My Runes Can Be Upgraded

She kept moving the camera to the disgusting person, trying to lick something out, but the heroine still pretended to be cool. It's fine if you don't write it to death, just leave it aside and don't care if it's okay or not. Why do you keep writing these things and abandon your teammates at the beginning? In the end, you wiped out the team and left that woman behind. I really threw up. I can't stand it anymore. Say goodbye.

I was persuaded to quit after the first five chapters. I don't want to go into details about how poisonous the first five chapters are. I also don't know why the monthly score is so good Because there is really no way to keep reading. I hope that some brave people in the future can tell me whether the writing and the way of describing things have been improved, and whether it can still poison people.

I read more than a hundred chapters and paid 6 yuan for a subscription. I originally wanted to subscribe to it all, but after reading it, I felt bored. What to say about this book, I personally feel that it has several shortcomings. First, the world view is unclear. From the beginning, the plot of the protagonist unfolds. From the beginning to the part I saw, the world view involves mentioning a few points. Sometimes it seems confusing. Moreover, the master of the protagonist said that he comes from the world of runes. What is the relationship between the world of runes and the real world? Why can people from the world of runes come to the real world? There are too many questions that need to be explained. Secondly, there are too many flaws in the protagonist's resource consumption in the main line. In the past, the protagonist's master only used five spiritual stones to break through the sixth level. Later, when the protagonist broke through the third level, he used ten spiritual stones. A high breakthrough requires a lot of energy, but it is boring when it is like this. The investment is large and the harvest is small, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. It should be that the investment is the same as others, but the combat power harvest is greater than others. For example, the protagonist's golden finger improves the quality of the summoned beast. The later on, the more emphasis is placed on the investment of resources, which is boring. I think everyone should consume the same or slightly more resources, and then let the summoned beast meet the conditions in terms of skills, understanding, environment, training, etc. To improve the quality. There are problems with resource consumption in all aspects in the later stages of the article, and although the quality in the later stages has improved, the combat power does not seem to have improved at all. As long as the quality of the protagonist's summoned beasts has improved, even if the protagonist enters a map of the same level, the quality of the monsters has also improved, and sometimes it has improved more than the protagonist. So how do other people in the article mix? The protagonist can cheat but cannot sweep the monsters at the same level. Then do other people have to form a team of more than a dozen people to go to a map with a lower level to carefully attract monsters and spawn monsters. To be honest, writing like this is just like those pretentious fantasy novels in the past. It may not be as good. At least they can defeat monsters at several levels, while the protagonist may not be able to defeat monsters at the same level sometimes. Third, there are too many typos in every chapter, and there are quite a lot of them, which really affects reading. Find someone to spend a few minutes every day to help you find typos. Don't look for them yourself, because the novels you write are often dazzled. You may spend hours looking for them yourself and still find mistakes, while others can find them in a few minutes.

，     ！ Either give a general world view and then explore it bit by bit, or during the exploration, when you think you understand it well, you will come up with some new tricks. However, the author does not stick to either. Second, as the plot progresses, it feels awkward to be honest. The characterization and various calculations are not as blunt as digging a hole and forcing it. The whole text has no "sense" of rhythm at all, and no unique style. The most serious point is that the protagonist's independent soul and sense of independent thinking are so vivid that they jump out of the page. It's okay in the early stage, open high. Then it gives people the feeling that all living beings are like a crowd, and in the end they fade into the water. Seeing the world through the protagonist's self-view is probably like reading a novel, or reading a book. But it gave me the feeling that the world was broken, and except for the protagonist at the beginning, there was no talent that people could appreciate. How to observe it

