
Our Female Cultivators Should Strengthen Themselves
我辈女修当自强
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- Completed
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- Xianxia Romance
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- Female
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- Classical Xianxia
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Recommend Good Books, Avoid Mindless White Articles
I have read many books at Qidian, and encountered countless minefields. Every time I was bombed, I really wished someone could help me clear the mines in advance. Unfortunately, there was no book list function before, so I could only vomit blood and test the poison one by one. . . I have read every book on this list, and there is absolutely no stupid nonsense. I hope you all like it. There is a principle for recommending books - books that are in serialization and have less than 500,000 words a
Shinju's Bookshelf
After more than ten years of reading, the book list contains novels with three correct views and good writing. Because I am picky about reading books, the writing and plot can be improved with my writing, but if the three views are inconsistent, I will definitely not be able to read them. Most of the heroines have no CP, and there are one-on-one ones who will mark it. (Except male videos) From now on, the book list will only recommend novels that I have read and feel are of good quality. Thank
[Main Girl Channel] Xianxia's Fun and Refreshing Book
The books on the list are either those with good storylines, excellent writing, or those that are particularly enjoyable and kill everyone! I don't like running accounts, especially the kind that are boring to read and have no interest in reading any more. Maybe there are short stories in the books you like, um, but the plots are interesting, so you can read them. Of course, the recommendations are all based on my taste Also, I can't watch the text. The plot is ordinary but only uses piled words
Collection Box of Various Strong Female Stories
There are too many books, and some of them cannot be placed, so they will be placed in the introduction or under recommended books. A novel without a male protagonist. If there is no point, it is from other places. It is not updated regularly. It is an advanced stage of laziness. There are also some recommended articles in the comments. Since my taste is not fixed, I rarely recommend them. Those who are interested can read them by themselves~ Other novels without male protagonists: "I became fam
Those Things About Female Videos
Try to discover the fine articles in female videos and the unpopular fairy grass
Wan'er Book List
Reading really affects learning. Everyone must have self-control and don't imitate me! ! ! Recently, I prefer female videos🙃 Please collect it! ! ! Please pay attention! ! ! 1. They are all things I have seen or are currently watching. 2 Those that I haven't seen, those that I don't like to watch, and those that I can't follow are not on the list. 3 As long as I read quickly enough, the book list can't keep up with my pace. 4 There are so many books that I forgot to add to the book list. 5Can I
Need to Be Fattened Is a Less Popular Article About Cultivating Immortals.
They are all good articles about working hard and cultivating, not too popular. Ancient texts on immortality for men and women
Fat Cat Grocery Shop
The collection is all my favorite novels
It's a Fairly Upright Book with Three Views, Partially Finished, and Biased Toward Women.
I recommend a fairly good protagonist with a fairly positive outlook on life, and the quality of the book is pretty good. PS: I won't like a protagonist who helps someone who wants to kill the protagonist.
No Male Protagonist, No Cp
Record the articles I have read and can read
No Male Protagonist/no CP (I Prefer Stories with More Female Supporting Characters or Outstanding Female Supporting Characters)
The main recommendation is that there is no male protagonist, and I am very concerned about the gender ratio of the supporting characters.
Stew Randomly. . ? . . . . . . .
Male videos don't have a female protagonist or there is a female protagonist who doesn't have a strong sense of presence🀄Female videos. 🐶 Either there is no male protagonist, 🐕 or it's a one-on-one story 🐭. They are all my favorite heroine stories, 🐱 serialized ones, 🐀🐁completed ones, 🐢classic ones, cultivating immortals, 🐰🐇🐓interstellar online games, etc. That I personally think are good-looking. 🐏🐑🐥🐦🐤🐣I am impatient to follow the article, 🐺🐃🐄🐮🐗most of them are completed articles, 🐚🐙🐳🐋🐟🐠🐜🐛🐌🐾 Th
A Book That Is Too Good to Be Missed
Record the days spent chasing updates... Favorite type: Cultivation/Imperial Examination/Chaotang/History/Holographic Online Games/Quick Travel Final article "Senben Junliang" "One Finger Becomes an Immortal" "Atlas of Fairy Spirits" "Jiao Shu" "The Beauty of the Country" Others "The Tao is Ruthless" and "The Seal of Merit" "Don't Disturb Ascension" "I Have Medicine" "I am bound to the life system" "The Ancient Imperial Examination Life of Farmers" "Dislike the Poverty and Love the Rich" and
A Little Book List of Traveling Girls of the Han Dynasty
Welcome. I hope to find book friends with similar tastes to me, read and share. Thanks for browsing.
