The Emperor Sword: A Daring Journey to the Ends of the Earth

It will be released soon, but so far the portrayal of the protagonist is still not very likable. The so-called dark justice is mentioned many times in the article, but so far the premise of all the protagonist's righteous actions is for himself. Dark justice is also justice. If it is for justice or other purposes, then faith is especially important. Whether a character can be liked by the audience does not depend on the camp the character is in but the degree to which the character himself implements his own beliefs. For example, Ultraman Orb Jakura, if we talk about dark justice, Jakura is a typical example. No matter how he sinks in the darkness and is questioned, he always sticks to his beliefs. I don't particularly like Uub, on the contrary, I particularly like Jakura. In the first half of the author's novel, the main character is to survive. Yes, anyone who enters a strange and dangerous world probably thinks like this. Then the protagonist gradually gains strength and begins to introduce the word dark justice. Whether it is through the mouth of others or the protagonist himself, it has been mentioned many times, but just mentioning it does not have much effect. You have to show it, not only in behavior but also in inner beliefs. So far, the protagonist is an egoist in my eyes. I don't know why many people think that it is normal for people to be selfish after gaining power. People are a complex collection, and selfishness is actually only a part of people, or even a small part. Look at the majority of people in Kaiwu, including the protagonist, who were ordinary people before they gained power. The proud and showy feeling before Kaiwu gained power may be what most people feel. Just like when I was a child, I used to take a fire stick and jump around with my friends in the mountains and fields, imagining being a hero. I think this is the heart of most ordinary people. Ordinary people are not that unbearable. Ordinary people may not have that strong willpower and may have many shortcomings. But most ordinary people are people walking under the sun. They yearn for beauty. If given the opportunity, most people will also become the beauty of others. So, author, what kind of protagonist do you want to create? An ordinary person gradually becomes a real Kamen Rider? Or is it just the experience of an egoist growing into a big boss after gaining strength? I don't hope it's the latter, because what you wrote is about Kamen Rider. In my mind, Kamen Rider shouldn't be like this.

Not to mention other time-travelers, the normal form cannot outrun ordinary people. The emperor form is actually slower than ordinary people in swiping cards at full power. There are some basic methods to forcefully suppress the protagonist. You, you were forced to write about your previous relationship, and you had intermittent attacks. Also, Yu-Gi-Oh's cards require mental strength for ordinary people to control, and they are not something that the barking bastard like you wrote can just summon them casually. When the Three Illusion Gods come out, why don't you just create victory with light? If you can draw unlimited cards, why don't you just directly summon Dark Archmage, Black Magician, Blue Eyes White Dragon, and girls can only be summoned under certain conditions. I don't know which generation of master rules you are from. This is the duelist to defeat Yu-Gi-Oh 😅. Besides, it is written in the setting that only powerful duelists can use powerful cards. Powerful duelists control the elves, and the next level can merge with the elves, and the overlord directly maintains the world. It's okay to write interesting articles, but it's really not good to write original parts that are divorced from the main line. If you still want to write, I suggest you don't mess around. Use love to generate electricity, autobiography, if you don't want to write bad money, just pretend that I didn't say it, and you can get whatever you want. Actually, your bad life is just fine. It doesn't matter to me, just take some poison, but I don't know if Yu-Gi-Oh can stop coming to Huo Huo. I'm really unfamiliar. The main plot is well written. I suggest you don't get sick and write the main plot well. It will save you money.

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Other time-travelers? Check the author's mental status

It's my fault that this book sits on the shelf and gathers dust, but I won't apologize

This latest chapter is really poisonous, there are other time travelers? 666 I no longer have the motivation to read anymore. I say goodbye. Feel free to do whatever you want 🙂

Adding other time traveler settings to the second world is a big failure, and it also brings the book to its end. After all, everyone came here for the invincible gay sword. As a result, the entire belt was stolen at the beginning of the second world. And because the gay sword was invincible in this world, a time traveler came over and beat up the gay sword. Some time traveler who didn't know basic laws came up and casually summoned the three illusory gods to beat the gay sword. Then in the next chapter, he was seriously injured and fell into coma. I just gave up the book.

I can't stand it any longer, my fighting power has collapsed, the Emperor's Sword is not invincible even in Zhan Chihong, and it's not like the Shiting Emperor's Sword is gone, I'm laughing to death.

… Well, you threw my expectations on the ground, covered them with mud, and stamped them a few times before throwing them into the sewer, right?

Let me give you a summary of the good things in the L. L. World 1. Geass, various superpowers that vary from person to person. 2. Code, the current information about immortality is only "body storage" and "soul roaming", which is suspected to come from Mars (E: Ciao~) 3. Freya bombs, in this special world, are made by the Knight of the Square Table with the same real-life surname. Our flower growers are commonly known as "waist poles/mushroom bombs". 4. The Druid system is a superconducting analytical computing system installed on a special machine body. In reality, it is a scaled-down version of a super cloud computer. 5. In the absolute field, I feel that the energy shield developed by Asan female scientist Lakshata and installed on the "mirage tower" of the deformable body has not been developed to the extreme. 6. Uncle Orange, the former border uncle Jeremiah in the R2 era was really temperamental. It was a pity that he went back to grow oranges in the ending. 7. Sakurashi, a high-density new energy mine, has come here. It would be impossible to afford the fare of this trip without bringing some specialties back.