Qingyun, Apprenticed to Wan Jianyi at the Beginning

The indigenous fans are also convinced, I might as well re-read the original work

So the protagonist is aboriginal? Goodbye!

You are really awesome, you dare to use native language when writing to the heavens.

This kind of book is only suitable for novices. For me, this book also has a novice author. Alas, please read more books before writing. This kind of routine and this kind of plot became popular more than ten years ago. If you can write, just write. If you can't, then stop writing. The more you read, the more awkward it becomes, just like a child writing a composition.

It's very well written, don't write it again.

The latest few pictures are not good. They are too messy and have no structure at all. The protagonist's personality is not very likable. Author, you must know that everyone is here to read the same article. .

How can I become a disciple of Wan Jianyi? It's impossible. First of all, you have to have no master, and then you have to enter the Qingyun Forbidden Land, so how is it possible? So impossible

It's been a long time since I saw the Zhu Xian fan

It's a good book, but~goodbye Aboriginal┐(´-｀)┌

Is this going to follow the path of the original Zhang Xiaofan? First he rebelled and joined the Ghost King Sect. Lu Xueqi was heartbroken and practiced sword dancing for ten years. Then after a series of events (emotional entanglement with Lu Xueqi), the Qingyun Sect faced the disaster of annihilation. Then the protagonist stepped forward in the crisis with the Zhuxian Sword, turned the tide, solved all crises, reconciled with Lu Xueqi, and then lived in seclusion with her two daughters, and lived happily together ever since. If this is the case, there will be nothing interesting to watch. The plot is the same as the original work, but the ending may be better 😅

Those who penetrate the script must upgrade quickly, as there is no future for being a younger brother.

Is the heroine Baguio or Lu Xueqi?

Goodbye, natives