People of the Motherland of Black Robe Pickets

How should I put it, I always feel like there is something wrong with the protagonist🧠

How can I put it this way? This book is an ancestral novel, but as a novel, there is nothing gripping about it. The patriotic people in the original book are bright and majestic on the surface but very dark behind the scenes, and the patriotic people love his son very much, so the author does not need to go against the ancestral people. Second point, I forgot the name of the vice president. I don't believe that she can't find out the specific information about the protagonist. The patriotic people should receive the information soon when their son joins the Super Seven.

I've always wanted to complain about my motherland. If I apply too much force, the cuckold's wife's uterus will rupture and she won't be able to give birth to a child.

There are only a handful of people who write about supermen, and only a handful of people who write about people of the motherland, so 😏😏😏😏

I'm super, what did I find? A novel about wild natives

How should I put it? It's a bit like being a native of the motherland for the sake of the motherland. Many of his character actions force him to be close to the motherland. This is not free, isn't it? Although he has superpowers, he can do whatever he wants. A good person uses the ability of the motherland to do good things. He gets his own satisfaction. He just wants to do whatever he wants. He just wants to help others. Isn't he free? As long as he is happy, the same is true for villains Instead of having the same character as the people of the motherland, doing things that are more free than the people of the motherland, not pretending, just doing whatever you want, Becoming a person of the motherland does not mean that the character becomes the same, there is not only one choice in life, but the character is different from the people of the motherland, and you will not be kidnapped by morality. Having your own character does not mean that there are more things to watch. Come on, author... I feel that the plot is a bit dry...

Why not join forces with the people of the motherland and then directly rule the world?

After reading Chapter 32, I sincerely recommend the author to find a class and not force yourself. I really don't have that talent. You are the only one among so many online articles where fan works can describe the characters that exist in the original works in a messy way. Not to mention the protagonist, who is severely delirious.

This novel is so weird, the first part was better, but after the protagonist went out and read dozens of chapters, I just couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist started flirting with girls when he was only about ten years old? It's still an adult Starlight, but Starlight is also written like a child. The plot becomes more and more outrageous as it goes on. It feels like it is no longer a novel, but the author's autobiography. The characters have no emotions, and the author just wrote out the plot he thought of.

It's the same as a running account, or even worse than a running account. I've read a lot of them First, there is no explanation of the protagonist's age and height Second, there is no explanation of the protagonist's character, whether it is a normal character, or distorted or indifferent to anything Third, the protagonist has no goals at all, or there is no main line Fourth, it was said before that there must be a battle with the motherland, why should we fight, what is the purpose of the fight, and what will be gained after defeating the protagonist, these all need to be written. The above four points are the main flaws. Others, such as not using "just now", using "general" and so on, I won't talk about deliberately showing off the new words I learned.

It's okay. If I start a harem, I'll have to give up. I love single female protagonists the most, cold, decisive in killing, dark, and villain.

Occupying the body of someone else's son, not even calling her mother, and claiming that she is not his biological mother, the protagonist knew immediately that it was trash and stopped watching it.

Author, why don't you let the protagonist go to other worlds to upgrade. Compound No. 5 Originally belongs to Walter Company, and it is unreliable for you to rely on this to improve. In the plot, the people of the motherland have already known about Compound No. 5.

The author of a certain black-robed superman from a certain American comic book. Take a look at this book. What does it mean to be an ancestor!

If there is no child or support, you can repay it by cutting off your finger If you have child and no support, you can repay it by cutting off your head If you have no child and no support, there is no retribution The protagonist's attitude towards his biological mother can only be said to be like a beast with white eyes 🙂

The author seems to have a problem with Lane🧠🧠 What is the meaning of Lane's existence? I thought the author wrote that the protagonist should be filial to the father and son of the motherland. In the end, it seems that not much can be seen, and the original plot is basically the same.

It turns out that you, the author, did not intentionally write the dialogue in a funny style. . . That's how it is... Really,,, the dialogue between characters must first start from the standpoint and the perspective of the character itself. It's like a locomotive hits the protagonist and almost dies. The first reaction should be "What's wrong with this kid? I can't smash him?!" End If you start to have an incomprehensible conversation, Then the conversation with the protagonist's mother at the beginning is also very... It's strange, the narration is normal, why don't you just recite the conversation silently and feel what it feels like to say it. . .

No matter how you write it, as long as you know the "sense of immersion" of the protagonist in "Starlight Eats Chicken", it will come

Let me also comment a little bit. 1. Why does the protagonist always want to go against the people of the motherland? It doesn't make sense, it doesn't make sense. No good. 2. Recognizing thieves as fathers in the introduction. The problem is that you are indeed a child of the motherland.

The writing is quite good, especially the genes of the people of the motherland, who have no human emotions at all. They treat the world as a game, and the role of the biological mother as an ordinary NPC. The ultimate villain charm is that I do whatever I want. Love it, love it

The scene where he fights Thanos is just bullshit, so it's just forced to add a scene. It's more ink than the real villain, and the protagonist is slower than a turtle, and he doesn't even move for a long time.

I have passed by this book several times. I am finally eunuch. I am so happy.

I didn't even understand what was being said, but it was interesting and confusing.

Hey guys, does anyone know of any novels that have the plot of Nightmare Town?

The author has too little writing skills and life experience, and what he writes seems too general.

After reading it, I found that the early writing was quite immature, but the later writing was pretty good. It would be nice to write more about the people of the motherland. Butch did not even see the faces of the people of the motherland, and Scarlet Witch and Storm were not mentioned at the end.

After reading a few chapters, I felt like I couldn't get into it, and it felt like a narrative.

This may be the only novel with a nightmare plot.

Lightning Protection: A cheat system starts to appear in Chapter 51. If you find it disgusting, you can quit.

No wonder there are fewer and fewer comments.