Guide to Cultivation in the Mysterious World

Anyone can write a novel these days, bah.

It's written without beginning or end and can't be connected.

I can't understand the comments at first. This gave me the courage to open it.

I was so dizzy reading the book. . Characters all appear suddenly, without any cause or effect.

It feels like there is a lack of more details Let's talk about it one by one It seems that there are fewer maps and the areas cannot be connected. The protagonist encounters a children's carriage while running. There is no interaction with the owner, no attitude, no suspicion or testing. The three brothers were looking for trouble. The early description of what the other one did seemed to be just one sentence. Shouldn't Roubaozi be curious about the steamed bun shop? Brother Tentacle lives so close to the stranger and the crow. There should be a collision but he didn't make it clear. The conflict between the protagonist of Master Mo's human skin suddenly changes to inheritance a bit quickly, and another Master Mo appears and disappears. Hongyu's command to cut down trees to make fire and the characteristics of Hongyu should be explained together. In fact, after watching the tree cutting for a long time, I explained why the tree should be cut down. The flashbacks of the suspenseful story are understandable, but the main context is a bit vague.

Well written, I really like reading this kind of weird content

There is no beginning or end, and the plot is incomprehensible!

It's too confusing, there is no connection between the plots, it's all fragments

You can see the fragments one by one. It's not bad if you look closely, but the connection is so bad that it's hard to read.

Why did you cut it when it was obviously good?

I wrote three books and cut them into three. Originally, I wanted to earn 500,000 yuan before reading...

There's a lot I want to say, but the writing is terrible and I can't say it. For readers who click in, there is nothing I can ask for. The problem is that I don't understand what I wrote, the toxic point is that I wrote too little, there are no conflicts because I don't grasp the rhythm well, and the writing is too clumsy because I am talking about my phonetic code. I can only say that it is already the 26th day of the 3000-word update, and I have no regrets for everyone who invested.

The introduction is honestly very attractive, but I don't know what the content is like.

The writing is too messy and makes people confused. The plot is quite good, but it's too messy to watch.

The golden finger is in the protagonist's body, the protagonist's book, how the herbs are stuffed into the golden finger, I'm speechless