The Common Master of the Ages, Opening up All Directions

It would be better to let the protagonist secretly farm in remote places, develop technology, and then go out to fight for the world, destroy the Jin Kingdom, destroy the so-called Fusong ruffians and rivers and lakes, plus destroy the overseas barbarians to unify the world, kill the demons and clean up the underworld, incarnate as the Netherworld Emperor, and then use the Human Emperor to ascend to the Heavenly Emperor, and the Human Emperor will also become the incarnation.

The title of this book has been officially changed to "Co-owner of Eternity, Opening Up All Directions"

The book is a mess, with a fragmented plot and contradictory characterizations. It gave me a headache. There is no problem with making many changes, but the main plot is not highlighted. Please pay attention to this. The characters need to be described more, otherwise the impression will not be deep, and the behavior must also be paid attention to. In addition, the training system and combat descriptions are very weak, and the difference between strength and weakness is not obvious. I like the subject matter and will try to improve it.

Come on, don't give up, the score of the new book is almost not a problem, I will give you a monthly vote when it is released😁

It lacks a clear description of the main line. It should be better to put more effort into the main line of the plot and connect the stories together. Now each episode is a bit short.

The characters are well drawn. After reading only a few chapters, the protagonist is portrayed as indecisive. Others want to kill you, but you still let others go. You read the book to see knives dancing on your fingertips. What you read is a thrilling story. Everyone is ordinary enough. There is no need to read the ordinary story you wrote. After all, no matter how well you portray it, it is just an ordinary story and cannot make any waves. What's there to see?

When will the author's new book be released? .

I have to admit, I can't understand it. After reading dozens of pictures, I couldn't figure out what the protagonist wanted to do. He was just jumping around repeatedly.

The resume looks good, let's see how well the author writes it.

The author writes well, and I give you a recommendation vote.

Well written. Happy New Year to the author.

The author's writing is very good, faster and faster

It's coming, it's coming, I wish the author's new book a hit

I wish the author a happy new year and may the new book be a hit

Don't mindlessly write how the protagonist shows off and how powerful he is. First write the enemy as the protagonist, and then let the main protagonist defeat him, so that it will look good. Personally I think: Give the protagonist an unbeatable person at the right time, and then let the protagonist escape to a very dangerous place to develop (the first part should have a sense of oppression and unwillingness, and later give the protagonist a certain amount of danger and good luck to survive in the dangerous place)

The first chapter of the game is a dungeon, and the cheats and so on are baffling.

Don't you know that this is a similar parallel world? It feels like the pig's foot is drifting with the waves, and there is not much to see. You must know that this pig's foot is a time-traveler. Seeing me, Dajin, doesn't show any sympathy. The writing is like a brainless pig's foot in a random martial arts novel. It feels like it is useless and does not have the feeling of a time-traveler.

Are we going to write about spiritual energy recovery later?,, The specific writing is okay, but I feel like I am drifting with the flow and there is no sense of the main plot.

Xingsun, pig's trotters, are you not a time traveler? Can you write a serious time traveler instead of an aboriginal? Pig's trotters, even the founding leader of the country doesn't know it and is speechless. What are you writing about?

This plug-in is already very good, but it seems that the protagonist basically does not take the initiative to explore it. It is really boring to always do it passively.

When will it be put on the shelves? ? ?