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Out out of consideration, I might as well write down my own thoughts. If you don't like it, don't criticize, I'm sorry. It's been a long time since I read it, and what I've always wanted to say is, is this author's name useless? What is the name of a good skill? Yellow Turban Iron Wooden Stake? Kill a pig with one knife? A death blow? Are you really out of words? I'm really speechless. As for the book, I personally think it's okay and I can keep reading. Although there aren't many updates, there are 2 updates a day, which is about 8k1000 words. Another thing is that the character of the protagonist is not well established. What is his character? He is said to be cautious, but also a little silly and sweet. He is said to be a genius, but still a little confused. I can't think of anything to say. Anyway, the character design is not well established and the characters are not distinct enough. Now, here is the plot, which seems a bit confusing, and the world is not clearly explained. There are so many chapters. In fact, it can be laid out long ago. If not, at least there is an outline. Looking at it now, it's almost like the protagonist has upgraded to a level and talked about the world. From the past, it was still very one-sided and didn't know anything.         ，，？ I don't see much innovation, eh, adding the big man camp? I want to ask. . . What does the teacher at this college do? Will students be given credit? Add PU? It's completely free-range education, not even education.                                                                                                                                                                                                         Another issue of resources. Reading a novel is just about raising pets. Are we teaching Pokemon? And what about that golden finger thing? Is it useful? I don't think it's a big deal. It's useless. There is no "genius" character for the protagonist. It's hard to say. Actually, I personally think the plot structure of Baijia Academy, the conflict between Yuan family and Xiliang is quite good, and I can write more about it. Or you could write a big villain organization that runs through the novel like in "The Master". We don't read novels to watch tutorials on raising pets. The plot, battles, especially confrontations, are very important! ! ! Finally, I hope the author can read my comments to understand and have more ideas about the subsequent plot. Also, if we readers can calm down and write comments, whether it is suggestions, criticism, or encouragement, it is a great affirmation of the author, and it also gives you hope and love for this novel. After all, if you really don't like this book, do you still have the patience to write a review? Last but not least, I would like to say a big word to the author: Thank you for your hard work, come on✊Continue to code and explode the small universe!

So, author, you understand?

I don't understand why even though ordinary people can operate normally, some book friends start to get angry and say that the protagonist has a licking problem. Why are they all Long Aotian? Never played the game? Even if you play chicken, you know that your marksmanship is not good enough to match the master. Do you think normal people will help the master search for things? First, you can be a medic for others. If you don't talk about this, let's talk about League of Legends and King of Glory. You can't say good things to others when they help you to improve your score? Or do you mean that when someone asks you to be a booster coach, you don't have to say good things about it except to pay for it? Not to mention life and work! ! ! Why, the reality just now is that Jack Ma and Wang Sicong are all different. I don't need to look at how rich other people are. Anyway, they are not as rich as me! And when you help others, you start talking about other people's saints. Come on, I want to ask how many book friends are orphans and survive completely alone, without helping others or being helped by others! ! ! Let's not say that the greater the ability, the greater the responsibility. The ancients all knew that if you are poor, you can only benefit yourself, and if you are successful, you can benefit the world!

To be honest, based on my many years of reading experience, a novel must first be stable in one style, whether it is the earliest sadistic genre that mainly focuses on bitter hatred, deep hatred, wives and separation, or the later "good-for-nothing rise" genre such as fighting and defeating mortals, in which the protagonist is tortured, leveled up, pretending to be cool, changes maps and then tortured again, leveled up, and pretended to be cool again. In recent years, the style of novels that are closer to the fast food culture of online novels, nonsensical or funny pretentious novels, etc. Must have an overall tone. And in the first five chapters of this novel, he has a sadistic style that was abandoned by his teammates, and then he practiced and rose up, with a style of serious training and upgrades. As a result, he evolved into an invincible style, killing big monsters and small monsters randomly. Then in chapter 30, the team that abandoned him appeared again without showing off or revealing his identity. What is the meaning of this plot? Can you say that he is a bit steady in the Wild Boar Forest, and he knows how to poison, but he is not reckless when he comes to the Spider Cave? You don't send summoned monsters to explore the map. If you know there are elite monsters nearby, don't fight them. Find a place where there are no monsters. Isn't the purpose of your map below just to kill monsters? The biggest problem of this book is that the protagonist is very failed in shaping. The basic shaping has not been completed after more than 30 chapters. He is ruthless and talkative, brainless and funny, smart and almost demonic, steady as a dog, etc., Without a relatively accurate character In addition, to be honest, since the protagonist can clear the wild boar alone without the Yellow Turbans evolving, why does he still have to be a grandson in the team? What is the purpose? If teammates were together in a team to level up before, there would be no saying that no one was helping the other. Who did you show your bitter and resentful look when you were kicked out? ? ? Why do you want to kick me out after I've done all the work for the team? Normally, this kind of person would not be kicked out at all. Which team doesn't like this kind of hard-working old scalper? Only when there is no room for other people will they be kicked out. As a result, the protagonist stayed in the wild map for four or five days for the first time. Since he can come back at any time, why not rest in a safe and comfortable environment instead of staying in a dangerous place? Since you can stay outside for four or five days for the first time, why should you suffer in the team if you have such strength? It doesn't make sense at all logically.

