Resurrection of Spirit: My School Beauty Is Going Crazy!

The heroine always wears cool clothes to give benefits to passers-by No man likes his wife's skin to be seen by others If you do it a few more times, I can't stand it The villains are all from ten years ago The male protagonist's behavior is chaotic and crazy The official and the consortium are incompetent The plot is complicated, the spiritual revival of entertainment city soldier king is a little bit divine? What on earth do you want to write? There are many questions if you think about it If it is just a slap in the face, just pretend I didn't say it But I'm really angry, it could be a good book

You update it, why don't you update it!

The first few chapters were okay, the spiritual energy and other abilities were attractive, but after reading more than ten chapters, neither the heroine nor the heroine had a formal understanding of the martial arts. It was really boring, and the plot did not advance at all. It feels like Dou Wu to me. In a world where humans are very dangerous, Tang San ended up entering another "academy" to train.

Let me tell you a few words 1. The protagonist's time is simply in a compressed package format 2. Guo Jia is simply a big colander, anyone can get in 3. In fact, many people don't like the idea of a clone, and think it is a poisonous point (I have discussed it with a few friends, and it's very Most people don't like this) 4. The emotional line is too plain. The author said that the heroine is too strong. In fact, there are countless examples in other novels. You can learn from it. Since the heroine came out, the role of other female characters has been greatly reduced, especially Xia Zhu, who has been marginalized. 5. Come on

To be honest, the plot is old-fashioned and vulgar, and the protagonist has an inappropriate personality. Everyone is a diaosi when they should be a diaosi, and the protagonist is a diaosi at all times. Nothing has happened between the protagonist and the heroine, and the heroine is a best friend who has never met. Tuan started to say that he had never seen the heroine so happy before. He only met her twice in total, and nothing happened when they met. It was very abrupt. It was because the author forcibly arranged the two of them together. It was moderately uncomfortable. If you want to see it, you can watch it.

The clone has independent consciousness, why can't he bear to take it back? It's extremely poisonous.

The content and plot are okay, but the lines and actions of the fans are very awkward to watch. There are too many names of passers-by that have the same name as other people's works, and there are too many jokes. It's OK in moderation, but I feel disgusted when I see this kind of thing every now and then. I hope the author can create more of his own, so that innovation can go further 🙏🙏🙏

Do you want to study "The Naming of Night"? It is said that Zhuzi and the editor wrote this book after carefully studying the market.

The author is very real. A new author only deserves fast food and easy-to-understand book titles🐶

The setting is good, but the protagonist's personality is not outstanding. This diligent character is not suitable for this kind of writing. The old author's thinking cannot be changed.

It can be seen that the villain's IQ is also there. Although the title of the book is indeed a bit bad, the content is still good.

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I feel like this book is a bit too old, like it was written 10 years ago

After reading Chapter 79, here is a brief comment based on my personal opinions on the first 79 chapters Urban Supernatural is quite to my liking, and the author's writing skills are also good. Even in the pretentious parts, I can see that the author wants to break out of the routine. I hope it can be maintained and not too cliché. It has been a long time since I saw an Urban Supernatural that I can watch. I am still a fan of Sword and Sword games, so I recommend it I don't know I wonder how long it will take for the heroine to stop being the background. I remember the pain of a certain Kaneki paddling for a whole season. When reading novels and anime, I am particularly afraid of the protagonist having a very strong character at the beginning and being left in the cold. I like the male and female protagonists to have more interactions

That's right. Author, you'd better change the title and introduction. Nowadays, many people don't want to click in when they see something like this. I'm just bored and just browse the comment area, otherwise I will leave. So the title and introduction are really important. Finally, come on.

Use the writing method of ten years ago to write the feeling of the last century

The first 100 chapters were quite interesting, but later on I felt that the people around the protagonist were a little brainless. The heroine actually stood up for a woman he didn't know around the protagonist. There was also something wrong with Lin Qianer's background. Xiao Junzhu's identity made the protagonist eat instant noodles every day. I hope the author will not force the plot on the people around the protagonist. It was too blunt. The perspective of the protagonist also decreased a lot after 100 chapters.

Really, I would rather you call her Bat Girl than Bu Qingyun. When I saw this name, all I could think of was: Don't come over here!

There is something wrong with this timeline. When I read Chapter 85, a lot of things happened and my level improved a lot, but only three or four days have passed. . . Is this reasonable? ? ? So strong in three or four days? ? ?

I have raised many books to death, and this is the first time I have raised them to life.

The part about joining the martial arts club was too embarrassing.

I would like to ask how the rest of the writing goes. I have read about 50 chapters in the past two days. I fell in love with the author's comments. I feel that the author is very thoughtful, but as the author said before, he writes very straightforwardly because he is not a master, but I also feel that the author wants to write better. The things he writes in the middle feel very strange, and are not up to the level mentioned by the author himself. On the contrary, basically every chapter contains some embarrassing and clichéd content, and small poisonous points appear one after another. I don't know whether the author realized those words after writing these plots, or whether he understood them from the beginning but couldn't write the effect he wanted to achieve. New authors should be more steady. There are still many people who like this kind of subject matter. They should put more effort into creating characters that are popular with readers and polishing the plot, instead of making up the plot at will without any brain. For example, the explanation of face blindness. Being face blind as a registrar is really full of flaws (of course I haven't seen the back part. If it is just pretending, then I apologize to the author). In short, I still hope to see the author's progress in the later chapters. There is still a lot of room for improvement for new authors to have this kind of insight.

The slight nonsense about daily life really hit me. Come on💪

Today I saw that the review I wrote for an hour last night was gone. What the hell

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Can you please continue to update? It's very well written.

This book is actually quite well written. The content written in the front is very frequent, and the heroine's character is very rich. Some of the stories between the protagonist and other people are very interesting, and the stories between the protagonist and the heroine are also very interesting. However, in the later part of the book, the opportunities for the heroine to appear are a little less, and it takes a long time for the heroine to break through the four mirrors. As a result, there is no story between the hero and the heroine. Later, the hero travels through time. It took too long to go to other worlds, and it felt a bit off the main line. But overall, the novel was really well written, and the image of the heroine was also very attractive. It's a pity that it was stopped. It's a pity that I didn't return to the world where the protagonist is, and it's also a pity that there was no ending between the hero and the heroine. If possible, I hope the author will make a sequel. The writing is really good and very imaginative. {"NickName":"Hexagon Street","UserId":303496802}

There is one thing I always want to say, don't be too dramatic. This is quite uncomfortable to watch. Let me tell you what I remember. I remember that in the previous chapter, there was a chapter that said "xxx that appeared in the first chapter" and some similar expressions. It was really too dramatic and felt uncomfortable. It would be much more comfortable to use "xxx that I met a few days ago" or a more prominent coordinate memory point in the novel world to recall this kind of expression. There are also some protagonists who always use "xx novel templates", "xx novel plots" and the like, which are a bit ridiculous, but this is barely acceptable. After all, the protagonist has traveled through time and has such psychological activities, which is reasonable. Of course, I personally don't like this kind of plot. Maybe some readers like this kind of plot? It depends on the author how you grasp it. My suggestion is to use less. After all, having this kind of plot is not a highlight, but it is a poisonous point for readers with my taste. Also, come on, it feels pretty good to see the chapter on the shelf. Although I am a free prostitute, I still support the newcomers.