I, Doomsday Superman, Join the Chat Group

It's six chapters, and I'm still talking nonsense. Was this book commissioned by a navy? The golden three chapters wait until the end of the third one to reveal the protagonist, and then there are all kinds of nonsense. If you don't know how to write, don't open the book! The settings are adapted from those in many books, which is good, but the most annoying thing is that the plot line is not extended, but there is so much nonsense in the three golden chapters! Later, after the chat group appeared, less than a chapter later, the person who introduced people from other worlds was another bunch of nonsense!

Overall, it's so long-winded that it makes you irritated. The main character and background seem to be confusing.

If you set the starting point too high, it will feel like it will collapse.

Alas~ The number of words per day is already low, and there are too many chapters that are too ridiculous~ Goodbye by fate

Waste of an investment opportunity

Come on, author, write according to your ideas.

The author's writing is really good. There is no trick at the moment. Good luck, author.

All I can say is that the author was able to create a character that most people hate, which is quite impressive. I died of a poisonous attack. See you again.

It's the seventh day, let's all spit before leaving.

Moreover, in this version of the author, Superman has no obvious shortcomings. The only shortcoming is that his sanity may be suppressed by Doomsday, and kryptonite is basically useless to him. If kryptonite keeps him close, it will only speed up his rampage. That is to say, he directly changes from the state of Superman to the state of Doomsday, and his combat power goes directly to the rampage. And later on, Superman has begun to adapt to Doomsday's state. As a result, the kryptonite will at most make his consciousness weak, and then make it easier for Doomsday to come online. So I hope that the author will not have some weird scenes later, such as someone approaching with kryptonite, and then piercing the protagonist with one move.

Author, I forgot to tell you something. Doomsday also has a special ability. It will release a special stance, similar to Superman, but his stance is more focused on destruction and a range of weakening, and it also comes with a blood-sucking buff. Even superhuman beings will be affected to a certain extent if they approach people within this range. Even ancient god-level figures will be affected, and the Doomsday spores can continuously release this stance to the outside world, devouring surrounding life. Once upon a time, Superman transformed into Doomsday Superman in a parasitic state, and then when he got close to the forest, the trees were burned to ashes out of thin air. And he will continue to suppress the abilities of all living creatures around him. It even has their characteristics. The short name is the fusion reinforcement board of Yefu and Haydn.

The author is really tough, and the character of Siya is really well written. Please keep it up, you will definitely be pleasantly surprised when the subscription results are released. Let me make a suggestion, the title "Thea's Chat Group Pig Killing Record and Her Tool Superman" is more suitable for this book.

Does the author really think that he has written the character of Siya well?

Crowdfunding to write a book! If you have any characters you would like to join the group, please leave a message here. That way I can copy... And draw materials. (Dog head)

Who are you trying to fool by writing these ridiculous words? You're using the novel as a running account, right? It's just been on the shelves for a while. If you're updating content like this, you might as well stop writing and go home and find a factory.

Everyone is here for Superman, but you are writing about Hammer Xia?

Chapter 20 has started to make fun of yourself, and Chapter 28 directly exports your own values ​​​​to the readers to whitewash Siya. So, the author, let me ask you, Siya has made a deal with others and has been exposed as a liar. Are you not afraid that the group will have the ability to travel back and forth and slap her to death? According to your values, in the future, if Xia is in danger, would it be reasonable to ask the group friends to save their lives? The group friends would ask for all Xia's points plus unlimited debt before taking action. After all, life is more important than how many points, right? Then what kind of chat group are you writing? Forget it called Wanjie Trading Platform. You don't expect the group members who were cheated by Xia once to be quite grateful to Xia, right? It's just a short-sighted thing and it's labeled as a heroine.