The long and watery secret realm is finally over. As a result, the reward arrangement has another wave of poison. Upgrade epic props to totem props and then use them on a junk prop as soon as they are combined, just for more advanced people to experience the pain of cutting off a younger brother? ? ? The key is that the last few sentences elevate the legendary talisman to epic. Isn't it useful at this time? Aren't talisman pens a prop? Even if it's not a prop, can't you keep it and use it later when something good comes up? Is there a time limit for upgrading the scroll or does it make me feel uncomfortable if I don't use it? Is suppressing the protagonist really suppressing?

I have an idea to lock the author in a small dark room and write the book 24 hours a day 🤓.

It should be said that it is a typical anticlimactic one, one that gets more and more boring the more you watch it. It was a bit interesting at first, but slowly it started to feel weird. The plot and so on are very weak, there is basically nothing of value, and many things are very inexplicable. But it's a little better than the other book about bandits.

The first few chapters are indeed purely disgusting. I don't understand the author's purpose of setting up this kind of plot.

It feels like the author doesn't know what people like to read, so he writes in the same style as the original authors in the past. I don't understand. As long as there is something new, it won't be like this. The Yellow Turban Rikishi at the beginning is amazing.

I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 68. I don't know how this book was rated as a top three. The plot arranged by the author was too uncomfortable to read.

In Chapter 5, I couldn't stand it. The boss sold the price of 5 spiritual talismans. The protagonist said that he only had four spiritual talismans. The boss wanted to sell it or not. The boss agreed to sell the four spiritual talismans to the protagonist. The protagonist gave him five spiritual talismans. I was speechless. Why, do you think you are humorous when you are like this?

The writing skills of a novice many years ago. At first it was a boring and childish plot, and then it was the turn of the pretentiousness from more than ten years ago. They have an elite team with high-quality runes and have fought all kinds of monsters. Then the novice protagonist, who knows nothing and has no skills, inexplicably suspects that this team is doing something wrong. Then they come here hundreds of times and receive various news, school and family guidance. , Classmates' experiences, and friends' chats, something that I had never heard of and could not be offline suddenly happened. If I were the captain of this team, then I would control the protagonist's hand as soon as possible, contact someone, and then use medicine to retreat to prevent it from being attacked by PVP players. You must know that they are veterans who have experienced hundreds of battles. It is impossible for them to listen to the nonsense of a newbie who knows nothing like traveling in a mortal world, especially when his previous team was suspected of being completely wiped out and changed its appearance inexplicably, and now it happened that he could not log off. Another group of people each have high-quality runes, and have good backgrounds and can receive good teachings. They have also experienced hundreds of life-and-death battles with fewer enemies and more enemies, and then they are shocked by the output of one of the protagonist's summons. You must know that the summoner can summon more, so a single summoned beast is special. Especially the output of low-level professions cannot be higher than that of other professions, so it should not be that much different. Otherwise, let alone crushing all professions in the future, they can crush other professions in the beginning, because others only have the output of one person, and the summoner can easily do so because of the summoned beast. To catch up with the output of others, it can even be said that different types of summoned beasts are similar to summoners and can work part-time in any profession. The auxiliary summoned beasts are equivalent to auxiliary professions, and ordinary minions are equivalent to warrior professions. In addition, the summoner's own attack, assistance, and interference abilities are added , it is equivalent to one summoner being able to defeat two professions. In the future, with the same resources and experience, a summoner can be able to defeat hundreds or even thousands of people by himself. No matter how inferior their skills are, hundreds of second-rate summoners can single-handedly beat the top ten players in the output list and the top ten support list together. In addition, they can completely leave due to their monster-killing efficiency and loss. Then the author insists that they are surrounded and cannot leave, and then they are scared to death. The protagonist, a newbie who has just met, speaks as if he has found a backbone.

Is this constant routine really disgusting to me? An unbeatable opponent pops up out of nowhere every now and then? The protagonist feels involved in various ways, and the people who cause trouble for the protagonist are always behind the scenes that he can't afford to offend. The protagonist's teacher or something is just a background board, which is useless.

It's broken. Any legendary military commander who appears as the protagonist will be instantly defeated. His martial arts skills are copied from those of a dog, and his statistics are useless.

Chapter 1 starts like a licking dog... Slipped away

I really can't stand it anymore. Forget about the West being strong and the East being weak. Although it's very cliche, I can still watch it. In the end, I had to write about a Westerner who became the president of hundreds of colleges and let him do all kinds of things. It seems that the author thinks there are too many readers. He has written more than two million words and still needs to filter out readers 👍

I don't know how long this secret realm of the Eastern Han Dynasty will keep me heartbroken. What I want to say is that readers' tolerance is limited, at least I'm running out of patience. In this case, it's not a question of whether to keep it or not, but whether this book is still qualified to stay on my bookshelf. After all, I collected them in the first place just because they felt better. Those are the words. If you find it annoying, delete the post.

