Douluo: I Was Forced to Marry by Bibi Dong for the Immortal Emperor

What looks good in the front feels worse and worse in the back! Why are there all the female protagonists in the back? It feels like there is no male protagonist. There are only a few male protagonists at a time. There are about fifty or sixty photos without male protagonists in the back. The male protagonists are written in the front, and the female protagonists are in the back. The interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist in the front. The interaction you wrote in the front is very good, but there is no such feeling in the later ones

Is it great to be an Immortal Emperor in previous lives? Do you have the halo of wisdom in this life? Although they don't like Tang San and Tang Hao, they are not that retarded, right?

How can I put it this way? It's pretty good, but it looks very awkward. The author's writing style isn't good enough. It's a bit messy and it doesn't feel like there's much plot.

Harvest Willow Erlong, Fire Dance, Bo Saixi?

I read two chapters of the rz article! No matter how awesome the protagonist was in his previous life, he can be crazy or crazy in this life, but he cannot be an unqualified fool. There is a difference between a madman and a fool! The writing is as childish as a junior high school student's journal. I suggest that the author complete the Chinese homework first and then think about writing.

Who is Bibi Dong, is she worthy of marrying the Immortal Emperor? . . . . Unless you are an Immortal Emperor with one step and ten meters, then what the hell is this Immortal Emperor of yours? . . .

I don't understand what the novel is about. The protagonist feels like a robot. He palms a woman. The woman is 100% in love with the protagonist. Then the protagonist does nothing and moves to another place and just kisses her on the mouth.

Does the author's protagonist practice this?

Also, is there something wrong with the heroine's brain that makes the heroine so afraid of being exposed? Why should we have a harem? I'm really speechless.

Author, stop touching the shrimp, get up and write the article

It's okay, but the protagonist doesn't have much of a role to play. Even Tang San and those clowns can just go up and hit him with a stick. The protagonist, the Immortal Emperor, may be watery.

Good guy, there are five female protagonists right from the beginning, and even the male protagonist doesn't have a character sticker. I'm convinced. Really a stallion.