Chat Group Started from Baolian Lantern

It's too watery. It's all nonsense dialogue between the group members, the plot content is incoherent, and the plot development of all the members is indifferent and painful to watch. I hope the author can come up with more plot content and write less meaningless dialogue.

I think the protagonist doesn't want to be an adult at all, just a sand...🙂🙂

When I see so-called spoilers pretending to be a big boss, I just stop watching them. They are all thoughtful and not set procedures. Everything changes if they make a slight change. How can you pretend? Purely disgusting

How should I put it, the creativity of this book is quite good. It's just that the updates are too slow and the plot is lagging. The dialogues of some characters are also too cumbersome, and it seems like they are just trying to make up the word count. Of course these are minor issues. The biggest problem is that updates are too slow! It was exciting to watch at first, but slowly, the enthusiasm dropped. By now, I have a kind of mentality of whether I can watch it or not. 😳

Should it be hard or not, should it be soft or not? You are terrible at chat writing. You should increase the space and write something more exciting, such as how to defeat King Chuang and defeat the Qing Dynasty. If you don't describe the emperor as more powerful, you won't write about such obvious cool things. The whole article is just a chat group chat topic. Boring

I just saw Li**'s character collapse and couldn't stand it any longer. It was a novel that successfully made me abandon the book after reading just one chapter.

Let me give you a suggestion, author. Don't write such word-count as group chat. Also, the selection of candidates for the group is a bit messy, such as the one you wrote about Lingjian Mountain King Wu. Don't write about such small anime characters. Many people don't know about them and they don't have a sense of empathy. There is also the Sun Wukong who has been suppressed for hundreds of years before he can be released. He can't participate in the group's activities and tasks. Why write such a character? There are also group tasks that could have been put to good use, but as a result, what you wrote... Should have more group tasks. For example, killing the giant monster in Nanshan or something like that, that kind of personal mission has more personal space. And that Zhang Wuji is not kind but a charlatan. Wu Qihua's version of Zhang Wuji is kind and innocent, but Jet Li's version is full of domineering and arrogant. You chose Su Youpeng's version, which is just taller but not IQ or EQ.

There's something really wrong with this electric shock. If you don't agree with someone, you'll shock someone with electric shock. That's the first chapter. According to Sun Wukong's temperament, you ride on his head and control him. That's a deadly feud. You want to take advantage of the second dimension and do it like this. The opening has a dark style.

Extremely poisonous! ! ! ! ! Huge water! ! ! Chapter 16 Death from Poison

It's too watery. The author is pouring water like crazy. I don't know when it will explode.

It feels like this book has no main plot. Goldfinger Chat Group Then this book is really where the people in the chat group are chatting. Just a little plot. Other people's chat groups are either about traveling through time to gain other people's heritage or to highlight the current world. For example, the chat group for people traveling through the heavens highlights the main storyline of the dangers of heaven and adds a golden finger subsidy to add a little ambiguity. Then I read this book for so long that I still don't know what the plot line of the Lotus Lantern is!

I really couldn't stand it anymore, so I slipped away.

The subject matter is good, but I feel like the writing is broken. There is too little plot for the protagonist, the time flow rate in the main world is unknown, the strength of the protagonist is unclear, and there are too many repetitive plots. Overall, the theme ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐plot⭐⭐⭐

Verbal prose to persuade someone to quit

Is there no Journey to the West, Gu Long, or Jin Yong in Wang Duoyu's world?

Speaking of this lotus lantern, we have to mention Shui Changdong, a person who has always hated himself in life.

I saw that it was more than eighty chapters now. The protagonist was born, and I understood that they did not notify Yang Jian. Later, a maid took care of him. When I looked over, I saw the protagonist just go up to pinch his face and rub his hair. Forget it, I thought it would change later and the result was still the same. There was so much water in the chat group. I am afraid you have misunderstood the character of the maid now. The maid treated the protagonist (Prince of Dragon Palace) like this. Girl, it doesn't matter if she doesn't have a big background. Now I am following the protagonist to attend a wedding banquet among the group members. As a result, the group members refused to talk to each other and asked the protagonist to come. The protagonist has short hands and has difficulty eating the food on the table. The maid won't let the protagonist eat but teased the protagonist. I want to ask the author, are you writing about the maid or the protagonist's mother? Give it up. This book is too useless. The word "water" is used in many places and the characters are messed up.

I read a little bit about Yang Jian Ao. It turns out that I was wrong. I have never read such a bad book.

There is no eunuch yet. This novel is nothing but nonsense. If you cut out the nonsense, there will be less than a hundred chapters left. Don't read it. It's just a water king.

The title of this book is Lotus Lantern. The plot has nothing to do with the world of Lotus Lantern. It just writes about the third princess and her aunt Yang Chan.

I feel relieved when I see so many people criticizing the author. What he wrote is really a mental poison. The novel is not just water, it is also transformed into something magical.

Water, poison, stupid, more words are a waste of my saliva.

It feels like the protagonist always looks aloof and punishes members of the group at every turn. Who dares to speak in the group after a long time. It's like there is this high-ranking person in the real world who bosses everyone around. How annoying this kind of person is. I feel like I can't mingle with the group members and end up being isolated. If I met such a person in a real group, I would have scolded him a long time ago. Who is still in the group?

Author, can you please stop writing (or write less) that Wang Wu or other group members are crazy? I feel like there is something wrong with my head! The most serious thing is Wang Wu's lunacy! I feel like you are so wet that I can't stand it anymore! She can give you dozens of words in one sentence! It's normal to talk just after we started chatting. How did you become a psychopath? It's okay to be crazy occasionally, but don't be like Wang Wu, okay? Or I want to watch the main world and use the normal writing style of the Lotus Lantern World! , Stop writing about her! After all, that world is full of big guys. If his writing style is not normal, will he be able to survive into the future? That's so nonsense! Anyway, I really hate the crazy things Wang Wu says to everyone. In one sentence, there are more than ten chapters. I hate such neurotic words. It's also very annoying and repetitive. It feels really good! There are many chapters on the water, all possible!

It's so poisonous that I'm about to vomit. The dignified Emperor Hongwu is written as a plotter to usurp the throne. It's disgusting. It's so disgusting that even Cha Liangyong didn't dare to write it like this.

Zhu Yuanzhang can be said to be the most upright founding emperor, but in the author's writing, he has usurped the throne. Isn't this just the Manchu style to kill the Ming Dynasty?

Keep talking nonsense bbb, it's too watery, the author's theme is not pig's feet, soaring into the sky with the help of chat groups. The topic is the daily nonsense of the chat group.

Recently I like to read novels about chat groups. But judging from the introduction, it is probably Hei Xiaoyan who licked Nalan Yanran again. So I decisively gave up the book

When I saw the Three Holy Mothers, I thought I would change the myth, but in the end, this is it? ? ? Forget about the water, I can tolerate the running accounts. At first, I said that Xianfanlian had a conspiracy, but in the end, I watched San Shengsheng and Liu Yanchang... Fed a big mouthful of shit to the living people. If it weren't for the negative review, I would give you 1 point out of 100.

I just saw that Zhang Wuji founded the Ming Dynasty and was the usurper Zhu Yuanzhang? Tsk tsk, Lao Zhu's family is the most upright. I wouldn't even dare to write this if I check the package. Slipping away