Harry Potter: Charlie's Candy Factory

I finally came across an interesting book. Stop being a eunuch. Damn it

Very, very good! There are many original plots that are reasonable and exciting. I read it in two days in one go. Some people think it is weak, but I think it is quite delicate and exciting. I am very happy to read it! I hope you will continue to work hard!

Just, there is a question. Every house elf is a natural master of magic. Will there be any problems if the protagonist liberates the house elves? () The reason why the house elves can be enslaved is because of the war won by the previous wizards.

After reading the synopsis, I didn't want to read it. The fact of liberating the house elves gave me the feeling that the mistakes the current Jingri said were made by their predecessors and had nothing to do with the current people.

Do you also open a chocolate factory?

Reminds me of a chocolate factory movie

After reading Chapter 34, I couldn't help but want to comment. This book is actually pretty good for a fanfic. The writing is good, but the protagonist is a bit too one-sided and taken for granted. One is a description of house elves. As ancient wizards defeated the enslaved race, they were hostile to humans before, so they took it for granted to unshackle them. You know that desire is endless. The protagonist is fine when he is alive, but what if he dies? Could the house elf want more? Would he want to enslave humans in turn? I don't believe that so many people in the wizarding world have not noticed how special house elves are. Even Hogwarts has taken in so many of them. Dumbledore must have known the value of this. However, it is impossible to liberate them from a human standpoint. It seems that the protagonist is taking it for granted. You can treat them well or not, even if you want to pay them, but you really shouldn't be able to untie their shackles so easily. Another point is about Petunia's family's emotional description of Harry. I started reading it in 2000 and have been following it. At that time, I could read every book more than ten times. I think it is really biased to simply write that they hate Harry. The Petunia family's emotions towards Harry are undoubtedly complicated, including disgust, fear, and fear, but they also have love. Let's talk about Petunia first. She is yearning for magic, but she has no talent in this area. She wrote a letter and wanted to go to Hogwarts but was rejected. Plus, Lily would talk about the magical world when she came back every holiday. Her jealousy of Lily became deeper and deeper. But it can't be said that she doesn't love Lily, otherwise she wouldn't have invited Lily to James when they were engaged. It was just that they had a falling out at that time, so that they became estranged later, but even so, she still adopted Harry. It cannot be said that the way they treated Harry later was correct, but simply describing it as hatred would be biased. You must know that raising a child is not easy, not to mention whether there is any subsidy (mostly there is not, at least not in the original article, but Dumbledore left a letter and they adopted it). Even if there is a so-called subsidy, the money and energy spent on raising a child will far exceed it. Anyone who has taken care of children knows how noisy and annoying children can be before they are three or five years old. It is a trivial matter to make noises and cry in the middle of the night, let alone Harry who still has magical talents. When he was a child, he was unconscious and had no world view. When there was a magic riot, Petunia's family was unlucky, but this also brought Harry to such an old age. If you look at it from the perspective of Petunia's family, it is not incomprehensible that if a person puts his family in danger and is himself in some danger (even if he does not mean to do so), he will be disgusted and defensive about Harry to the point of locking him up. Again, these actions cannot be said to be right, but they cannot be viewed in isolation. It is wrong to simply think that they are evil and hate Harry. As Petunia said to Harry later, she also lost her sister. Her emotions towards Harry were complicated. The jealousy of her sister, the sadness of her sister's death, the fear of magic, and the guilt of treating her sister were all transferred to Harry. And what Dursley said, he hates Harry mostly because of James... Coupled with his wife's complicated emotions towards Harry and her fear of magic, it's not surprising. But don't forget, when Hagrid broke in at the reef hut, he was still protecting him. In front of Harry, and for the child of the person who had humiliated him (he thought so anyway, after all, he didn't understand the magical world, this misunderstanding and rift has always existed), but it is also the child of his wife's sister, he is also very complicated. Dali felt that he had nothing to say, and as a child he had no values, and his parents had treated Harry like that since he was a child, so he would naturally be influenced to bully Harry (although it was excessive), but he reconciled when he grew up, and he also loved Harry. Instead of believing that they all hate Harry, and that the following are all Rowling's whitewashing, I still want to believe in the fairy tales I read and believed when I was a child. They love Harry, but their fear of death and magic, and their feelings for Harry's parents, prevent them from expressing it properly.

Damn, author, you said the article might be uncomfortable. I thought you were doing some Khorne Slaanesh stuff. Good guy, now a story about one person dedicated to relieving the suffering of a group of people needs to be warned.

I was initially persuaded to quit it several times when I saw the name, but in the end, I strongly recommended it. I read two chapters to understand it. I won't know it until I read it. I was shocked at first glance. It's rare and very good. It's very attractive. Different HP fans have written different stories. By the way, short and weak, how can one word describe you. You can write more. Looking forward to the next chapter. By the way, raise them first, then kill them when you are fat.

After reading so many book reviews, to be honest, this book surprised me the most. Is it a question about whether house elves should be liberated? Dear readers, do you still remember the Maoist concepts you learned when you were in school? Do you still remember how steel is made? Even if life is full of mediocrity, at least there must be light deep inside, right? Or are you all the Third Hokage and Danzo? If the house elves really posed a threat to humans or even became enemies of humans, they could exterminate their species. There is no need to be so enslaved

So far, everything has been perfect. I took the initiative to vote. However, for me, the only bad point is the liberation of house elves. The war and status that the predecessors spent their lives and blood to win. What qualifications do you have to cancel it? You are a typical dove. You have nothing to do when you are full.

