal feelings, this book is much worse than the one about hunting. Also, if you don't want to write about hunting anymore, please click the end button. Thank you🙏

Should we add some essence („ಡωಡ„)

I feel like there are very few fragments of the author describing Chinese martial arts? It seems that only Lucario has been running wildly on the road of martial arts. What about the other elves? Elves who are not of the fighting type should also be able to learn some martial arts knowledge, right? In addition, although wearing a bear can't use skills, can you learn Chinese martial arts? The protagonist, a human, can fight elves, so why can't a bear wearing a suit use Chinese martial arts to enhance himself? Obviously the protagonist has such a good background, and has more than ten years of experience in learning combo-style martial arts, and his family has cultivated fighting-type elves for generations, but it feels like there is very little mention of this part in the text, which feels like a waste!