My Balcony Leads to the Three Kingdoms

The writing is quite good, but I remember that Zhang Zhongjing seemed to have been the governor of Changsha. The author wrote about him in such a way that he was too ignorant and "flattered", which made me feel uncomfortable. Except for this, everything else is okay.

I feel like the protagonist's halo is too speechless, as if the whole world revolves around him. Especially the section in Chapter 24 when the soldiers and bandits attack. The protagonist is just an ordinary person. Goldfinger can only travel back and forth. According to the description in the book before the time travel, he was a businessman with low EQ and IQ. He was not responsible and would not care about others. His girlfriend was stolen by a friend. Moreover, the protagonist could leave the house to his ex without saying a word. He is cowardly and neglects his business. He always travels in the mountains to dig for medicine and does not do his job. Isn't this a sign of lack of IQ? I just came to the village not long after the time travel, and I am not familiar with the place. In addition, the person who passed through the soul is a scholar, and he is a sick man. He really has no power. In addition, the family wants to provide him with guard maids, so he does not want them. Why would a group of hunters who are familiar with the mountain conditions, know how to hide and ambush, have strong skills (a prerequisite for using bows) and have many years of hunting experience, actually accept the command to carry out mountain combat? Why, just because he is the protagonist? What are your abilities that you don't know? It was arranged, you really dared to take command, and you still won 😂 You don't have the courage to do anything, and you don't have the ak47, how did you win!

In addition, Cai Yan's nickname was Zhaoji, and she was changed to Wenji because she avoided tabooing Sima Zhao. You, the Sima family, have already started avoiding taboos before you became emperor?

I don't mean anything else, I just want to release the chapter review of the first chapter, and enter it if needed

The first chapter of this book gave me the feeling that a man has been cheated on, and he still has to give money and a house to the woman who cheated on him. He must lick the dog more. Are men so perverted now? The author must be from a female channel. .

I purposely exceeded the limit and paid to babble. The author doesn't understand the clans of the Han Dynasty at all. The problem is that he also said that he had checked The poor and poor families in the Han Dynasty are two different things from the poor families after the Tang Dynasty. The clans of the Han Dynasty were formed based on some unique mainstream works and based on the family. The upper-level officials are all these people. If you are not in the same circle, you cannot get in. What else is a clan? How can an official become a scholar? Recommendations for official positions. So, birth resources are fixed. Who do you think Yuan Shi is in the Three Kingdoms? Because top-level resources have dominated the market for generations, do you still want to move up without being attached? Is the gate valve a joke? What is a gate valve? If you are not in the same circle, in their eyes you are no different from ordinary people.

The subject matter is quite good, but the character design and behavioral background are a bit outrageous. A little gangster dares to mess with a wealthy family, and the Wei family is not an ordinary wealthy family. It feels like they are not normal people, and it is a pity that it cannot be brought in.

Hello, Cai Wenji and Zhen Mi are not from the same era.

Let me tell you this, author, you have dissuaded many readers with this first chapter. Otherwise, if you subscribe, you will definitely be able to mention it further.

The reason why many people like to write fantasy and infinite heavens is because historical writing is not something you can play around with. Either you are very familiar with a certain history, or you need to be fully prepared. It's okay to write based on your own ideas. The comments said that Zhang Zhongjing, who was a prefect, had no background to be promoted as filial and honest; The plot insisted that he knew that he was from the Wei family in Hedong, and his family came to Dong Zhuo to return his wife. Dong Zhuo had a relationship with his wife's father, and he was the protagonist who faked the corpse from the mourning hall but did not know that his wife was Cai Zhaoji. Do you know what logical flaws are?

What a wise man. Is this Wei's surname Lu or Wei? How can a newbie be so presumptuous? Who is she? She dared to act like this in front of Mrs. Cai, not to mention that her father asked Wei for help. Could it be that she thought Wei was Lu's subordinate? Come to be a princess? Or is it that Wei Naifang is a dog-licker and drools when he sees Lu, so Lu Ling is full of confidence?

Don't write about your ex-girlfriend. You cheated on the protagonist at the beginning, and now she's jealous when she comes back. What do you want? Is this an attempt to drive away readers?

Let me make a suggestion here. It's best not to write about women in the first chapter. Giving a house to someone else after being cheated is like giving a woman a house to another man, even though she counterattacked in the end. But it still doesn't change the fact that you'll be given a house if you're cheated. So what if the woman regrets it? But it still can't change the past of being given a house after being cheated. For example: I was bitten by a dog, but I fed it food after I was bitten. In time, you got so powerful that you smashed the dog to pieces, ate its flesh and peeled off its skin, but afterwards you still occasionally think of the past bite by the dog. It was like a thorn in the heart. No matter how powerful it becomes in the future, the thorn has still penetrated into it.

Let me tell you, this heroine has never pushed her, is she just waiting for others to give her a bull's head? ?

Forget it if it is written slowly, I don't know what the point of adding Lu Bu's daughter is. I am disgusted. Lu Bu dare not speak loudly. Although he is raised like a son and likes to dance with knives and sticks, it does not mean that there is something wrong with his head.

There are three golden chapters. Can you read them all from the beginning? In the first chapter, the good guy was cheated and sent to his room. He went straight home in disgrace. He put the cuckold firmly on, let alone saving it for a slap in the face. How long has it been since? The starting point asked for follow-up reading to give recommendations. How dare you start like this? Chapter 2: Wen Ji lost her husband just after she got married, but she was still a virgin after three years of marriage. She was forced to pretend to be the original one. Is Wei Zhongdao gay or afraid of women? Many people say that a sick man can't move, but if he runs away as soon as he passes through it, isn't he a sick man? I don't understand those herbal dragon bone stalactites in Chapter 3, but I just think it would be nice to have so many of them in one place.

Can the author stop writing about his ex-girlfriend? Why don't you leave this disgusting person alone?

The writing is pretty good, I have the idea to continue reading. I hope I don't make the same mistakes as other authors. Don't deliberately restrict pig's feet, people who can travel between the two worlds. It's annoying to have to impose some mentally handicapped restrictions.

I guess I failed to write it. It already has a fantasy flavor. If I want to write more coherently, I can only go in the direction of spiritual recovery, fantasy and cultivation. What else is it called Three Kingdoms?

It's like traveling through Jia Baoyu. People can't. The first waste disadvantage. And Diao Chan doesn't exist. That person should be Mrs. Du. Anyway, what if we have so many girls and add Mrs. Du? Why write it as a gift? If you don't want to write, just don't write. If you write it, you cannot send it.

It's a fake corpse update. If you can't continue downloading it, just cut it.

The article talks about this artillery shape.

Update faster, faster. Why did the author suddenly stop updating?

Hurry up and finish it, don't interrupt updates