People Are in Xingyue, Dead Apostles Start

This is the true portrayal of Chen Gong😁

The writing is really good, the writing style is harmonious, the mystery of magic is sufficient, and the combat description is also perfect. It is really the highest quality fate fan I have seen in the starting point The choice of rhythm is very rare in the beginning of Demon Night, but the writing really feels like watching anime. It ends in the current short length without delay and the narrative is complete. The ending scene is super beautiful I am really looking forward to the follow-up plot. I hope the author can write down the entire type moon world. It is definitely a masterpiece of Fate fandom

After living for thousands of years, you will fall into the trap of others. There are obviously many ways to solve it. Oh, just play, just to make teammates and objects weak, oh, just being cheap. What kind of rubbish book did you write? Just forget about being a human being. If you don't like normal people, you don't need brains. Thousands of years of life have been in vain. All I have is strength is watching. Clicking on your book was the biggest mistake I made.

The author would always put a cp in the plot (to give people the impression of being the cp leader) and would often say something about Orientalism (to give people the feeling of liking zzzq) and the protagonist would often disappear.

I don't want to watch the fifth battle, the protagonist is not here, and there are no acquaintances of the protagonist, but in the end they all like Shirou, it's boring

The starting point of that year's fandom was Douluo vs. Sea of ​​Death Fire, which was all over the rankings. At that time, I saw Xingyue sitting slumped outside the rankings and crying. This scene is something I will never forget. At that moment I was thinking, if I could become a fan writer, I would definitely win them all. Now that the opportunity is in front of me, I have to consider whether this will be the only opportunity I have in this life. I believe that Qidian fans can have the dominant position in the past, and Xingyue is indispensable. It is our duty to recast the glory of the starting moon!

I am writing this book just for love, so I will definitely finish it. Those who can read it will naturally be like-minded partners, and those who can't read it will not be retained. The mountains are high and the rivers are long, and there is no end in sight. There is no need to show your presence there, and there is no need to leave your excrement. Walking silently is good for everyone, so why not do it.

What kind of mess is written in the first volume? The unity of all the forces that can be united is not complete enough, and the enemies that need to be paid attention to are not paid enough attention to. At the beginning, he looks like a character who hides and hides in order to survive. However, when he arrived in Misaki City, he first wanted the magic spiritual vein, and then turned his attention to other people's barrier control. I can understand that the opponent is weak, and then he can't walk when he sees the fifth law heir? ? ? I won't talk about Aozaki Orange's personal strength. Have you ever considered that after Aozaki Orange reports your location to the church, the church will send people to support you as soon as possible? Or do you think that the fantasy species that you couldn't defeat at first can now defeat the fantasy beast species plus the crowned puppet master and the church seal enforcer with the addition of two miscellaneous fish that you can easily suppress? I don't understand at all what the protagonist's idea is of completely throwing himself next to Aozaki Aoko.

There is no main character in the back of this book, I feel like the front is enough 😅

For me, there are too many group portraits and too little of the protagonist's story. It feels like I'm slowing down progress by writing group portraits, but the group portraits aren't interesting enough.

It is actually a book about a pure moon, which is really rare at the beginning, and the opening chapter is still a niche Demon Night. It has already eliminated many Yunyue people who only see fz and fsn and only play fgo. The already small number of readers has lost another wave. Demon Night happened in 198 9 years, 1990 is like this, Cang Yin is in 1991, fz is in 1994, Kong Jing is in 1995, Nishi Incident Bo and fsn are both in 2004. Although I don't know what the 2.6 Prequel is, but generally speaking, it should be in chronological order, right?

This is Xingyue's story, not the protagonist's story. The main character is still the main character in the first few volumes, but the following is other people's stories about Xing Yue. F/p said it was a special performance for Ai Ge, but Ai Ge didn't appear a few times. The male protagonist has been super powerful since fz, and then the protagonist is not important. By f/p, there is no story about the male protagonist at all. Like a passer-by, only appearing in the background of the story.

As soon as Lancer arrived at the store, all the drinking heroes looked at him and smiled, and some shouted, "Lancer, you have a new scar on your face!" He did not answer, but said to the cabinet, "One gun-level jade, and 30 wise fires." Then he discharged thirty magic mirrors and a holy crystal. They deliberately shouted loudly, "You must be unlucky and die again!" The big dog opened his eyes and said, "Why are you talking nonsense like this out of thin air? Tell me..." "What nonsense? I saw you walking around Einzbern Castle the day before yesterday, and you were dragged away by Hercules!" Lancer's face turned red, and there were streaks of veins on his forehead. Blooming, arguing, "Being thrown away by Heracles cannot be considered bad luck... Bad luck!... Can the Basaker matter be considered one-sided?" Followed by difficult words, such as "being struck by lightning is a coincidence", and "not admitting that the spearmen have bad luck", etc., Caused everyone to burst into laughter: the atmosphere inside and outside the store was filled with joy. One day, about two or three days before the Mid-Autumn Festival, Emiya was slowly checking out, taking off the pink board, and suddenly said, "Lancer hasn't been here for a long time. He still owes hundreds of Saint Crystals to resurrect him!" I also felt that he really hadn't been here for a long time. Dadi says bad luck. This time, it was him who was in a daze and actually provoked Medea. Is it possible to get close to her Liudong Temple? "What happened next?" ""How about it? First, he was sternly warned to be careful, but he didn't listen, and then he was cursed, and he didn't even know which valley the body was in. "What happened next?" "There was no movement after that."