Let's change the character of Siya quickly, okay? I don't know what I want him to do now. First of all, this character must be the author's original character, and I think the author has very high expectations for him. He feels that he has done a good job in this role. Why do you say that? Anyone who has read the back will know that the author spent two or three chapters describing this person. The first dozen or so pictures are basically about her. Who is the protagonist? I posted this. I don't even know the name of the main character, but I am so submissive to this female supporting character. I remember that he is very disgusting. Who is the protagonist? The only impression I have of the protagonist right now is that he is a superman with the ability to doomsday, and this is in the introduction. I don't know what he did, and the impression is very bad. But for this female supporting character, I just want to say that there are too many written about it. I remember him very clearly, killing people like pigs. It was already 100,000 to tens of thousands at the beginning, but it hasn't expanded that much. Is there anything about the debt that must be paid back? No, is there anything in the chat group that you want to return? No, is there anything that says that in order to protect the interests of group members, people who owe money must pay back how much they owe every month or every year? No. Are there really people who still read articles in chat groups that pretend to be some great fairy, great god, omniscient and omnipotent at the beginning? Come on, you basically don't have it now. That was only available in the early chat groups, and to be honest, I haven't seen many people who dare to use such dark things. To be honest, what the author wrote is that every world he writes deviates from the novel. Unlike most chat group novels, at least what the protagonist gives is the real destiny. But this one can be treated as an extra chapter at most. This extra chapter is still problematic. His Lelouch died in the end, and then he had to bring his sister in. I also don't understand it. In other words, what he wrote is definitely appropriate, that is, without his intervention, what he wrote is that each world is different from the original novel. I also don't understand the need to strengthen Mai Sakurajima's puberty syndrome. It has to remove the cp, and in the early stage, he wrote that he has the super vision of Superman, and he will follow people when he sees them. Covered like insects. The protagonist will definitely not be with him anymore, and his chat group has been strengthened by hundreds of thousands. If you just twist off the steel bars when it is strengthened, you will definitely not be talking about the kind of state where the body is like glass, pure and flawless. Then we won't be together, why should we split the cp? Or if he can't be the heroine, why should it be broken up? And I don't think the original male protagonist has any bad qualities. You insist on creating this one. I won't talk about the one about Xiaolan's mother. I insist on showing him that he is divorced and that the novel is different from the original world. Well, why do you say that the novel is different from the original world, and then you wrote that the time in the world of Conan is confusing? This is written on it. When someone asked what day it was today, he would then say what day it was. It was very confusing, and I wasn't just fooling around. You wrote about time and confusion, and then you insisted on writing about the divorce. The realism of the chat group is really getting lower and lower. Wu Yi is still the movie version of Gu Yi, and he can actually use the time and space gems. I found out that Tony Stank has a chat group and said it here, and note that it is the movie version. Good guy, when the movie version of Ancient One has the time stone, he doesn't even know why Doctor Strange will give the stone to Thanos in the future. Please figure it out for me, he can see the chat group, you are something outside the world, and you are so good that even the things in the world can't compare with you. Also, I still don't understand why you insist on creating something original like yours? Do you think your Siya writing is very good? Okay, even if you write well. But what did you write? What you write is two-dimensional, and you use other people's novels. Basically, everyone is reading about this and chat groups, or the ones where the protagonist is Superman. You create an original character who doesn't know anything, and you protect him so much that you insist on spending a few chapters describing his psychology and saying how good he is. There is also this background. Everyone else knows more or less about this drama through animation or movies, but I don't know him. What exactly is the background? Are there witches or are they modern? Does he have a modern background or a modern background? Or is it that kind of medieval extraordinary cyberpunk background? I don't know the power system, I just said that once, who remembers it. All I know is what star it is, what month it is and what day it is. I don't know the level of power. You can say he is strong. With 10,000 points, he has become the transcendent in his world. I remember it was tens of thousands. And then, oh, Mai Sakurajima was so powerful at twisting the steel bar. His extraordinary ability can actually be compared with that of the steel bar. The expansion is too serious, even if the protagonist you write is an invincible, and this protagonist, I am very disappointed, how disappointed is it? What I found was that the introduction was very well written, and the content was that he had done something before. I remember he did it once in One Piece. Then it disappeared, and it was still in the anime published by the so-called original female character. Doomsday appeared, just to restrain a kryptonite. I have never seen anyone beaten. Also, it is written that the protagonist is not a kind person. No matter how many people he killed in his world, he knew about the Fantasy God Stone and asked others to take it. And at that time, he felt that the Fantasy God Stone was not of much use to him. You also wrote that when he watches that video, it is the time of his future video. He felt that he was letting things go. The protagonist