Kidnapping the Queen at the Beginning

As a 7-year old reader and a new author who wants to write a novel, I feel there are some problems with this book. The first is the sense of immersion! For example, in the first chapter, I read some good urban articles and found that the first chapter allows readers to get involved quickly, the plot is relatively smooth, and it makes people feel that this is possible. Even if the probability is extremely low. But this article seems to be similar to my problem. I can't explain the specific feeling. It's like there is a layer of film between them. Is it a little less ups and downs? Or is the transition too abrupt? I don't know if it's the writing style or the rhythm. All in all it's quite awkward, like an adult watching a fairy tale. The second thing is style? For example, the character's personality seems not to be displayed. For example, take the newspaper boy's sister and the night watchman. You can already tell who the protagonist is from the beginning, so that you can quickly identify them. There are also some sultry ideas, which are interesting and attractive to continue reading. Of course, the above is just a personal opinion. Everyone has a different path. It is not easy for the author to write so much now. I hope the author can continue to work hard and persevere. Try to tell a good story. Everything else is minutiae, and the most important thing is that people can understand it. Only after you understand it can you add more bricks and tiles to make the text more beautiful. Although this book is a bit dull now, it can make people understand it, so let's work together.

I saw something similar to this one there, and then I wrote a book review. Later, the author copied my review and wrote it in the book. I just copied it without saying anything. Later, because the book review had so many likes, the author actually deleted my review and banned me. I was speechless.

The more data I read, the greater my motivation for coding becomes. This is data that can determine the life or death of a book!

Let me explain. Originally, it was scheduled to be stable and updated to test the waters, but I had some temporary health problems, which I couldn't do anything about. Even if I really can't continue writing, I will explain it in advance and finish the book, at least so that the book friends who invest can receive some coins. I still have a calculus about one centimeter in my right kidney, which cannot be broken with laser. I can only wait for it to slowly fall down and then break it again. This is what happened, please forgive me.

This way of writing is a bit excessive but it is reasonable. In fact, it is not colorful. You know

I feel like what you wrote is a bit too much, so it's not impossible to write it.