Looking for Immortality in the Mysterious World

Brothers, if you see me in the "Daily Guide", please take a screenshot. I and the "Favorite Readers" can't see it😂 I want to see if I have been on the "Smart Push"

It's so boring to just ask for directions and just give him the spirit stone he just asked for from his beloved sister in a low voice. This is worth one month's rent. The most important thing is that the protagonist only has 3 days left to live, and the life-saving money is just that. It's so easy to give people the poison. As a reader, who doesn't know that the protagonist in your novel will not die or lack spiritual stones? But a protagonist who has just three days left to live after time travel, and even the last spiritual stone was taken away, has to borrow a few spiritual stones from the sister who broke up with him because he committed suicide. Do you know? Uppercase 👍

I show my cards, the author is a male god, ladies and readers, please pay attention, don't give up on the book. Abandoning books means abandoning me😃

Brothers, it's coming, it's coming! Thank you all for reading. Today's update may be a little late, but I will definitely write it down

Apology: The author's coding speed is too slow, so that once the work gets busy, he cannot update twice. From today on, the author will find ways to increase the coding speed, make detailed outlines before writing, and think about plots after work. After the coding speed is improved, double updates will be guaranteed every day. Next week has been postponed, and there is not enough data to follow. But it's about 100,000 words, and there will be intelligent promotion. Dear brothers, try not to read books. I know that many people are reading them, and other data are pretty good. The key is that they read too little. Most readers read them once every few days😓 No matter what, the author will continue to write well...

In the golden three chapters, the protagonist is suppressed with all his strength from the beginning. You don't need to read the rest to know what the rhythm is.

The importance of pursuing reading!

It seems that this article should be a cool article about system panel flow. The overall writing is good, except for the problem of broken chapters, which is a matter of judgment and wisdom. But there are some problems with the rhythm and storyline design. From the beginning when the protagonist wants to pull himself out of his life to the time he kills the brother of the city lord's son who had a problem with him in order to vent his anger, I never established the character of the protagonist in my mind. The emotional foreshadowing is a bit bland, the plot development is a bit abrupt, and the story unfolds a bit slowly. But as the saying goes, benevolence sees benevolence and wisdom sees wisdom. I won't make any definite conclusions, I can only say that there is a long way to go.

Etc! I found a problem. Isn't the female protagonist the one who appears at the beginning? This! ! ! ! !

The introduction is where the time travels to Senior Sister Xiu Xian. If you feel confused, come in. Indirectly it is the world. . .

It's hard for Pig's Feet to live on its own, but for no reason, the Holy Mother Bitch is also drunk and abandoned.

I really started a new book, I hope I can write my own style in the future, keep it up

:             ， The author is a newcomer and does not have enough writing experience. This book has written 110,000 words. The data is not ideal, but there are a lot of comments. Unfortunately, the nearly seven comments are all critical, complaining, and even abusive. I have deleted many of the comments. You don't know, but I know it. In a book of 110,000 words, there are so many poisonous points and there is no point in writing it down, so I can only try to revise it. The poisonous points mentioned by readers so far include: Holy Mother, abusive master, brainless, illogical, the protagonist is too useless, etc. Readers are welcome to continue to add. With the writing experience of 110,000 words, I have also received a lot of goods. The most important thing is to understand the poisonous spots. Next, we have to talk about follow-up reading, because for a new book issue, follow-up reading is the top priority, and it is directly linked to recommendation. I have also summarized ways to improve my pursuit of reading, and I will definitely keep them in mind in the future. 1. Update volume. Updates must be at least 4,000 words per day. 2. It is best to have a fixed update time to facilitate readers of the collection to read on time. 3. A sense of expectation. The full text should have a clear main line, and on this basis create a sense of expectation and make readers want to read on. 4. Broken chapter. There is reasonable suspense at the end of the chapter. 5. Poison point. Poisonous points are one of the biggest factors that deter collection and reading. Once poisonous points appear, the original readers will abandon the book. 6. It's cool. Every time a certain number of words is reached, highlights, excitement, and climaxes should appear. After the release of Chapter 54 of this book, the collection went crazy, and the same happened after reading it. It is probably because the readers abandoned the book before turning to the last page. After careful consideration, the "abuse of the master" may be the cause of this problem, so this chapter will definitely be changed significantly. The whole book will be reasonably revised, and the plot progress will remain unchanged, which will not affect the reading of previous readers. It takes time to modify the article, but it will only take a day or two to resume normal updates at most. Dear readers, please understand! Thank you!