didn't seem to be very powerful. The so-called fantasy stone was just like that. After you got the Fantasy God Stone, you added a lot of restrictions to it, and then the protagonist felt that it was not very strong or very powerful, and that it needed to evolve with itself, and that was it. He thought the same way before he got it. He just wanted to take a look at this fantasy stone, and it didn't mean much to the so-called protagonist. As for the protagonist, should he give it to him? Do you want to give it? It's none of his business, he just wants it. But when dealing with that Siya, you used a so-called joke that you wanted to see him, treated him as a clown and let him go? I don't see why he regards the so-called Siya as a clown. I just think he looks like a clown. When I give my experience of those worlds, it's the novels, anime, etc. I read. Wow, he actually put a limit on himself. He put a limit on himself, that is, he would allow everyone to watch it instead of chatting privately. What does this mean? As for the reasons for the protagonists you wrote above, I listed them very clearly. They were all written very clearly about this fantasy stone. He is the kind of person who is completely centered on himself. He could choose to chat privately or post on the public screen, but he actually helped that Siya. Why do you say that? He also wrote very clearly that in the end it was the so-called West Asia who benefited, because some others did not want to share their experiences with others. He can choose when to post, whether he wants to post or not to send private messages, or to be fair, but he will never say. I will only post it on the public screen. It doesn't matter whether he is of any use to me, but I have to have this thing, you know? I am very dissatisfied with the protagonist now, because he is not written like a protagonist at all, he is more like a background version, which is equivalent to a supporting role, and you did not write out his invincibility. And the original female character, Sia, I don't want to talk about it, you won't change it anyway, it just depends on how many pictures you have now, you want black and red. I really can't stand the splitting CP, especially when he is not the heroine. Even if you are multiple heroines, I think it's okay. As for your casual demolition style, if you can demolish Sakurajima Mai this time, will you demolish Microvet next time? As for your original female character, I don't know why he needs those points so much. All the reasons you mentioned at the beginning are simply not valid. Does he have any enemies? He has no enemies. Will he die? He didn't say at that time that he was in any life-or-death crisis. Did he say he had to have that kind of power? No, is there? Have you written it? Did you say anything important? Do you need to strengthen him later and need this kind of power to protect himself, so do you need a lot of cheating points? You have neither. Then such a big fool, he just joins the group. I'm like that. I'm an omniscient and omnipotent witch. I can see your world from across the world. So, would you like to ask an omniscient and omnipotent witch? She needs a lot of points. The protagonist doesn't see people in that kind of world now, right? He needs to strengthen his points by more than just one or two points. Well, they don't know if a full-time, all-powerful witch can be fast. The world depends on his strength, so is a mere ten or twenty thousand useful? Don't say that they don't know the use of points. At that time, they had only one or two points to try on their own, or let's say ten or twenty thousand points. It's funny how two Devil Fruit points can strengthen an omniscient and omnipotent witch. And if you want points, you must come to I am an omniscient and omnipotent immortal, and I am an omniscient and omnipotent witch. You write later, when they know that he is an ordinary person, they still have to decide on that fate in the end. In other words, the important thing is not his identity at all, but that he can tell them about the future, so there is no need to start pretending, okay? Or do you want a renaissance? After knowing that the others in the group know the fate of others like him, and may expose him, and when the strength is 10,000 times, 100 million times stronger than him. He actually still knows and dares to threaten the protagonist. Tell your destiny, but you can't tell someone else's destiny. Please, did he read the protagonist first? Does he think the protagonist won't settle the score? Or does he think of the protagonist as a saint? So, based on the way you wrote it, you wrote it yourself because the heroine is such a selfish villain. Would he think so? Ah! Don't say anything else? As long as he has money, there is no need for connections or anything like that. Come on, that's when you can monopolize it. How outrageous. Everyone, including Conan, doesn't have much superpower. There is nothing worth earning. In the love world of earning points, you can give him tens of thousands. One is tens of thousands, the other is free. Why don't I want others to see my destiny? My destiny has been seen so many times by other worlds. Do you still care about this? First of all, there are so many original female characters and Siya, and also, you have created a so-called original world. There is also the original anime in the world after the protagonist traveled through time, so why aren't there any in other worlds? If you say there aren't any in ancient times, well, like the one in Iron Man, he doesn't have any? In the early stage, I knew that I was not a monopoly in the business, but he was still so arrogant. I can only say that the protagonist is a fart. The halo is all about the so-called West Asia. Have you written the protagonist's psychology? Oh, don't talk about it in your heart, have you written about his actions? Does he have half of it now? I dare not say half of it, but at least 1/3 of it is written in that Siya, every picture must have it. And he actually writes about his psychology in two or three consecutive pages, and you only have five or six. Times, you actually spent so much time writing about who is the protagonist. Otherwise, you should change the female video, and don't mention the male protagonist here. There is no male protagonist with only one supporting actor.