The Heroine Is Uniquely Beautiful and Has No CP
I have been a bookworm for five years and recommend some good articles that I like to read. Good articles are hard to come by and updates are irregular.
Fairy Fantasy
After ten years of reading online novels, my favorite fantasy fairy tale genre
🈚CP, the Heroine, Has Brain Text.
Let's shine!
Good Book
Good book
Miyamizu's Bookstore
The books I'm interested in may be a bit complicated
INFP Spiritual Food
"There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. For those who are interested in three minutes and can finish a novel, then it is the perfect electronic mustard."
Favorite Books
Friends who like the ordinary path but don't like exaggeration, please encourage us together!
Novel Without Heroine
All novels without female protagonists are acceptable, as well as those that are not the starting point. Write down your own evaluation of the novel. If the novel has several million words, you must read it at least once, and if it exceeds 5 million words, you must read 70% of the novels.
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Ancient sayings about immortal heroes, strong women and noble women
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I like to read male comics, but I get tired of them after watching them for a long time. I want to read one. Although it is a heroine, it is written from the perspective of a male comic. Unfortunately, the female protagonists on the market are not good. Someone recommended a book to me before, and then I searched for "Slowly Immortal Path" and found this book. Later I searched for "Many Path to Immortality" and gave up after reading more than 50 chapters. I immediately finished this book. This book The book is good. I read it 6 or 7 months ago. In my mind, it is the most perfect book. The plot is in line with my imagination. It has always been in my mind. I am ashamed to say that because I am a student and have no money, I can only read this book on a fake website. Today I will give you five yuan. I don't know why such a good book is not popular. Also, can you change the name back to Chou Ya Xiuzhen Ji? I still like this down-to-earth name.
October Book Review{"TopicId":"797546284507529216","TopicName":"October Book Review"} I came across this book by chance. The heroine is unremarkable and she is devoted to the Tao. It is an ordinary novel that I can't stop reading. The setting is a golden finger of a psychic, but it is not the Holy Mother. There are degrees of progress and retreat. Family love has a beginning and an end. Friendship is with two people. Xiaozhan, the others are pretty mediocre. There is no male protagonist and no cp. With my own efforts and persistence, I have been making progress and moving forward. The female protagonist is firm in her Taoism. This book is suitable for my taste. I will read it to the end soon. I hope there will be more updates. Thank you to the author!
I have read a lot of novels about cultivating immortals. If it works stably, this novel can be regarded as one of my favorites (﹡ˆoˆ﹡) First, let's talk about the heroine. Xu Chunniang's character is well-shaped, with a firm heart and a certain sense of responsibility as a righteous person. She doesn't kill indiscriminately without being a virgin. This character is just right. The details of the novel are also a plus. As an orthodox novel about cultivating immortals, although there are few innovative contents, it can be seen that the author knows a lot about cultivating immortals. Compared with the vague and abstract descriptions in some novels, the descriptions of techniques and cultivation methods in the novel are very detailed, and most of the data are relatively rigorous. The author must have carefully set up and researched the setting, making the novel's setting look very complete. The rhythm of this novel is also very compact, and the timeline jumps very generously. Sometimes, just after reading the book, I realize that more than ten years have passed (`Dan´). The details are appropriate, which reduces the fatigue when reading. ,, There is another point that I think affects the interest of reading. The heroine's current goal is too vague, and there is no clear goal as the main line. This also leads to the plot of the novel being relatively scattered, and there is less sense of expectation when reading. (The evaluation is more subjective) In short, I am very optimistic about this book. This is a novel that is getting better and better.