I finally reached chapter 70. I agreed that the female protagonist should not be so toxic. It's not that I don't want a female protagonist. It's just that my brother, you write female characters with a certain amount of toxicity (not too small). A former female supporting role in the team. It's so cool that the team disappeared. I guess some readers The second one is the heroine with social phobia. I was confused when watching the whole story. From the moment the male protagonist used his golden finger to find out that the alchemist who bought the dregs of medicine had attributes. He could buy the dregs of medicine at a high price and get free prescriptions, etc., Playing the emotional card. Anything is fine, but don't take it too seriously. Which kind of rent is really bad? It's just like when you go to a military school and get a first-class merit (military students do have first-class merit. I've seen school records, but I don't know if they are still there), and then the school rewards you with a high-end villa for you to live in. It doesn't mention its monthly expenses at all, and then it is the kind that increases 100 times, and you are still a poor loser. So the question is, is someone targeting you or forcing you to rebel?

Except for upgrades and dungeons, you don't need to read anything else and jump directly. The actual plot is extremely silly. The villain is an infinite nesting doll, and he is reluctant to kill him. He almost killed people who were kind to him several times. In the end, it was just to write one more fight scene.

After reading this book for a long time, I still feel disgusted. I won't talk about the beginning. I thought it would be very exciting to describe the Yellow Turban camp of the Han Dynasty in the early stage. But in the end, it really got into a fight. The writing was based on the defense.

With this kind of ending, I can only think of it as being about The Eunuch. It's filled with rich literature, but if I use some snacks to describe the plot, I won't be able to write The Eunuch down. Who has never read a book? The plot is well drawn, and readers would rather the author stopped writing for a month or two in exchange for a happy ending rather than a eunuch.

This book doesn't even tell a simple world background, and starts writing directly without an introduction. All setting backgrounds of co-authors need to be summarized by readers, right? This is outrageous. Is this really the old author?

Starting with the fifth pet, I don't know why I chose an electric mouse. I also laid the groundwork for an electric bird. But I got a mouse, which is useless and has no distinctive personality. Then I got a mega evolution. The mouse can turn into a lion. This is not like taking off your pants and farting. If you just make a lion, it's really uncomfortable.

I have been following this book for a long time, and I really can't stand it until Chapter 200. In fact, if it weren't for the elf's extra points, I wouldn't be able to finish reading the previous chapters. I keep trying to do the same thing until I'm tired. I can never finish leveling up, and I can never beat opponents.

This is a fairly abstract book. First, there is no background setting. Second, the typical distinction between reality and virtuality is unclear, and the setting of the three worlds is quite abstract. Third, the upgrade settings are too outdated and backward, and no one has the conditions to reach 123. Fourth, it was written seriously at the beginning, but suddenly it became inexplicably oily. Before the electric mouse came out, there was no boss, second, third, or fourth. It was very sudden and oily. Fifth, there is already a dynasty secret realm in the dungeon, and there is another dynasty force outside, let alone Yuan Chu, Dong Hu, Li Ru, Li Huai, Yuan Hong, and the violent woman from the old Cheng family. Lao Chun should be Chun Yu. It's just funny. Is it because I'm afraid readers won't recognize it? Sixth, the most abstract thing is the Goblin Secret Realm. The green cloth, green light, green gun, and green shield are each more abstract than the last. Moreover, the Goblins have become an intelligent race, and are no different from humans. There is no communication barrier, which is really outrageous. Seventh, the beast-control style is quite a failure. Even if the boss has no sense of existence, how many chapters has that little spider been lying around? Is there a hundred? The electric mouse was even more of a failure and had to be given a lion form. The fourth and fifth sons were not gained by taking risks, they were too perfunctory. The process of controlling beasts is quite childish. It is almost all data, and later it is even pure data. Eighth, they call him Brother Dong Hu or Brother Li Ru casually, which is a bit disgusting, and there is even a scene where he faints due to injury and is carried off the stage. Ninth, what is Xiao Hei's name? Forget it, it's not important. A female character with such a strong sense of presence in the early stage is so marginalized? And the senior sister was speechless. Tenth, one of the few bright spots is the elf

It was fine in the front, but shouldn't it be better to write better and better? Why is it becoming more and more retarded in the back?