Proving the Dao Across Ten Thousand Worlds

I don't understand why, once in Swallowed Star, the protagonist doesn't seize the time to cultivate? As a transmigrator, he should understand that without strength, one is nothing but an ant. To arrive in such a world and instead indulge in nothing but women and wild fantasies is truly baffling.

So many chapters have passed, what is the protagonist rambling on about? Swallowing the Stars isn't an urban romance novel, so why not write the main plot and instead ramble on about useless things?

Get a world ring and collect beauties.

You should just write slice-of-life urban stories, stop with the action-packed genre, you can't even grasp the key points. Back to *Swallowed Star*, you've written dozens of chapters and still haven't shown any cultivation; it's more like a sea than water.

It's been over fifty chapters of filler before the cultivation even begins, it's just dragging on and on, the pacing is too slow, there's no clear theme or it never really gets to the point, it's not interesting to read.

Yyds

The author made the protagonist somewhat ill, deliberately introduced an enemy, and then dragged it out for ages. Before the paid chapters, there wasn't a single satisfying moment in the entire story; it was incredibly frustrating. Many authors writing multiverse novels would just rush through these transitional worlds at the beginning if they didn't include a female lead. Knowing the plot but still stuck in this endless loop...

To be honest, the author would have been better off writing slice-of-life scenes with a strong plot. The very first dungeon opening was quite good, and the slice-of-life scenes within the Devouring world were also excellent. However, this is a fantasy world, and while it would be fine for a cinematic fantasy world with lower combat power, it's a main world where combat power increases…

It's not that writing slice-of-life stories is wrong; after all, this is a cosmic story. You can write slice-of-life stories after time travel, but there shouldn't be too many slice-of-life stories in Swallowed Star.

I hope you won't ruin your future again.