October Book Review
I found this book from a friend's book list a while ago. I just started reading it in the past few days. I have read almost 100 chapters so far. Because I have read a lot of male-channeled novels before, it was a very novel experience to watch a female protagonist cultivating an immortal for the first time. The heroine is a village girl with a birthmark on her face, who has been laughed at since she was a child. After cultivating as an immortal, the heroine has a flexible mind. She created several spells to speed up her training, so she can still practice quickly even if her spiritual roots are not good. Of course, the author also explains the reasons later. Generally speaking, there are no obvious loopholes. It is a work worth reading for mortals to cultivate immortality. Let's talk about the advantages of this book: First of all, the heroine's character is firm, wise and courageous. He handles interpersonal relationships very well and makes steady progress on the road to immortality and Taoism. There are no entangled emotional stories in the book, which is great because there is no cp. As a reader, the main thing to read is the cultivation of immortality. Secondly, the writing style is simple and not exaggerated, and the combat power setting is also very reasonable. Although the plot is not particularly novel, it has all the elements it should have, and there is no poisonous point that is too clever. In my eyes, this is a very qualified work. I saw that some readers in the book circle have different opinions, which is actually normal. After all, it often happens that others are poisonous. To sum up, there are several main difficulties: Some people think that the heroine's character is too strong at the beginning and there is no transformation process. But first of all, it is easy to understand that the heroine has poor appearance since she was a child. After being ridiculed, her mind is more mature than her peers. At the same time, does the female protagonist necessarily have to undergo a process of changing her mind? This statement is somewhat stereotyped. There are also people who cannot accept that the heroine has full luck, but let alone the fact that there are people in the book who are luckier than the heroine, how can the protagonist become an immortal if she only has bad luck? As for some book friends who say that the settings in the book are a bit routine, I agree. The style of the book is indeed a bit old-fashioned. But benevolent people have different opinions. Personally, I like this kind of orthodox step-by-step approach to immortality. Sea cucumber and lobster are delicious, but home-cooked food also has its merits. Being able to use routines well is also a skill.
Not bad, come on
I like no cp. The author's writing is good. The heroine in the author's novel is innovative in martial arts from point to point, and the logic is reasonable. The heroine has a good temperament, is dedicated to the Tao, is good at thinking, dares to innovate, is smart and hard-working, she is my favorite heroine! The author works hard, I hope the results will get better and better, and I hope you will get a high-quality product soon!
The fat intestines are good, not watery at all, the orthodox fairy tale, the heroine's mentality is also first-class, the spiritual root is not important anymore
October Book Review
I found this book from a friend's book list a while ago. I just started reading it in the past few days. I have read almost 100 chapters so far. Because I have read a lot of male-channeled novels before, it was a very novel experience to watch a female protagonist cultivating an immortal for the first time. The heroine is a village girl with a birthmark on her face, who has been laughed at since she was a child. After cultivating as an immortal, the heroine has a flexible mind. She created several spells to speed up her training, so she can still practice quickly even if her spiritual roots are not good. Of course, the author also explains the reasons later. Generally speaking, there are no obvious loopholes. It is a work worth reading for mortals to cultivate immortality. Let's talk about the advantages of this book: First of all, the heroine's character is firm, wise and courageous. He handles interpersonal relationships very well and makes steady progress on the road to immortality and Taoism. There are no entangled emotional stories in the book, which is great because there is no cp. As a reader, the main thing to read is the cultivation of immortality. Secondly, the writing style is simple and not exaggerated, and the combat power setting is also very reasonable. Although the plot is not particularly novel, it has all the elements it should have, and there is no poisonous point that is too clever. In my eyes, this is a very qualified work. I saw that some readers in the book circle have different opinions, which is actually normal. After all, it often happens that others are poisonous. To sum up, there are several main difficulties: Some people think that the heroine's character is too strong at the beginning and there is no transformation process. But first of all, it is easy to understand that the heroine has poor appearance since she was a child. After being ridiculed, her mind is more mature than her peers. At the same time, does the female protagonist necessarily have to undergo a process of changing her mind? This statement is somewhat stereotyped. There are also people who cannot accept that the heroine has full luck, but let alone the fact that there are people in the book who are luckier than the heroine, how can the protagonist become an immortal if she only has bad luck? As for some book friends who say that the settings in the book are a bit routine, I agree. The style of the book is indeed a bit old-fashioned. But benevolent people have different opinions. Personally, I like this kind of orthodox step-by-step approach to immortality. Sea cucumber and lobster are delicious, but home-cooked food also has its merits. Being able to use routines well is also a skill.
