Seeking Immortality in a Supernatural World

It's so boring to just ask for directions and just give him the spirit stone he just asked for from his beloved sister in a low voice. This is worth one month's rent. The most important thing is that the protagonist only has 3 days left to live, and the life-saving money is just that. It's so easy to give people the poison. As a reader, who doesn't know that the protagonist in your novel will not die or lack spiritual stones? But a protagonist who has just three days left to live after time travel, and even the last spiritual stone was taken away, has to borrow a few spiritual stones from the sister who broke up with him because he committed suicide. Do you know? Uppercase 👍

Brothers, it's coming, it's coming! Thank you all for reading. Today's update may be a little late, but I will definitely write it down

I show my cards, the author is a male god, ladies and readers, please pay attention, don't give up on the book. Abandoning books means abandoning me😃

Apology: The author's coding speed is too slow, so that once the work gets busy, he cannot update twice. From today on, the author will find ways to increase the coding speed, make detailed outlines before writing, and think about plots after work. After the coding speed is improved, double updates will be guaranteed every day. Next week has been postponed, and there is not enough data to follow. But it's about 100,000 words, and there will be intelligent promotion. Dear brothers, try not to read books. I know that many people are reading them, and other data are pretty good. The key is that they read too little. Most readers read them once every few days😓 No matter what, the author will continue to write well...

In the golden three chapters, the protagonist is suppressed with all his strength from the beginning. You don't need to read the rest to know what the rhythm is.

It seems that this article should be a cool article about system panel flow. The overall writing is good, except for the problem of broken chapters, which is a matter of judgment and wisdom. But there are some problems with the rhythm and storyline design. From the beginning when the protagonist wants to pull himself out of his life to the time he kills the brother of the city lord's son who had a problem with him in order to vent his anger, I never established the character of the protagonist in my mind. The emotional foreshadowing is a bit bland, the plot development is a bit abrupt, and the story unfolds a bit slowly. But as the saying goes, benevolence sees benevolence and wisdom sees wisdom. I won't make any definite conclusions, I can only say that there is a long way to go.

The importance of pursuing reading!

Brothers, if you see me in the "Daily Guide", please take a screenshot. I and the "Favorite Readers" can't see it😂 I want to see if I have been on the "Smart Push"

It's hard for Pig's Feet to live on its own, but for no reason, the Holy Mother Bitch is also drunk and abandoned.

The introduction is where the time travels to Senior Sister Xiu Xian. If you feel confused, come in. Indirectly it is the world. . .