The Immortals of the Wizarding World

After reading about 300 chapters, let me share some of my personal opinions. The plot has no major logical errors, no major poisonous points, and the few minor poisonous points can be ignored. However, the plot arrangement is relatively bland and there is no more passionate climax. The whole article is written around the routine of surviving and developing—researching things—promoting promotions—killing enemies—controlling forces—and moving to new areas. To put it simply, it develops in one place, develops to a new area when it is strong enough, kills all the enemies, starts to develop again, and then goes to a new area. It feels a bit like infinite nesting dolls. This may be the reason why this book is not popular. Summary: If you want to use it as fairy grass or food, you don't have to. If you want to use it as an ordinary novel to pass the time, I can recommend you to read it.

Let me know what I think of this book. Let's talk about the advantages first. 1. The plot is relatively slow. The plot is too fast and makes you tired, but too slow and you can't stand it. I think this book is just right. 2. The world view is quite attractive. The beginning of the game with only a wizard as the main character and the secret of the wizard's death can also be attractive. 3. The improvement of the protagonist's strength is neither impatient nor impatient, and the overall rhythm is okay. 4. The emotional portrayal of the Byrne Empire scene with Rias, the teacher whose name I forgot, and the senior brother I forgot his name was okay, it can be considered a highlight. Let's talk about the shortcomings. 1. There are too many typos and omissions, and a lot of bad sentences. Although it basically does not affect understanding, I still hope that the author can be more serious in writing the book and check it a little after writing. (I remember that a certain wizard-style book also had this problem, and later I came up with a reason... I won't go into details. Anyway, I think it is unnecessary.) 2. The characterization of supporting characters still needs to be strengthened. After the appearance of Byrne, there are not many distinctive supporting characters. Although the protagonist is an immortal and the supporting characters are updated very quickly, there will always be a few distinctive characters appearing after a while. However, due to the protagonist's homebody personality, he does have relatively little communication with others. And web articles still have to be written around the protagonist. This point still depends on the author's thoughts. It can be read as it is written now, so there is no big problem. 3. The plot where the protagonist mentally controls the queen... Looks rather uncomfortable. Maybe my character cannot accept this. I feel that the protagonist has gone too far and is too selfish. It's just a personal opinion, but it's actually not a big problem. 4 The other thing is the world view, although I said before that the world view is quite attractive. But there are some logical problems in some places. I also suddenly thought of it while I was reading it. Now I can't say it right now, and I'm too lazy to type so many more words. Anyway, if you don't think about it, there's no problem. You can still read the book, so it's not a big problem. Summary: There are some flaws, but it can be considered a quality product. It's not a big problem, I can see it.

Starting from the late Fourth Ring period, it became more and more poisonous. From the beginning of the Five Rings, I felt that the author's inspiration was too low, and everyone was greatly reduced in intelligence. What I wrote before was so good, but I started to feel sad.

Fantasy area?

The author almost always ensures the balance between pretense and development, and the pace is not too slow. It is a very good book 😁

Overall, this book is still great. There is a slight flaw. At the starting point, this fairy tale is weird. This book should be in the top three among wizard books.

In fact, I have always felt that talent is more powerful than the so-called accumulation of time. Just like the Riemann Hypothesis, if it should not be possible, it is not possible. Even if it is proved, I still can't understand it. So is there a possibility that if you don't have talent, you won't be able to learn a skill no matter how long it takes?

Isn't this just Foolish Old Man Moves Mountains? It's boring to read the introduction. Maybe you spent 1,000 years learning the principles of steam engines, but when you go out, you will see that the world has entered the electrical age. Talent is always more valuable than eternal life. Isn't it sad to be a fool who lives longer?

The recently popular Eternal Life stream is combined with the classic Wizard stream. The subject matter is very clever, but it is obvious that the author has no writing experience, so he can only use a lot of old and bad short stories to support the word count of this novel. The slaps are also very casual. Maybe the author has not carefully conceived each plot and just wants to use the popular template to gain a wave of readers. I don't know if my guess is right, but this book gives me the feeling that it is. Why do I have to write so much? Because I feel that the wizard flow is really suitable for the eternal life flow. As a result, this book...

