Spiritual Qi Revival: My School Beauty Goes on a Killing Spree!

The first few chapters were okay, the spiritual energy and other abilities were attractive, but after reading more than ten chapters, neither the heroine nor the heroine had a formal understanding of the martial arts. It was really boring, and the plot did not advance at all. It feels like Dou Wu to me. In a world where humans are very dangerous, Tang San ended up entering another "academy" to train.

Let me tell you a few words 1. The protagonist's time is simply in a compressed package format 2. Guo Jia is simply a big colander, anyone can get in 3. In fact, many people don't like the idea of a clone, and think it is a poisonous point (I have discussed it with a few friends, and it's very Most people don't like this) 4. The emotional line is too plain. The author said that the heroine is too strong. In fact, there are countless examples in other novels. You can learn from it. Since the heroine came out, the role of other female characters has been greatly reduced, especially Xia Zhu, who has been marginalized. 5. Come on

To be honest, the plot is old-fashioned and vulgar, and the protagonist has an inappropriate personality. Everyone is a diaosi when they should be a diaosi, and the protagonist is a diaosi at all times. Nothing has happened between the protagonist and the heroine, and the heroine is a best friend who has never met. Tuan started to say that he had never seen the heroine so happy before. He only met her twice in total, and nothing happened when they met. It was very abrupt. It was because the author forcibly arranged the two of them together. It was moderately uncomfortable. If you want to see it, you can watch it.

The clone has independent consciousness, why can't he bear to take it back? It's extremely poisonous.

Do you want to study "The Naming of Night"? It is said that Zhuzi and the editor wrote this book after carefully studying the market.

The content and plot are okay, but the lines and actions of the fans are very awkward to watch. There are too many names of passers-by that have the same name as other people's works, and there are too many jokes. It's OK in moderation, but I feel disgusted when I see this kind of thing every now and then. I hope the author can create more of his own, so that innovation can go further 🙏🙏🙏

The heroine always wears cool clothes to give benefits to passers-by No man likes his wife's skin to be seen by others If you do it a few more times, I can't stand it The villains are all from ten years ago The male protagonist's behavior is chaotic and crazy The official and the consortium are incompetent The plot is complicated, the spiritual revival of entertainment city soldier king is a little bit divine? What on earth do you want to write? There are many questions if you think about it If it is just a slap in the face, just pretend I didn't say it But I'm really angry, it could be a good book

The setting is good, but the protagonist's personality is not outstanding. This diligent character is not suitable for this kind of writing. The old author's thinking cannot be changed.

The author is very real. A new author only deserves fast food and easy-to-understand book titles🐶

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