Great book. As for the martial arts field, there are not too many redundant words, sounds, and lights to describe it, and the imaginary picture comes to mind. The literary field part, about spiritual practice and understanding, relies on the words of ancient books, coupled with real life feelings, and the description is profound, which shows the author's knowledge. There are also guest appearances of field farming and insect breeding, which has a quiet atmosphere like the famous farms in neighboring countries. It is not the current version of revenge, beauty, stallion, and undefeated genius, but a pure and upward heart that is loyal to oneself.
October Book Review
I found this book from a friend's book list a while ago. I just started reading it in the past few days. I have read almost 100 chapters so far. Because I have read a lot of male-channeled novels before, it was a very novel experience to watch a female protagonist cultivating an immortal for the first time. The heroine is a village girl with a birthmark on her face, who has been laughed at since she was a child. After cultivating as an immortal, the heroine has a flexible mind. She created several spells to speed up her training, so she can still practice quickly even if her spiritual roots are not good. Of course, the author also explains the reasons later. Generally speaking, there are no obvious loopholes. It is a work worth reading for mortals to cultivate immortality. Let's talk about the advantages of this book: First of all, the heroine's character is firm, wise and courageous. He handles interpersonal relationships very well and makes steady progress on the road to immortality and Taoism. There are no entangled emotional stories in the book, which is great because there is no cp. As a reader, the main thing to read is the cultivation of immortality. Secondly, the writing style is simple and not exaggerated, and the combat power setting is also very reasonable. Although the plot is not particularly novel, it has all the elements it should have, and there is no poisonous point that is too clever. In my eyes, this is already a very qualified work. I saw that some readers in the book circle have different opinions, which is actually normal. After all, it often happens that others are poisonous. To sum up, there are mainly the following tangles: Some people think that the heroine's character is too strong at the beginning and there is no transformation process. But first of all, it is easy to understand that the heroine has poor appearance since she was a child. After being ridiculed, her mind is more mature than her peers. At the same time, does the female protagonist necessarily need to have a process of changing her mind? This statement is somewhat stereotyped. There are also people who cannot accept that the heroine has full luck, but let alone the fact that there are people in the book who are luckier than the heroine, how can the protagonist become an immortal if she only has bad luck? As for some book friends who say that the settings in the book are a bit routine, I agree. The style of the book is indeed a bit old-fashioned. But benevolent people have different opinions. Personally, I like this kind of orthodox step-by-step approach to immortality. Sea cucumber and lobster are delicious, but home-cooked food also has its merits. Being able to use routines well is also a skill. I hope the author will keep updated and continue working hard!
I've finished watching it. The part about the spiritual world is skipped in the middle. The fairy world is much more beautiful than the spiritual world!
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❤️💋❤️💋❤️💋❤️💋❤️💋❤️💋 Happy New Year, author! Thank you for your continued diligence in updating during the Spring Festival. I love you so much! ! ! ! ! I like your novel. It is well written and uses casual description to depict the growth of the heroine. From your novels, I saw an ordinary person's experience of seizing luck. From your novels, I also saw how people with a hard-working and intelligent nature choose the direction of travel at critical points. There is a shadow of the workplace, a shadow of the business world, a shadow of life, a shadow of war, and a shadow of human nature... New readers passing by, believe me as a bookworm of more than ten years, this novel is good, good, and good! ! Be sure to read it patiently. If there are chapters that don't suit your taste, just skip them. Follow the author's heroine, live forever and gain insights together!
I have been reading books for more than ten years, and this is the best book on immortality that I have read in the past two years! Even my favorite heroine of all time. The heroine is resolute and resolute, and she also has a process of growth. The most important thing is that the growth process does not look aggrieved. The heroine has always been a top student, and she is not a fake top student. She is very hard-working, and allows you to understand and empathize with her hard work, which makes people like it very much. After decades of training in the world of cultivation, the heroine is bold and careful. She does things neatly and without being sloppy. She is thoughtful but not scheming. She is principled but flexible in doing things. I really like Xu Chunniang! ! If anyone has never seen a strong female person, Chun Niang is a typical female strong person. She is really too strong, from mental strength to ability. Many works with female protagonists tend to fall into stereotypes. They always portray the female protagonist as relatively talented and capable, but her mind is always immature and her character is weak. She has to go through back and forth in order to grow up, and many of them are still weak after they grow up! It's annoying, but the male protagonists in the male videos are not like this. They are all decisive from the beginning without any psychological pressure. I really don't like this subconscious idea that men are naturally stronger than women, but Xu Chunniang doesn't have it. She is determined by nature, and her determination is unobtrusive. She has her own principles, which makes people like her. In short, when you see Chun Niang, you will know that a woman who has already cultivated to immortality has climbed up from the bottom, and now a woman who has the ability to move mountains and fill seas should really be like this. Moreover, the author's writing style is good, the logic is clear, and the plot is compact. I really like it. Come on, author.