[Note: Please follow up on Tuesday and Monday] (It's best to read every day) Brothers and sisters, it's not very good to follow up on reading, maybe just a little bit, so I only came to one page next week. I hope that brothers and sisters will not keep reading books for a long time, and let me continue to read them. It's so important to catch up on the new book issue, as it is directly related to whether there will be any recommendations next week. Especially the tracking numbers on Tuesday and Monday. The author would like to thank you for this. (Ps: With recommendation and good grades, the author has the heart to write well, and the plot may explode. With poor grades and no recommendation, the author may write more and more poorly...)

Don't play like this...

Please read it! ! ! Especially Tuesday and Monday. Dear readers, please help me read it on Tuesday. At present, all the data of this book are pretty good, and the gains and losses of smart push are quite obvious. 3,000 will be collected soon. As long as one out of every ten readers reads it every day or on Tuesday, my book can be renewed. The so-called continued recommendation means that the discontinued recommendation is continued again. Let's put it this way, as long as you don't collectively support books, this book is expected to be popular. The main reason why I can't catch up on reading is that the updates are spread out, and the daily update time is unstable. But the author will resume double updates soon. Can you support me with the follow-up reading this Tuesday? If it doesn't work this week, then next Tuesday. At present, the number of words in this book is still small. As long as I continue to read it, I can continue to push it, and I hope to achieve results. The author would like to thank you!

😄Don't worry guys, I will write it well. I have repeatedly promised double updates, but I have always broken my promise. This morning I saw that the follow-up reading was very poor, and my mood was greatly affected. I lost all enthusiasm for coding, and even updated it alone, and then cut the follow-up reading in half again😩The author knows that he was wrong, and will do his best to double update in the future... No matter how you say it, the content of this writing is what I like and what I want to express. If it were for the sake of performance, I wouldn't add too many elements or too many settings. Who doesn't understand the truth? This book has shadows of "covering the sky", "perfection", "the trick of gods playing tricks on people", "mortal", and even "Hokage". Why I write this, because these books are my favorite works. Those who read it carefully will definitely find that they will no longer dare to write according to their own preferences in the next book. Let this book be an indulgence for the author and he will finish it well.

After reading some, the protagonist is the golden elixir. In any case, he has some experience in cultivation. It should not be difficult to build the foundation and refine the Qi. His eyesight is still there. Even if the bones are taken away, will the physical quality deteriorate? As for the soul, a camel that has been emaciated to death is bigger than a horse. Cultivation to immortality is evolution, and the essence is different from the classics.

Daily poison introduction

Alas, the more I look at this kind of protagonist, the more stupid he becomes.

I absolutely should send the author directly to Lamianbei and go to Yaozi

This logo can be obtained in about a week after updating🤔

The author can double update!

I only met a few times (after time travel, before time travel, I was almost sucked to death and turned around and forgot), so I went with them and drank. As mentioned above, if you still want to be strong, then come to poison, or Teddy test poison (if you want to commit suicide, don't worry about it, there is obviously a conspiracy, only follow if you are a bitch)

Teacher Su Yu recently took sheep placenta supplements. Oh, can I say this? After the treatment, I live longer and my skin has expanded.

This person has already mastered the golden elixir before he was 26 years old, and he is still cultivating the elixir of hair. He just practices it to the death, and it will take him 30 years to transform into a god. If gods stand in the way, they will kill gods; if they stand in the way of Buddha, they will kill Buddha.

Is this considered Gou? Forget it, the real Gou is someone who doesn't care about anything. He can't even let go of his dignity and face, so forget about Gou.

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Come on, author! Fuck this corpse-eating dog to death!

The author writes well, I have subscribed to them all now