Global Cataclysm: I Have a Training Simulator

When I first saw it, I just came here for the event. After participating, I read the book and it felt surprisingly good. I used the simulator to experience the post-apocalyptic world at first. In fact, it felt like myself in the future, except that I can die infinitely, and then I can gain skills every time, and then use the best of them to transform into reality. So far, I haven't found anything that readers don't like. It's just a guide for the time being and will be determined later. Then the heroine should not have appeared. The name Qiaoqiao has a certain possibility; Ningxiang, this character verified what Zhang Wuji's mother said, don't believe what beautiful women say. By the way, there is something wrong with that black cat. I don't know if it is the author's foreshadowing. It can be on par with or even exceed the protagonist's cultivation speed. You know, the protagonist has already opened two golden legends, which are just a little bit ahead. I don't believe there are no tricks. It depends on the author's arrangements later. Also, I think most of the equipment can be used normally. Will fighter jets, tanks, and missiles appear later? There won't be some inexplicable electronic and other equipment that cannot be used, and only people with super powers can fight, right? I'll look at it later and wait for the update, it seems to be OK.

I would like to give some advice to the author. First, the story you wrote about the time-traveling simulator city. The most terrifying thing about it is that a group of forces suddenly appear. They are ridiculously strong and suppress the protagonist before the spiritual energy is revived. (This is a poisonous point) This is not advisable. Second, you have various talents every time you simulate, and your growth power is extremely powerful. You can get practice points by killing enemies in real-life simulations. You must make yourself strong and powerful. Instead of weakening the protagonist over and over again (otherwise the crowd will leave after just a few pictures), thirdly, if the protagonist is too powerful, he should write about the starry sky or the invasion of the abyss, to unite the spherical human beings to fight together. Fourthly, write less messy articles that are directed at you and that at you. The reason is that everyone is too tired from work, is sometimes excluded by colleagues and leaders, is not in a good mood, and just wants to read some cool articles, or articles that are less poisonous. I wish the writer to write well, accept the opinions of readers, and find and solve problems in them.

After a brief look, let's talk about some questions. It's a bit straightforward, don't be surprised. 1. The simulation is too dense and the number of words accounts for too much. It is easy to write like this, but the number of words is too high. Although the subject of simulators is still very popular now, it has begun to enter the middle and late stages. The number of works is increasing and the market is saturated. Readers will definitely give priority to those with more practical content and abandon those with too much water. This is not the world view you are familiar with such as Journey to the West. Each piece should be based on practical information 2. Book title and catalog issues If the title of the book can be changed, please change it to a more normal name. There are many old readers here, and the effect of the book title is quite gratifying. The table of contents should not be too headline-driven or too straightforward. Old readers can understand the content at a glance. Unless the content is of high quality, it will be difficult to retain readers. 3. Dialogue Problems Dialogue is sometimes too straightforward, and words with a modern and unconventional style such as "fuck" should be used as little as possible, otherwise it will appear too naive, unseen in the world, and affect the senses. 4. The protagonist's sense of presence In your book, I found that the protagonist's sense of presence is very low, and it is all occupied by the simulation part. Also, your protagonist's character is not very identifiable. There are too many such protagonists, which makes it difficult to remember. Add some little features. 5. Simulation template It feels no different from other simulation flow book templates. This is the biggest failure, otherwise it will be difficult for people to remember if everyone is similar. The content is not meant to be judged. I suggest you take a look at "Monkey King's Life Simulator" to see how they limit the number of simulations and arrange the simulation time.

Since the reopening of simulators became popular, there have been a lot of simulator novels like this. This article is about Reiki Recovery + Simulator. Let's talk about this type of novel. In the novel, the simulator provides certain precognitive abilities and talent rewards to the protagonist. The simulator in this novel also provides other rewards: cultivation and skills. This cannot but be mentioned as a common problem in simulator novels: too many rewards and too fast upgrades. Different from ordinary system flow, general system flow novels require tasks or limited draws to obtain rewards, but the simulator is just free. Therefore, if you want the novel to be readable, you must reasonably arrange the reward mechanism and simulation refresh time of the simulator. The simulator of this book is once an hour, and once a day Drawing a talent is a series where you basically don't have to do anything, and you will be guaranteed to become a god. For the tens of thousands of words currently, the simulator takes up a lot of space, and the readability is really not high. There are too many rewards, and the upgrade is too fast. It will be boring after reading for a long time. I don't know if there will be more attractive content later. The opening chapter is not bad. Wearing clothes solves the problem of "looking for relatives", but I personally feel that the setting of using beasts and monsters as enemies is not very good. If it is set in a modern city, there are really not so many beasts to serve as villains. In the article, it is set that the practice of spiritual energy has been cut off for 2000 years, so the beasts and humans cannot play against each other. Of course, this book is just a seedling with less than 50,000 words. We can look forward to its subsequent development.

The author's writing style is good, his ideas are novel, his imagination is wide-open, his subject matter is original, and the ups and downs of the plot are gripping and fascinating. Although there are many themes about simulators nowadays, it has a unique point. This novel combines simulators with world disasters, which is fascinating and very good! Hahaha

I have read more than 20 chapters so far, and the author's ideas are still very novel, making people interested in reading further. Maybe it's because it's my first time watching it on a simulator or something, but I feel like it's a bit delayed. Also, it feels a bit like a stand-alone game. I hope the author can work harder.