This book really doesn't seem to have a gold finger, but I don't know how much it is actually open. For example, if you go up to the Holy Mountain and cross the tower, no one can get here for thousands of years or hundreds of years. In a cultivation world and a sect, more than a dozen people will enter the secret realm every time after a competition. If you cross the tower, you can enter by giving a spiritual stone. Is it like this for thousands of years? More than 200 chapters, the heroine went to the competition on behalf of the sect. In the first level, Little World dug out more than 100 stones through induction. The heroine knew that Little World had the virtue of not spitting out bones when eating, but she still put things in it so generously. After eating, Little World did not let the heroine put any farts. Because of this, the sect ranked last in the competition. Even if she had a few pieces, she would not be laughed at by others. Is this how the heroine brings glory to the sect? He also said I would earn it back later, good guy! She doesn't know how to practice weapons, or how to practice elixirs, or how to make talismans. She only knows how to make simple contracts with beasts, so she can only win them back in the ring. How dare she say that she can win them back? If I were one of the people inside, I would have to laugh at her. As a result, no matter how hard I tried to practice weapons and alchemy, I couldn't cheat or give cheats. It didn't make sense to suddenly become proficient. So I gave him a golden finger on the beast! ! That's right, it's that little tiger ~ The golden finger given is really outrageous I really can't stand it anymore. The protagonist pretends to be working hard to practice, to challenge, to break through, and to win glory for the sect. However, in the end, he still opens the golden finger. Rare and rare treasures jump in front of the heroine, including a treasure-hunting mouse and an elixir worth 10,000 spiritual stones. Either a limited-time grandpa gives equipment and cheats, or a once-in-a-century golden platform. To bring honor to the sect, others saw the joke in the first level, and later on I had to rely on foreign objects for help (yes, I just think pets are foreign objects, and the little tiger was unconvinced at the beginning. Later, when he self-guided the strategy, it was really awesome. I thought there would be some life-or-death dependence before I opened my heart, but don't talk about tsundere attributes.) It's so funny that I've read so many cultivation novels. This is really pretending and independent.
Some people ask for a male protagonist to be inserted, but the author should definitely ignore it! Don't intersperse the male protagonist!
This book is really both beautiful and ugly. First, Little Walnut, and then the heroine goes on a mission to watch the puppet inheritance. It feels like feeding chocolate and shi at the same time
I couldn't stand it after reading more than 200 chapters. From the foreshadowing to the climax, there were no ups and downs, and the route was old-fashioned. From the first chapter to more than 200 chapters, the heroine builds a foundation. There are small bumps and big tribulations. The heroine's opportunities are very great, and the way to obtain them is very simple. To sum it up in one word: "Have an idea" When you encounter a demon cultivator, you will have an idea and fight back. When encountering a meteorite from the sky, it has its own spiritual fire, and as soon as an idea strikes, it feeds itself back into physical training. Entering the secret realm and stepping onto the rooftop, an idea occurred to me. During the period of Qi training, my soul left my body and I was the first to climb onto the rooftop and gain space. Summary: The heroine is the smartest in the world, and the others collectively use their wisdom just to set off the heroine's unparalleled wit.
I felt that the character of the heroine fell apart in the later stages. I felt very uncomfortable when I spent money to see the chapter where Little Walnut made his own decisions. Later, when I saw Little Walnut sucking up all the Hualong Pond, I couldn't stand it anymore. I felt that the heroine was not upright, a bit like a white lotus, and raising a Walnut was like an uncle.
I hope fellow Taoists who like this book will read it more! ! ! The author needs you! ! ! ๑•́₃•̀๑
When I saw the sect competition, I felt like I was watching an evil sect. The sect did not protect its disciples, and people kept dying in internal competitions. I was speechless.
