I’m a Proper Mage
我是一个正经的法爷
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- Completed
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- 743k Words
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- Infinite Flow
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The first chapter made me frown, but I thought maybe the later chapters would be more interesting. Author, are you planning to stop being human? I can barely even handle the first chapter.
A self-aware system.
Having read up to chapter 13, I'd like to share my thoughts. I find two points quite problematic. 1. It's not a problem that the system has its own ideas, but the protagonist giving off a mentally unstable vibe is quite problematic. Although I know you're trying to portray the protagonist as carefree and humorous, he just comes across as mentally unstable.
Seriously, I'm speechless. At first, it was alright, learning magic in Harry Potter and stuff, which was a bit exaggerated, but it was still manageable. But then in Under One Person, suddenly they say that the magic you learned before is useless against these superhumans, and you have to start learning it all over again, like marking, detection, and this thing. What were you doing before? It was all useless, what were you doing?
I just found this book, read a few pages, and it immediately gave me some kind of cursed, lonely fate. Dude, do you think reality isn't hard enough?
Fire-based meditation... That's an outdated concept from so many years ago, I can't hold back.
Well, to put it simply, I strongly suspect this book is from a studio, as it has numerous inconsistencies throughout. However, the writing style doesn't feel like a studio production, because it feels like the use of references or tropes is forced and unnecessarily formulaic. Frankly, I wonder if the author even reads the discussion forums.
Just focus on writing your book quietly; why worry about so much else?
Aren't legendary mages, or mages in World of Warcraft, amazing? Lightning Bolt, Fire Wall, Meteor Shower, Magic Shield, Ice Roar. In WoW, Pyroblast, Ice Lance, Blizzard, Cone of Cold, Frostfire, Ice Block, Blink, Teleport, Meteor Shower, Flamestrike, Arcane Explosion, Frost Bomb, Dragon's Breath. Which one isn't the pinnacle of mages? Which one isn't a hundred times stronger than Voldemort?
In chapter 49, the protagonist is still a novice mage with zero experience? A whole semester has passed, and he's only gained a little experience in his skills, but his class level is still 0... That's so useless!