Confronted with Xu Xiao at the Beginning

The author probably wanted to create a historical picture like in the snow, but his writing skills were slightly inferior. Let me give you a little suggestion, you can imitate, but you will never be able to reach the level of Xue Zhong when you write in Xue Zhong. Maybe it would be better to change the world view and start a new one

The only thing I don't like is that the protagonist marries Xu Zhihu, which is equivalent to a famous anti-Japanese general during the Republic of China marrying the daughter of the Japanese Emperor or Prime Minister.

Looking at the title, I thought there was finally a book about being an enemy of Beiliang and eventually killing Xu Xiao's family. I was looking forward to it in vain.

It's outrageous. I thought I would wipe out Beiliang Liyang. The result was so disappointing.

What was it written? It was a mess. He was stabbed but he ran to help his daughter and even took the daughter of his enemy. I was speechless. The main character was more disgusting than a virgin bitch.

What the fw, still a bully, a bastard?

To be honest, this book looks awkward. On the one hand, he is willing to fight and die for Chu, showing how loyal he is, but then he turns around and marries the daughter of the general who destroyed the city of Chu.

Stupid b, the enemy of the country and the family, marrying the daughter of the enemy

I was confused when I read it. The author wanted to write about the general manager's mood, but what he showed was messy. It was very messy. It was a spoiler, it was for nothing, and he forcibly turned the protagonist into a waste.

Let's change the title of the book, it's selling dog meat with sheep's heads

What the hell, time travelers can still have their homes stolen. Stop watching

After reading Chapter 5, I almost lost my life. The co-author is Liang Beiliang again.

18 Years later. When the Chu Kingdom was restored, Emperor Liyang died. The invincible Confucian scholar Cao Changqing joined forces with Zhang Yicai, the overlord of Chu, to visit Tai'an City. Cao Guanzi gave him 18 chess pieces. All 18 squares of Tai'an City were destroyed. The overlord's gift was overwhelming Mount Tai. He grabbed Longhu Mountain from Guangling Road and threw it at Tai'an City. Although it was broken by an eunuch, he went to Liyang Palace. They were all destroyed, all the princes died, and all the vassal kings of the Liyang clan raised armies to fight for each other. The world was in chaos. In the same year, Xu Xiao died of illness and Beimang went south. Xu Fengnian led Beiliang's 300,000 cavalry in Jubei City and the entire army was destroyed. Beimang's iron cavalry was wiped out, and Da Chu swept across the grassland, wiping out Beimang. The following year, Da Chu took the power of victory and went south to destroy Liyang, sweeping all the kings along the way. In the same year, the city of Tai'an was broken, and the false emperor Zhao Heng was captured by hundreds of officials from the Liyang family. He wanted to offer himself to the army, but the overlord refused, and the city was destroyed in three days. On the eve of the city's destruction, all the families in the city were slaughtered by Zhao Gou of Liyang. Later, Chen Zhibao, who mysteriously disappeared after the battle in Jubeicheng, appeared and massacred the Liyang Zhao family in order to avenge his adoptive mother, Princess Wu Su of Beiliang. Liyang Zhaogou refused to surrender, but they were all killed by Chen Zhibao with one shot. Then Chen Zhibao and a female flag bearer of Dachu flew to the gate of heaven to reincarnate the Qing Emperor. The overlord recognized the loyalty of everyone in Liyang Zhaogou. All were given generous burials. It's just that Cao Changqing was curious about why Zhao Gouzhong used Beiliang Dao in the last battle. Although leader Zhao Gou said it was Xiuchun Dao, Cao Changqing felt that he, a land god, could not have brain and eye problems.

It's so disgusting. I want to be a dog, but I don't think so. I want to be domineering, but I don't know what it means to be a dog. It's very chaotic. If I like Xu Xiao's family, I mainly focus on their family. They are both domineering and like some people.

What is it about? The preface doesn't match the afterword, it's a mess. I just laughed. This book has collapsed.

First of all, the transition is not good. You write here and the next sentence ends somewhere. It's too confusing. Then I knew the ending at the beginning and had no desire to read on. I read fanfics just because I wanted to see you break the ending of the original novel. Then you gave me another ending, even though I knew you must have written it for more than a year.

Eunuch, you cheated the system and still lost so miserably, you are really a useless protagonist.

This inexplicable flashback made me confused, the preface and the follower are inconsistent

Shennong tested the poison and was persuaded to quit in Chapter 8. This novel is written in leaps and bounds, and the previous chapter has basically nothing to do with the next. Chapter 6 is directly about memoirs. . . Good guy, his poison has reached a certain level.

I was wrong, I shouldn't have disbelieved those in the comment section. What is this Chapter 5 about?

What the hell are you writing? The preface doesn't match the postscript.

The subject matter is okay, but it's all for nothing! It seems like the author is in a hurry? There are a lot of typos and it seems incoherent. I can't describe the feeling of fighting 😅😅😅

Seeing so many complaints, I felt relieved, and saw that the fourth one was successfully dismissed.

I didn't understand the golden chapter three.

Does anyone have any recommendations for fan fiction about the swordsmanship in the snow? Thank you

I finally found a book about Jiuzhou Piaomiaolu, but it ended 😭

What a waste, even if there is a system, you can't win. Wouldn't you leave if you knew you couldn't win? He was arrested and imprisoned for twenty years. What a piece of trash.

I'll take exam 1 tomorrow, take a day off and don't wait. Յ(¯ㅂ¯Յ)

Is there no period in the author's perception?

I went to the comment section and was blocked again.