Thoughts and suggestions after reading
I was first attracted by the title of the book (Chou Ya's Cultivation Story). After reading it, I was attracted by Xu Chunniang's struggle history of a little person. I watched the protagonist accumulate cultivation resources bit by bit, improve herself bit by bit, and there are also outstanding supporting characters. But after the separation from the evil-eyed beast, the story gradually became cliche, and the outstanding supporting characters disappeared. Fortunately, there were two spiritual beasts accompanying it, which could fill the gap a little bit. Since ascending to the spirit world, not only have there been almost no outstanding supporting characters (partners, villains, etc.), But the two spiritual beasts have also disappeared. The entire spiritual world has only had a more profound description of Wangtianhou. After accidentally living in the demon world, Wangtianhou has also disappeared. From the second half of the Cultivation World to the end of the Spirit World, it's like Xu Chunniang's stand-alone game. I kept subscribing until the end, more out of inertia than because the novel itself was very attractive, and I felt like it was a pity to abandon it. Give the author some suggestions, they may not be correct, they are for reference only. First: The description of the fairy world must have excellent supporting characters (decent characters, villains, friends, enemies, passers-by, people who are both good and evil, etc.); Second: It is not necessary to show the whole picture of the fairy world at the beginning. Do not set the protagonist who ascends to the fairy world to be at the bottom or to have a comprehension of the laws of the Tao that is far better than that of monks of the same level, so that he can easily cross levels to challenge. It allows the protagonist to fly to a remote place in the fairy world, and his strength is at the middle and lower levels of this place, and he slowly upgrades; Third: The description of the spiritual world. The protagonist does not rely much on external objects. The improvement of strength is more about the understanding of Tao and laws. The Law of the Great Dao is a very fictitious thing. It is difficult to write brilliantly in this aspect without reading a large number of classics and forming your own opinions. Even the Immortal World Chapter of "Mortals Cultivation to Immortality" was not written in this aspect and ended in a hurry. I think the Great Law of Immortality can be used as a shadow. The improvement of Xu Chunniang's strength requires not only understanding the Great Law, but also focusing on the accumulation of immortal cultivation resources. Just like when the protagonist first enters the world of cultivation, he acquires cultivation resources step by step. This gives readers a stronger sense of substitution and is more arousing. Resonance, the author, you are good at writing this, use your strengths and avoid weaknesses; Fourth: Reading the whole article, the author, you are not sensitive to numbers. In the world of cultivation and the spiritual world, when it comes to the numerical settings of spiritual stones and cultivation resources, it always feels quite awkward, even illogical. In the setting of this aspect in the Fairyland chapter, I hope that it can be carefully conceived and as reasonable as possible. In fact, many female video authors are like this. The descriptions of prices, numbers, etc. Are not very logical. If you are not sure, you can ask your friends to help you refer to it or send it out to readers to help you refer to it. Try to be as reasonable as possible; Fifth: Don't be anxious, think carefully, and write slowly. I can write another 2 million words for the fairyland chapter, and my monthly income is over 10,000, which is great. Finally, the above personal suggestions are for reference only. If they are wrong, just ignore them!
Generally speaking, it's okay, but the writing of the spiritual world and fairy world feels a bit perfunctory. What attracts people in fairy tale novels is not only the people, but also the scenery. If the author has read the legend of mortals cultivating immortals, you will know that the scenes of mortals in every place in the mortal world and the spiritual world are described to the bone. The vast world of cultivation is perfectly presented to book friends, instead of 80% of an article being dialogue. I hope the author will make a better book...
The heroine was okay in the early stage, but it was really hard to describe in the middle stage. First, the sect competition for resources was held back in the first round, and then she was slapped in the face in the third round. There was also a plot where the disciples of the same sect felt ashamed. Although it was a slap in the face, it was not comfortable at all, because the heroine was wrong in the first round. I don't know why I arranged such a plot. Then the puppet technique was auctioned, knowing that there was still a task, but he ignored the practice and asked his fellow sects to wait. Then the heroine felt embarrassed, but Senior Brother Zhuge had double standards, which was also very uncomfortable. There were a few other places where the heroine felt something was wrong, but think about it I must be overthinking it, so I just don't say it. It's too imprudent. I just wonder why the heroine is still alive. The author also deliberately points out that the heroine feels something is wrong. Oh my god I also found the demon soul there, but I just didn't want to go back to the sect, even though there were many excuses. , But this kind of news should be told to the sect when it is almost done. At that time, the heroine does not know that the sect already knows I feel that the plot between Zhuge and Shangguan was forcibly rounded out or inserted temporarily by the author, because some readers expressed dissatisfaction with the relevant plot before that Looking at the front, it's okay, but the back is really not good. This heroine is careless and annoying. I just wonder why she doesn't die and has a longer memory. I feel something is wrong. Do you think she is overthinking and is a qualified immortal cultivator? Isn't that how the ambush is buried?
