Build a Civilization from Scratch

I wish there was more content in a chapter, and I could study broken chapters. Come on

After watching your video on Station B, I came here to read the book, but found that it was already finished. . . I signed the contract after so much effort, but why did it end before the 50,000-word mark?

I came from Teacher Miao and read four chapters. The narrative is good, but there are too many, the plot is not outstanding, the protagonist is too existential, and the most annoying thing is, there is no hook. No motivation to continue reading.

Come on! It would be nice if the protagonist had a stronger sense of presence. For example, in the third chapter, using some simple and crude words, Lin Feng was the former God of Creation. Create life, collect faith, and more. It can speed up the plot in an instant. The evolution of life alone is a bit low-key and can easily lose readers. There are also various types of cosmic rays at the beginning of the evolution of life, which actually accelerated the reproduction and mutation of life. Explore the birth of life, acceleration of reproduction, etc. I also agree with the author that the first life was caused by an asteroid hitting the earth. Writing this article is a bit difficult. There are also atmosphere, nuclear radiation, algae plants producing oxygen, etc. Natural elements enhance life. The five generations of prehistoric civilization should all be seen in this author's book. Calvin or something probably doesn't exist. Pick a few chapters to make a stand-alone protagonist statement. Come on, author!