Let me tell you my opinion on the situation of house elves attacking humans. First of all, there is an extremely obvious gap in terms of number of people. The number of wizards is completely disproportionate to that of house elves, and their reproduction rate is extremely low. Even if an elf can beat two ordinary wizards, there is no way he can beat them. Not to mention the likes of Aurors, professional combat wizards. Another point is that after breaking away from humans, house elves are a separate magical race. At that time, he will be subject to more than just human constraints. Magical races, whether they are centaurs, elves, or other intelligent races, will also restrict each other. Under such circumstances, I think it is unlikely that elves will counterattack humans. Of course, just personal opinion. We still support everyone to put forward different opinions.

The writing is quite good, but why the protagonist kills people because of house elves is of different races. For example, would you kill someone for a talking dog? Butt is crooked

Now that you have changed your characters like this, why not just let Malfoy and Harry be good friends and good rivals? If not for family reasons, the original Malfoy could have been a good wizard, and the protagonist is added as an additional factor. Since you also intend to change Malfoy's life, then it would not be a bad idea to form a different Harry team. Also, in the original book, Harry has a very high wizarding talent. Are you cheating on Malfoy or not on Harry? In the original book, he is much stronger than Hermione, but the movie depicts Hermione too well. Each of the protagonists has a role, but every time it is saved, it is Harry. Wizards do not become great wizards just by memorizing books and studying. They are all lacking in courage, talent and will. Otherwise, the greatest wizards are all from Hufflepuff House. In the Harry Potter books, among the greatest wizards who have ever appeared, almost none of them did not rely on talent. Even learning forbidden arts also requires talent endorsement. The original Harry Potter was destined to be the one to kill the Dark Lord, not only because he was born a few minutes longer than Neville, not only because of the prophecy and the final Horcrux, but the most important reason is that Harry Potter himself has the elements of a great wizard, and he is the only living person who has collected the Three Holy Artifacts.

I like it so much that I ordered the latest one in one go! The combination of Charlie's Chocolate Factory and HP has a unique flavor. Personally speaking, because the Chocolate Factory has some wonderful candy settings, I am also looking forward to the wonderful candies imagined by the author. I even think "what, that's it" (no other meaning haha) when comparing it. After all, in my memory, the original work has some candies that I can never finish. As for me, I actually want to see some interesting "abolition" plots, especially in this combination of fan fiction. It feels like the plot is about to describe the internal environment of the factory in detail. Although the environment was not reflected in the recruitment process, I am looking forward to seeing a dreamy scene like the original. I am curious what kind of scene you think it will be like and whether you have any wonderful candy ideas? I want to see prank candies hahaha. When I eat them, I don't know that I will fart after eating them🌝. Balloon candies are also good. They look like balloons and taste like a soft skin on the outside with mint filling inside. They will slowly float up after eating them (distance is inversely proportional to weight)

I watched the anime once when I was a kid, and I don't know if you have seen Super Beast Arms. I don't remember the specifics. I just remember that the yellow-skinned man was a slave to the blue-skinned man at first. Later, the protagonist liberated the blue-skinned man and allowed yellow and blue to coexist peacefully. But later, the blue-skinned man became more and more powerful, and in turn he slaved the yellow-skinned man. So I feel that the protagonist is similar to the protagonist in Super Beast. Will a similar situation happen after liberating the elves? The protagonist can guarantee peaceful coexistence within three generations. What about after three generations?

Suddenly I thought that it would be interesting to use Hermione as the heroine - the daughter of a dentist who doesn't eat sugar falls in love with the owner of a candy factory, which has a feeling of NTR (and it matches the original work of the chocolate factory perfectly, Willy Wonka is also the son of a dentist) They can also free the elves together

Wow, I thought it was interesting when I read the introduction, but when I saw that it hadn't been updated in a year, I felt quite sad.

You can tell him to quit just by looking at his name. The male members of the Black family are all named after stars. For example, Sirius, Arcturus Black is Arcturus, Orion Black is Orion, and Regulus Black is Leo.

Is the non-positive description of the Dursleys considered poisonous? Why on earth are there so many people these days suddenly clearing the Dursleys' names? I think Harry Potter still hates this family. Even after Harry Potter reconciled with them, he still hates them.

It is impossible to evolve peacefully by giving normal rights to elves. Let elves hold grievance meetings and criticize their masters. All people who raise elves will be punished. Give elves human rights. A revolution without bloodshed is a weak assumption. If you want to write it as a fairy tale, don't write it deeply. If you want to write about revolution, don't treat it as a fairy tale. It doesn't matter whether someone is raped or not, the key is to have the courage to betray one's own class

Except for the bit about house elves, everything else is really good. I haven't seen a good hp fan for a long time. Recently, I have been writing about simulators and there are very few good ones. I didn't have much to read so I looked for hp fan. This one is very good.

Come on, brother! This book is really good, keep it up and you will be a superstar! In terms of writing and plot, it ranks among the top seven fics I've read! If you stay steady in the later stage and don't collapse, we will win! ! ! I'm already at the bottom of a trap. Please fill in the hole, please.

It's very well written, and there aren't many novels with this kind of writing on the Internet these days.

There won't be any more updates It's a pity. Although it's a bit ooc and awkward in some places, the setting and characters are still very interesting.

I haven't read it yet, but your introduction is really good.

One thing to say, this fanfic is one of the highest level among the HP fanfics I have read, but there are too few of them. Please keep updating.

I read it when I was in school in 2022, and I have been working for two years now. I suddenly remembered this fanfic for those who like candy, and I didn't want to stop reading it. Alas, as expected, regret always runs through life 😐

Come on, I just finished watching it, it was very interesting.

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