The Boss Travels Through My Side

I will surpass them step by step step by step! I want to be a great god, I want to be the biggest great god! (Broken sound)

This introduction to the first chaos in history?

I said this book was okay, but I don't know how I read it. Anyway, I died of poison after reading five chapters. The writing was messy and I didn't know what to write.

This subject matter is most likely either short or sent.

In fact, there is nothing wrong with the author's writing skills and creativity. The main problem is that the story lines feel messy. It's a lot for readers to juxtapose two or three story lines when reading. How much stuff has the author packed? And entangled together. What a mess. It feels like the author is in a hurry. I want to write well. But too eager. I wish I could cram everything in in the first hundred chapters.

The writing is quite good. As long as you don't supervise it and it doesn't collapse in the future, there will be no problem with the whole book.

Fifty-eight

If you want to write well, don't get involved with the official. Not many people want to read the dog-licking type.

One more beast

It's a pretty good story, although it has a few shortcomings, but it's still quite comfortable to read. I hope the author can write it down well. As long as it doesn't stretch my hips and nothing else, I'm sure I can book it all!

Martial arts + super powers? It feels like I'm going to rush out.

I feel like I wanted to write about a super-awakened protagonist who pretends to be cool, and some random characters, but it feels a bit messy.

Is the undead man in your profile a blacksoul?

Looking at the introduction, I feel a bit confused!

The protagonist is too loser and has very low thinking ability

Let me tell you my current thoughts on this book. It is that the part about real superpowers and Tang Jiu was very boring. It is recommended that you try not to dig a big hole as it will not end well. Also, when writing this type of novel, don't waste space on original characters. The author, a new author, has limited writing skills and cannot write more than wonderfully.