I find that many authors are confused about the nature of novels for us readers, just like the heroine problem in the third picture. Then you say that Superman looks at women too much, and can only improve the quality of the heroine. Do we readers care about these problems? As long as we work on the color, who cares what she looks like. Why do many people say they hate the female protagonist? The most important reason is the description of the heroine's character and appearance. Everyone has different preferences. Naturally, there are likes and dislikes, but the color is different. As long as you are willing to play with the color, who cares if there is a problem with the heroine. Nowadays, many novels only write about the heroine. Without color, it feels a bit tasteless. However, in many novels, the heroine is written in such a bad way that I really want to beat people. It is better not to write the heroine. Simply using the color is often more useful than the heroine.

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Author, I don't understand one thing. Looking at your introduction, I insist that the only flaw of Superman in this version of Doomsday Superman is that the consciousness of Super Man and Doomsday are incompatible, resulting in his fighting power or that he will suddenly go berserk and lose his mind while fighting. But judging from the author, it's okay for you to write it as if it's the protagonist's consciousness. So, Doomsday, who has unlimited evolutionary capabilities, and Superman, who has unlimited potential? I really don't know who's ability can rival him. If I want to talk about characters on the Internet, I think it seems that except for the main universe's Super, or Jin Chao, and the Superman of the Silver Age, Superboy Prime and Doctor Manhattan, I really don't understand. Who can beat him? Even if Entropy wanted to completely kill Doomsday, it would take a lot of time, and Entropy's strength in the comics could easily defeat Jin Chao, but in the end, he was defeated by the Great Chao (Weixin Chao) of the main universe. Then the Seven Deadly Sins also ravaged Jin Chao again, but in the end he was defeated by the Da Chao of the main universe. Then the only person in the comics who allowed Superman to actually kill him on a frontal battlefield, and to do so purely by force, in close combat, was Doomsday. So I really don't understand. Even those Omega-level mutants, and those with the ability to modify reality, seem to be unable to kill Superman and Doomsday. One is unable to modify at all (protected by the Origin Wall) and the other was once shot by Darkseid's Omega rays. As a result, he adapted after a while. In other words, the ones he killed were not as fast as he evolved. I really can't figure it out. How would he be killed in the original plot? Let the protagonist lose his mind, then jump into a black hole, and then learn the destruction method of the ancient Doomsday and throw him out of the universe?

The protagonist kept traveling around various worlds, and his strength continued to increase infinitely during this period. A few epochs later, the protagonist watched the destruction of the universe he had lived in for half his life and the birth of new life from the destruction. There was no wave in his eyes, and he waved his hand to absorb the origin of this world. This newly reborn world was quickly destroyed and destroyed. He finally felt a hint of perfection. After dozens of multiverse eras had passed, the protagonist was finally completely fulfilled, and he felt that the opportunity for transcendence had arrived. So he concentrated all the available power and punched a void with his right fist. In an instant, everything exploded and destroyed. The aftermath destroyed countless universes. Kaka ka ka~ There was a crunching sound in front of his right fist. A hole appeared in the void. Countless powerful ancient auras instantly erupted in the multiverse sea. "Transcendence! The opportunity for transcendence has appeared!" As soon as the hole appeared, the protagonist rushed in without stopping, but the hole disappeared again in an instant, and in the next instant, countless figures appeared where the protagonist stayed. The protagonist who came out of the dimensional channel appeared above the earth's atmosphere. The protagonist discovered that the real universe suppressed his strength very strongly. He was so powerful that he could not escape the gravity of the earth? As he continued to fall, the protagonist fought against the friction of the air with all his strength, and with a loud bang, the protagonist sat up from the pit. The broken bones on his body recovered quickly, and the burned cells were discharged and new cells were quickly generated. The protagonist who fully recovered after 5 seconds felt the real world's extraordinary suppression. It was so powerful that he was equivalent to a human tank in the real world, and he could quickly recover from his injuries. He left this private house that was smashed by himself, found an Internet cafe, hypnotized the network administrator, opened a computer, and used his super powerful brain to understand the world. He actually found his personal biography on the Internet. Is it world information interaction or... He decided to meet the person who wrote his personal biography. After finding the person's address on the Internet, he took a taxi and drove around and stopped at the place where he fell 🙂. There were fire rescue and ambulances nearby. Hearing the comments from the people next to him, "This young man is pretty good, but why is he so unlucky that his lower part was cut off by a steel pipe?" Several people nearby also echoed, "Yes, yes, I heard that if he had been rescued a few minutes earlier, he would not have died of excessive blood loss." The protagonist was also speechless. Is it such a coincidence? I silently said sorry to him in my heart for letting you become a eunuch before you died...

Brothers, don't wait, eunuch, everyone in the group has been kicked out by him. Next time I see him writing a book, I will give him a report. It always happens like this. It is obviously very good. The last book "The Motherland" ran away halfway through the book. I really want to curse people.

If it appeals to my taste and looks good, I'll give it a reward. Come on

The writing was pretty good, but he cut it early and thought better of it, but he must be dead and no friends know he wrote a novel 🙂

Incense

The writing is very good. I subscribed and read it all in one go. It's too little. Why did I cut it off like this? Isn't this well written? Well

Alas, it's been two years and there's still no update.

It's October 1st! It's fragrant! It's fragrant!

It was well written and my grades were good at the time. I guess it was probably a force majeure factor, probably a natural disaster 😭