Chapter 22: Three slaps in the face. Is this called IQ online? Just use a template to change the map and set the characters. What's so interesting about it?

The skin of the wizard, the soul of Xiao Baiwen. If you replace the wizard level with the fantasy practice level, you will be surprised to find that this is a fantasy novel.

I can't watch it anymore after reaching chapter 20. The protagonist is uneducated and has no IQ. The author keeps writing mentally retarded supporting characters for the protagonist to trample on. The first-level wizard apprentice makes the protagonist crazy. Brother, you are just immortal, not invincible.

He said he was going to be stubborn, but in the end he couldn't survive anymore! All kinds of exposure! Not interesting!

Finally there is one that is not chip-based, rush!

Author, I give you a suggestion, don't be quick to say "Eh". Deleting this word will have no effect. Reading too many "Eh" will make it appear that your writing is not good.

There are too many poisonous points in the front, but is the content in the back exciting?

While talking about Gou, when trouble came to the door, I picked it up with my face! Don't you know how to avoid trouble?

A bit tacky, and likes to use his abilities to inadvertently show off, especially for nobles with a higher status than himself... I don't dislike it, but it feels a bit deliberate. If you want to be more stable, don't be so excellent in all aspects.

As an immortal, the best way is to lower your presence in the early stage, don't cause trouble, and work hard to improve yourself. In the mid-term, if you have the strength to go to the heavens, it will be fine. After all, wizards like to travel around the planes. In the early stage, don't talk about Gou while seeking death, because you don't know how tempting immortality is to wizards.

The most suitable type of immortal protagonist is a group portrait novel. The protagonist is like a bridge connecting various stories and a backing. It serves as a link between the previous and the following. It focuses on describing the characters who appear on the stage. Each volume has a core character of the story. This is the best part of this type of novel.

Oh, immortal ants, what a good experimental material

It's a pity. In fact, the Immortal is very suitable for writing the farming style. Before going to the central continent, it was developed around the farming style. The combat was the adjustment. But when I went to the advanced map, the combat became the main theme and the farming became the adjustment. This seemed to be out of rhythm. As some comments said, the author changed people. And this kind of disengagement is actually a big blow to readers. If I hadn't read 20 chapters after seeing it on the shelf, and then ordered all of them, I would definitely have left the trap. 80% Of the readers who originally came for the farming stream were dissuaded by the sudden U-turn of the fighting stream. When writing a book, especially after it is put on the shelf, don't change the direction easily. Before you put it on the shelf, it doesn't matter how much the style changes. After it is put on the shelf, the remaining readers will all have a fixed style. With your change, the readers who originally liked style A will leave, and those who like style B have been dissuaded by the public chapters.

All right! It's not fun to watch. It's like trying to live forever in the world of immortality. But in the world of immortality, there are a group of big guys around. You have to be stubborn. This wizard has basically reached the ceiling of the novice village's combat power. There is no reason to be so stubborn. It's better to learn from Merlin and create a country or family, and then use the immortal to control behind the scenes or keep changing identities to control. It feels better. After all, there is no threat to this continent!

To be honest, if you want to gain power in a world like the wizarding world, which is really the same as scientific research, it is useless for you to live forever. Just like Einstein realized the theory of relativity, it took ten years to realize it. If you are not talented enough, you will not be able to understand the theory of relativity even if it takes ten thousand years. So in the wizarding world now, living long is useful, but it is not very useful, and it is still not as good as the top bosses.

This kind of immortality of the male protagonist is for those of you with high poison resistance and patience. When I looked at the plot of the male protagonist, I just thought, how can a person like the male protagonist not die? It's not that the sense of immersion is bad, it's just not there at all. Otherwise, I wouldn't think so. In other words, if I could be immersed in it, I would be even more frustrated.

The Immortal Person in the Wizarding World👎🏻

Is the dragon's noodles so good? In the later stage, you can come out anywhere to defeat the dragon's bloodline.

It's best not to read the reviews before reading the novel. Everyone has their own taste. Some people say it's not well written, but I think it's pretty good. It's just that the back is gone.

The 124th book I read and purchased around 10:20 am on September 17, 2024.

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