A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Formation Grandmaster

It's alright. There aren't many books I can barely read these days, so I won't be too picky. There's a small detail in Chapter 3: when Feng Linggen committed the crime, he simply said he probably wouldn't be there anymore, thus diverting Han Li, who was supposed to appear, away. I think the author could have included something else to create a butterfly effect, making the story more cohesive.

Keep it up, author! I believe in you!

The writing is decent, readable, and straightforward. He steals the Foundation Establishment Pill, then immediately confesses his feelings to the female lead and begins dual cultivation – very smooth. What I'm wondering is, isn't the theme supposed to be formations? The protagonist's talisman-making skills are quite impressive, though.

The book is titled "Master of Formations," but the protagonist has virtually nothing to do with formations...😥😥

When you were 18 and had reached the 10th level of Qi Refining, Han Li was only a 10-year-old child. How come you haven't been able to do it for so many years?

If you don't have the opportunity, you can just steal someone else's. Even if your aptitude is average, there are ways to improve it, such as using the Heaven-Mending Pill or the Dragon Scale Fruit. Alternatively, you can learn from Orochimaru and do human experiments to clone a body, or possess a cultivator with a Heavenly Spirit Root. These are all solutions.

Later in the story, the author can inscribe the formation on their body; as long as they have enough magic power, they can activate the formation instantly.

Update faster! Several chapters a day are not enough!

Can you recommend some fanfiction about a mortal without a system but who knows the plot? 🙂🙂🙂

Should we resume updates? I don't want everyone to disappear again.