
When Gin Becomes a Reincarnation
当琴酒成为轮回者
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 591k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I was deceived by the title, and after reading the content, I felt that it should be called the main god space starting from Conan. Gin is almost never the primary protagonist. The idea is very good, but the writing and conception are poor. Some places that can be skipped are written in great detail, while many interesting places that could be expanded upon are skipped. Gin has too few scenes. At least seven or eight of the ten people who came in wanted to see Gin get into trouble.
I don't understand. When resources were tight in the early stage, I spent resources to find four reincarnations. Among them, except for gin, I chose them at random, and they said they were using waste? Or red flowers with green leaves? What kind of weird logic is this. You know it's waste, but you're still wasting resources to bring people in.
How to put it this way, this main god building flow is a bit old-fashioned, and the protagonist's IQ is not good. I start with Gin. He has strong work ability and has advantages in the early stage (such as weapons), but what should I do if the main god's space is poor and cannot keep up with his earning power? I also found a few pieces of waste to waste resources. Why not start a virtual game and create a god space under the name of a game? It would look good if the main god's construction flow also takes into account the behind-the-scenes flow. The protagonist should be the leader from the beginning. What's the point of this? It would be better to create several virtual personalities or use AI to pretend to be reincarnators. To be honest, I really think this protagonist is too flamboyant.
I hope I don't burn the bridge and kill the gin.
As the main god, the protagonist has to take care of everything. Is it you who is in the trial or the person chosen by you? From a God's perspective, it's not fun and it's a waste of time.
I won't say anything else. You create a backstreet girl and then ask Vodka to become an idol. I can't understand this kind of honey operation. Just to let him change his personality to satisfy his own evil taste.
Personally, I think we can drag the teenage gang of suicide seekers to "Spirited Away" to receive education (breaking into private homes, not being polite, liking suicide, school bullying, dragging others down, so many problems), and then let them team up with Conan to explore the world, and let Conan kill his companions because of his ubiquitous curiosity (let them accept the price of committing suicide, and of course they can be saved in the end) Come), this can help Conan get rid of the habit of being suspicious of someone he meets, and abandoning his girlfriend when encountering a case (as well as the self-righteousness of concealing his identity, American personal heroism, and naive social values). It can also hold Xiao Ai back and help him get rid of his phobia of black organizations and his pessimism that he will die at every turn.
Why does the protagonist have to leave the scene to take care of others? Will reincarnations die if no one takes them?
Why did the character change so quickly in the latest chapters? Being the main god, reincarnation, and nanny. This plot is really boring to watch.
There is a poisonous point in the first chapter of this book. The protagonist is sleeping in the school class. Mariko is about to wake him up. Then the protagonist is awakened. The teacher sees it and tells the protagonist to get out. The protagonist thinks about a lot of water words and then runs to the park. Then after looking around, he sees Mao Lilan and Shinichi. Mariko and Maorilan are classmates. Mariko is in class. Shinichi and Maorilan skip class and go to the park for a date. This is a bit poisonous.
Why not add a team function so that we can do tasks together as a team? Then Gin and Xiaolan's team became comrades and became friends in reality. Preventing Conan from entering the reincarnation space allows Conan to discover that Gin and Xiaolan are friends in reality.
The author probably has limited writing power and came up with several interesting plots, but he just started to arouse the reader's interest, and then it seemed that he couldn't continue writing, and then he ended in a very sloppy way... It's so frustrating, author, please hold on a little longer!
Gin, Akai Shuichi, Kyogoku Makoto, plus a vodka to take care of the chores and driving. Isn't this the beginning of Tenhu?
It doesn't work well to introduce poison. Gin + Samsara is pretty good. But it happens to be a behind-the-scenes flow. The behind-the-scenes flow has not been written yet. The writing is very streamlined. I personally feel that the copy does not even have an outline. The idea is good, but the quality is not good.
I think the redemption list can add a little plot introduction about the world.
The main theme is good, but the writing style is not good. It is a self-written article without any logic, so everyone can just watch it and enjoy it.
Of course I would choose the murderer! He has a plan and the ability to execute, and he has quite a few inhuman talents! The roller coaster girl's god-level skills, the art museum director's extraordinary physical strength... Don't choose to waste it.
You wouldn't have achieved such results if you just let gin and wine flow to the heavens.