It turned out that I gave up on writing (the reason was that I felt that the span was too fast and I was not used to being released to the later realms at once). I really haven't read any books recently and took them back to read again. This book is still good, at least the heroine is not as good as
This book and She is a Sword Cultivator are really the only two books that I can read recently. Other novels about female protagonists who are cultivating immortals without CP all focus on intrigues, and many of them describe how beautiful the heroine is. It is not impossible to set the heroine as a beauty, but the article always emphasizes Almond eyes, flawlessly white skin, slender waist, graceful curves, petal lips... Almost every chapter has them. These descriptions of appreciating the beauty of the heroine have nothing to do with cultivating immortality. It seems that these authors have switched careers from otaku writers. Although this book is a bit cliche, it is refreshing enough and has no particularly frustrating plot. The focus is also on the heroine cultivating immortality and stepping into the great path step by step. The character of the heroine is also very good. She is smart but not sophisticated, not a virgin but kind and has a bottom line. Overall, it suits me better. The author is currently writing about the spirit world, and hopes not to repeat the process of the lower world, otherwise the readability will be reduced.
I saw some readers saying that the heroine's golden finger is too big, that the other supporting characters are not as good as the heroine, and that the heroine has no long-term friends. Actually, I think this is good. Those who constantly describe the female protagonist being hindered and abused, or her cultivation level is always lower than that of the male protagonist/male partner, or taking the route of being the group's doting on the younger junior sister, etc., Etc., Are putting the cart before the horse. The focus of cultivating immortality is always on cultivating immortality and enlightenment, rather than love, friendship, etc. When I read fairy tales, I just watch the heroine continue to upgrade step by step until she stands proudly in the sky, understands the secrets of heaven, and becomes immortal in one fell swoop. The so-called golden finger is opportunity, which is an indispensable part of the process of cultivating immortality. Opportunity represents the heroine's continuous exploration and understanding of the world. The author actually writes this process quite well. In short, I still hope that the author will not be affected by the comments and stick to his own heart.
Don't watch it anymore, the supporting character's character is too outrageous
There are always people who inexplicably look down on Xu Chunniang, belittling 😅 that she has grown from a little Karami to a powerful person, and her long-term cultivation only increases her IQ. Others, whether they are little Karami or a powerful person, only have good skills but not brains, and their supporting roles are weak.
I think that Xu Chunniang in the Immortal World chapter is no longer the same as she used to be. Yes, she cultivated both immortality and demonism (after all, she cultivated demons), but her subsequent attitude towards others was really intolerable to me. It was completely different from before. That black-bone skeleton is so sincere and treats her so well. What she does is completely inconsistent. Is this still her? 😢 Hey, I really like this book (I like her character in the past)
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Everyone's intelligence dropped 100 times after rebirth, but I didn't change.
I really like the point of paying for originality, mortals cultivating immortality + no CP. The pace of the novel is good. But this success is too easy. Chunchun's qualifications were average, but Chunchun worked hard. Chunchun rolled his eyes and made another small trick. Chunchun defeated everyone in one fell swoop. Isn't hard work the most basic thing in real life? Don't others think about how to practice more efficiently? Although there is no golden finger, the IQ of the supporting characters is too low. The most worth writing point is definitely how ordinary people overcome this difficulty. The routine in the novel is that Chunchun encountered difficulties, but Chunchun was not afraid of difficulties, so Chunchun overcame the difficulties. It makes me feel very jealous. I feel that my life is not so easy. Xu Chunniang is an invisible lucky person.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh the author has actually finished it. I was halfway through it and planned to stock up more and read more slowly. I will see later that the author is working hard to update every day hahahahahahahaha. I look forward to the author starting a new book again.