Love song, my love song😭Why have you turned into a green song again😭. . . But I thought it was Sister Wang. . . Well, if it's Sister Wang, it'll be greener 🙂

I just finished reading the first article. All the protagonist did was to use the success of the fifth method to set up a spell to enter the inner sea of ​​stars, right? It feels like a person who has lived for 200 years. Otherwise, it feels like the protagonist has done nothing but played. If not, just pretend I didn't say it.

The plot arrangement is a bit bad. As a fan, some plots largely follow the plot of the original work. The Sky Realm part is much better than the previous one, but to a large extent, the original Sky Realm game provides an excellent foundation. The protagonist is very inexplicable. The only impression I have of the protagonist throughout the story is that he has a very good attitude towards the original female character. Other than that, I don't know what the protagonist wants to do, what goals he holds, and what his three views are. After such a character is invincible and has a root princess, he is actually no different from God or the air. To some extent, he is more nihilistic than the original love song. In other words, this character Just like the incarnation of the author's will in the work, acting with will outside the work, whether it is with Ai Ge or with Liang Ritual, what I feel is "the protagonist gets together with them because the author likes them" rather than "the protagonist wants to get together with them because of what happened/experienced with these characters." To a certain extent, the protagonist's personality is not as distinct as Bulldozer Moon. On the contrary, the personality of the heroine supported by the original work is relatively strong and clearly overwhelms the protagonist's sense of existence. This kind of plot where the man has no change or reaction from the beginning to the end and relies on the prophet and powerful power to seduce or save the original heroine almost covers most of the love content in this article. From this perspective, the author's "love" for the original heroine is not well conveyed to the readers, at least it is not clearly felt by me. Having said that, at least the writing of this fanfic is smooth, and the original characters are well restored. It also touches on the Demon Night and FP that I am very interested in. The writing is smooth and not OOC. It saves some regrets. It only has a few famous scenes and a few studio tours. It is a decent fanfic. Especially in the current situation of Qidian Yue fandom, it is difficult to ask for anything more. Look forward to the follow-up FP update. When the biggest boss of the original FP game does not exist and the book has not yet been completed, how to write it interestingly is the time to test the author.

Two chapters are updated a day. How do you sleep at your age? At your age, you should be updating a sow with ten chapters and ten thousand words every day!

The protagonist is just like a passerby 😅

The protagonist is reincarnated in the wrong world. If he is reincarnated on Tsukihime's side, due to the weak human nature, the Dead Apostles will not be suppressed by the world no matter how they develop. If they are lucky, they can even inherit the Blood Ring of Principle and gain abilities similar to the powers of gods.

The author generates electricity for love, and his level is guaranteed, and he is invincible, but he is too invincible. However, the author does not drive, do not engage in chores, and does not perform chores. In the end, he chose to write group portraits, which further reduced the interest. Personal summary, it is a very serious light novel. This is my personal review of the first two volumes + the middle chapters of each subsequent volume and the end of the volume + the author's remarks. If there is anything wrong, I apologize and correct it.

Recommend some comprehensive comics about the moon to me, preferably with less female protagonists😋

The protagonist really disappeared, right?😡😡😡

Why is there no protagonist in this section recently? It feels like they are all branches, what about the main plot?

Pure Xingyue, why are there still some random people inside? Are you not cheating?

After reading part of it, I feel that the writing is pretty good. It's rare for Xingyue to have such a fanfic that appeals to me. I still quite like this kind of power-generating work! But this is only limited to before the Cang Yin chapter. After the Cang Yin chapter, the protagonist is like a passerby. Basically, he comes out for a few dozen chapters to make a cameo. It affects the perception a bit. After all, he is the protagonist of the previous hundreds of chapters. Suddenly he becomes the background. Especially in the latest volume, FGO has no protagonist at all. I hope that in the follow-up Lostbelt or other chapters, the author can give the plot to the protagonist again. I still really want to see the interaction between the protagonist and the heroines and his son. Even if there is no Sese, it would be just a warm daily life every few dozen chapters. 😭😭 Qingzi, my Qingzi, why are you so pitiful😭

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Well, I haven't seen the complete Xingyue, can you explain what a Dead Apostle is?

King Elle of the beast-level universe is out, look at the model and the gem sword

Some people don't understand. Where did the protagonist's star-made twin guns in Cang Yin come from? Where else did the peer magic come from? And where did the bunch of star-made weapons used to fight Red A come from?

Are the author and Yilou Yetingfeng the same person? Why has your copy of Legend of Knights been removed from the shelves?