Myriad Worlds: A Sacrifice from the Start

Hello author, you've written several books now. I have a small suggestion for you. One problem you have is that some of your settings conflict with the original works, not just in this book. This can be a major flaw and drive readers away, since most fans of fanfiction and multiverse stories are fans of the original works.

There's a similar story where the protagonist transmigrates to the same village as the ruthless brother, and they're both being sacrificed together. Then, the protagonist transmigrates into Journey to the West, and later fawns over the ruthless brother relentlessly. However, the ruthless brother eventually interrogates him about why his brother can't return. This led to a poorly executed ending.

The main character in this book has a personality that is quite pleasant to read. I previously read a book where the protagonist, a contemporary of Luo Feng, arrogantly blamed Hong for exposing Earth and even expelled everyone except Luo Feng and his own family. He claimed Hong wasn't on China's side while simultaneously removing others, clearly trying to gain something for himself – a hypocrite.

It suddenly occurred to me, will ruthless people's family relationships change in the future? 😏

It is recommended that the protagonist create their own methods and path. In the early stages, they can learn from and draw inspiration from the methods of others, but in the later stages, they must create their own methods and path. After all, the methods and paths of others are still their own, and only what they create themselves is the most suitable for them.

The protagonist's behavior is too simplistic; the author should pay attention to this in the future. His actions are too direct, and if intentional, it's tantamount to being a jerk. The truth isn't so simple; this behavior definitely damages his relationship with Number Ten. Don't treat him like a child; given that environment, he might be more mature than you.

In the novel *Perfect World*, only by creating your own path can you go further. You can never surpass the first person to cultivate the same method. For example, you can't surpass Laozi in cultivating the Primordial Chaos, the Jade Emperor in cultivating divinity, or Houtu in cultivating reincarnation.

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... Author, please pay attention to the synopsis. Isn't the main world *Covering the Sky*? Currently, most of the sixty-odd chapters are about *Swallowing the Stars*, and cultivation hasn't even started in the *Covering the Sky* world yet. This feels like a problematic point and could easily cause dissatisfaction among *Covering the Sky* fans who read the book based on the synopsis.

Cultivating the Devouring system directly within the world of "Covering the Sky"—isn't that creating a new method? Also, after reading the comments section of the previous book, I noticed the alignment between the Perfection and Devouring realms wasn't good, leading to constant arguments. I hope this book will have better alignment between realms.