It's a very ordinary simulator-style work. From all aspects, it doesn't have much highlights, and the title of the book is too straightforward, which is a bit discouraging. I won't talk much about other issues here, but focus on the character image. There is too much content about simulation earlier. Some book friends have mentioned this, so I won't go into details for now. The key is that I feel that the image of the protagonist is not good. Not only does he talk and act in a fussy way, but he also has too much inner drama. Although most simulator streams are like this, I really don't see any distinctive characteristics from the protagonist. What's more, the protagonist is too unique. What I'm talking about here is that the plot is dominated by the protagonist alone. Most of the others are small characters. There are not a few important supporting characters at all. Even if it is a simulator, even if it is a new book issue, there should be a few, right? After all, the mainstream nowadays is group portraits, so there are always a few more important characters to write about. In addition, I hope that the protagonist will write about it. In addition to getting new skills and exercises after the simulation, he can also write about the protagonist's inner feelings and mental journey, otherwise it will be too monotonous.

Youxin has read a few simulator novels, but the plot is a bit jerky and not too outstanding or too bright. The first chapter explains how the protagonist came to be an ordinary time traveler. He himself said that he is a gangster and does not have a job to rent a house [just a house]. The simple background can still be used Something happened when a mutation occurred. People were unlucky and didn't have any particularly outstanding abilities. Later, the plot was not very good. In terms of characterization, Uncle Li was always concerned about the city's prosperity. Later, the mutation golden finger began to simulate the occurrence of mutations day by day. Select talents, just survive and become stronger, which is more or less boring.

First of all, let's talk about it. I watched and read it while doing the chapters and activities. How should I put it? I think it is purely a simulation and a game. There are no thrilling scenes. They are all very straightforward about how things are going. Even the next step is determined by the simulator. Growth depends entirely on the simulator and not through personal efforts! I think the simulator should be a tool rather than a program! Secondly, there are many simulated scenes, one at a time, one at a time, and there are too many routines for upgrading and fighting monsters. You can highlight the description of some characters, environment, and the description of the psychological fluctuations of the characters, so that the picture will look alive. Finally, I hope the author will work hard, after all, people must always learn to grow!

I've finished reading it, it's pretty good, I'll try to update it!

The most impressive thing is the author's writing style. The level of refinement of language in this book is very rare. But such simple text description contains a unique charm, and at the same time, it can better reflect the contemporary nature of the story in the book 🙂

A small seedling with a word of 50,000 words, a revival of urban aura, and the era of catastrophe suddenly arrived, and human life around the world has received a huge impact. The male protagonist Jing Qi obtained a simulator for cultivating immortality at this important time point. The so-called simulator's function is to simulate. It is probably similar to the text flow simulator that was very popular some time ago. It simulates subsequent plots in a plot mode and in chronological order. Unexpectedly, this small game was transformed by the author into the novel Goldfinger, which is a bit interesting.

I have to tip 100 before I can comment. I've been reading this book for so long and I don't know what's going on with this book. Why are most of the comments section filled with nutritious posts? I want to know what this book is like, whether it is poisonous, its logic, its power system, etc. There is almost no discussion content. They are all irrelevant things, completely devoid of nutrition, and there is nothing to use as a reference.

There are a lot of typos and omissions, but the rest are pretty good

There are too many typos and wrong sentences. If you don't change it and downgrade it, if someone gives you some advice, it means you can still be saved. Accept it with an open mind!

Is there a simulator that insists on developing itself and goes out on adventures to kill the protagonist?

I think most writers forget the purpose of writing, and perhaps their original intention as readers. To put it simply, reading novels is about looking for the word "cool". Mortal flow, pretense flow, hegemony flow, etc. Don't think that a story about a sadistic protagonist is not a cool novel. The essence of it is still a refreshing novel. It just suppresses the desire to exaggerate and whet people's appetite. Successful online novels must first have a sense of immersion, allowing readers to enter the state and imagine that they are the protagonist. Then create conflicts and set up suspense around a main story line to grab the readers' hearts and make them want to know what will happen next and what the outcome will be. Then there are various adventures, the halo of the protagonist, and monster-fighting upgrades that make readers happy. The same goes for simulator articles, changing the soup does not change the medicine. The key lies in how to whet the reader's appetite and let the reader take part in the story. The usual technique here is to exaggerate before suppressing, to create contrast to catch the reader's mind, so that the reader can resonate emotionally as the story develops, and then fully satisfy his inner needs. Next, let's talk about the specific details of this book. What most readers think about when they see the simulator is "What if I could do something like this? If only I could do this!" But the author's description in this regard is too straightforward. There is no new idea (of course, new ideas are difficult, but it is acceptable without them), and there is no sense of substitution or excitement. It seems that the protagonist is just a puppet on strings, completely following the system. As you write, it becomes a game novel, and it is also a contrived game novel. The protagonist has not grown (I mean the mentality of growth, the mentality of adapting to the environment), and everyone cannot understand whether there is any gain, and they are not curious about the next plot. This gives readers the feeling: they will not lose anyway, just follow the system. This is a taboo! If you continue reading like this, you will skip chapters and then abandon the book. I personally have a little suggestion: give more choices when simulating, and pay attention to the description of the environment, so that the choices are close to reality, so that the logic can be self-consistent. Secondly, give me a little more psychological description. I mean normal, not the exaggerated kind. Finally, write some supporting characters, a novel. If you are the only one and there is no one to share with you, how can you pretend? There must be a few people to witness you, so that the story can be compiled easily.

The writing is great, it would be better if you write more 😀

Front row claws

Wow! I was attracted by the title, and I hope it will be updated steadily and the quality will remain high!

It feels very good, I hope the author will keep up the good work

It feels very good, the author will keep up the good work

Is the author not updating regularly?

Does the author publish updates every day? This kind of update score will definitely not be mentioned.

Why not keep updating,