Kamen Rider Kuuga from the Star Stealing Family

Author, why do you repeat your chapters every time and only revise them the next day? It's so troublesome.

I'll give you this 👍. If you cut it off, it will be 🔪

6. This is what the author calls intervention in the plot. After writing so much, the emotional protagonist is here to record the love moments of the star-stealing male and female protagonists? Does the protagonist revolve around them? Can't you write more about the protagonist's own story? Persuade to quit persuade to quit

Alas, Ryusei, the most miserable male protagonist in Chinese comics, has a daily routine. As mentioned before, the demon world is a high-level plane. Ryusei has become a demon lord, but he is still beaten when he comes back. Logically speaking, doesn't the devil Ryuxing beat everything when he returns to earth?

Please! Not to mention that Liu Xing is the male protagonist in the first place, and it is natural for the female protagonist to be with him in September. The original author, under pressure from the 90th Party and his disgusting attitude of wanting to take both sides, later wrote Liu Xing as a passerby. It's better to just stay in the demon world. What's not there in the demon world? In the end, I even think that bitch Yue Yue is not worthy of Liu Xing, okay? Is it still reasonable for me to want to have two boats? (Although it's the author's fault, he succeeded in making me sick of this character.)

Lilith, there is still a month left to finish. Severe decline in level

I remember the star-stealing ceiling is Demon Lord Ryusei

I feel that it is not suitable to use Kongga, because the ultimate has will judgment, and the character of the protagonist is unlikely. It is better to use Yajituo, and the infinitely evolving Yajituo can make up the form at will.

It's a bit self-indulgent. In the early stage, I have been talking about settings at large. Readers like to see your settings? A good setting should be integrated into the book as the background and slowly explained, and it has a very poisonous point in web novels. The system can speak and will alert the protagonist when encountering danger. This is really a very poisonous point. Then there is the so-called changing of the storyline, there is Kamen Rider, it has already collapsed to the point where it is impossible to collapse again. He also said that contact with the target will have unpredictable consequences. Is there anything more unpredictable than the appearance of Kamen Rider? If it weren't for the fact that the subject matter was one of the few comics of my childhood, I would not have read it.

The ending of Stealing Stars is so disgusting, Jiu Liu is the true love

To be honest, this movie was originally called Stealing the Star in September, not Stealing the Nineteenth Moon. Zhou Gou gave up his face for Qiami and did not dare to release it at the end. I would rather not have this September. Doesn't Liu Xing deserve a better woman? I feel like Little Witch is pretty good

Three questions. One is, apart from the addition of a Kong me, does this book have any changes? Gurungi has no impact on the plot. The author has also been using Xuan Yue's layout as a reason to explain why the plot should not be changed. I guess the literary and martial arts will definitely not be able to save it. In the end, I still followed the original plot of Stealing Stars. What is the use of your Kong me? Secondly, after reading other people's comments in the comment area, I feel that if you want to use Kamen Rider, it is better to choose Yajituo. Keep evolving and get new forms. You must be empty and don't always sublimate. Let's change it a little. Absorbing electricity must be sublimation. Let's get some new forms. Third, the protagonist is really too pretentious. The author gave the protagonist the image of Jotaro, but there is no such feeling at all. It feels like he knows the plot to show off. He smiles at every turn, but in fact nothing has changed. Should he be injured, should he be injured, should he die, or should he die, or else, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah. I'm just a Kamen Rider passing by. What kind of Kamen Rider are you? You're a joke rider, right? And the word count of this book is really low. Otherwise, why don't you just concentrate on writing the original plot, and don't write about part-time work? There are also plots about family members in the orphanage. It's boring. Does anyone really read these plots? Anyway, author, do you want to change it or not? I am desperate for your book.

September is really not as good as the little witch, the little witch is the eternal god. After the comparison option "Witch" came out... September is getting more and more crappy.

Stealing Stars in September: It tells the passionate and inspirational story of the growth of the male protagonist Liu Xing, who was unwilling to fall and had dreams, and through his own efforts, was reduced to a dog licker step by step, and finally had nothing.

It's really boring to watch all the way. The male protagonist sometimes doesn't even appear for most of the time. The main scenes are between Ryuxing and September. As for the male protagonist, there are only two things to do, except beating up Gulangji every day like going to work. The rest of the time I basically spend time outside, and then I get older. You might as well just let Ryusei be the protagonist and get the Kuga belt. I have even thought about the main plot. At first, Ryuse accidentally entered the ruins, and then accidentally released Da Cuba. Just when he was about to be killed, Rick suddenly blew up the body and barely saved Ryuse. His belt was also taken off by Da Cuba. After Ryuse learned everything about the incident, he knew that he had caused a big disaster, so he took the empty belt with him, hoping to make up for the mistakes he had made.

After reading Chapter 30, except for the moment in the church where I felt a little bit of fighting consciousness, I feel that the protagonist's thoughts are completely unable to meet the requirements for transforming into an almighty form. Although Gurungi is indeed an experience monster, even the protagonist himself thinks so. Does he really have the will to protect? I still play it purely as a game, because if I can't defeat the higher-level Grunge, I feel that the experience monster has been defeated by others. I think this idea should not be taken lightly. The fifth generation fought to protect people's smiles from the beginning to the end. There was no thought to consider whether he could win or not. All he had was the indomitable will. After defeat, he desperately searched for a way to win, and then kept training himself. He found that electric shocks can strengthen himself, so he did not care whether he could withstand it, but also strengthened himself to protect others. Although it takes time to describe the growth of the protagonist in the novel, it still feels wrong. Is the protagonist treating the battle like a game?

If you don't know how to describe it, just write a long explanation. Obviously a showdown can solve the problem, but if you can't make up the plot development, just let the system say no, which will affect the subsequent timeline. Then it won't have any impact if you have this extra role, right? Also, during the previous fight with the spider, after Qi Xiaosa arrived, the spider felt something was wrong and ran away. Qi Xiaosa chased the spider instead of chasing the protagonist who stayed behind? If there had been no showdown, Qi Xiaosa would have just let the protagonist go, right? Is it reasonable? Instead of chasing the slow-moving protagonist who stays in place, chase the spider that takes one step ahead and moves fast?

Emm If you want to write a heroine, I suggest you write someone with a seventh sense like Cang Yue, because the protagonist will live a long time because of the belt (Rick died the moment Daguaba took off the belt). It may not be good to write a passerby heroine (although the author may add it, but generally the knights in knight stories are female knights, but many people write female knights who do not have the spirit of knights), so it would be better to write a heroine like Lilith or Cang Yue.

It doesn't work. To be honest, your system is superfluous. It's not that I dislike the system text, but I feel that it is unnecessary for your system to have this system warning. Does it have any effect on your plot advancement? The essence of fan fiction is to watch the collision between the protagonist and the original work, not to restart the timeline at every turn.

It's poisonous. Kuuga and Grungji have already appeared, and a fucking system pops up saying that the timeline has collapsed. Tsk tsk. It's already collapsed and it's still fucking collapsing.

Author, come and take a look, the official admits that Sora can explode

The original setting of Kuuga was only around the surface, and there would be no advantage if it was not strengthened.

The author said in the picture