I’m a Proper Mage

The first chapter made me frown, thinking that the content behind might be attractive. Are you ready to stop being a human being? I can't even hold on to the first chapter.

A self-aware system. .

After reading Chapter 13, let me tell you that there are two problems that I feel are very problematic 1. The system has its own ideas, which is actually okay, but the protagonist gives people the feeling of a neurotic patient, which is quite problematic. Although I know you want to show that the protagonist is big-hearted and humorous, but it gives me the feeling of a Psychopath 2. I gave you the evil star at the beginning. I feel that you also wanted to write something witty and humorous, but you also failed. As for the bar owner, I watched the protagonist leave. There was a chapter where no bad luck happened, and neither did the centaurs. Are you drugging people? So simply not using this talent should have no impact on the plot, right? Or change the settings, such as the time period to get sick or something When I saw 13, these two points really made things difficult for the plot and readers. The rest can still be read as a novice.

Go, I'm really speechless. You were okay at the beginning. You learned magic or something in Harry Potter. Although it's a bit exaggerated to say it, but you got over it. When you got to the back, you were under one person, and suddenly they said that the magic you learned earlier was of no use to these strangers. It's no use at all, why are you going?

I just found the book and read a few pictures. As soon as I read it, I was given the fate of a lonely star. Brother, do you still think that reality is not difficult enough?

Fire meditation method,,, this was set up many years ago, I can't stand it

How to say it? This book is highly suspected to be a studio book, as it is characterized by numerous inconsistencies between the text and the text. But the writing style makes me feel that it is not a studio book, because it is all about making jokes for the sake of making jokes, or using routines for the sake of routines. To be honest, the author doesn't know whether to read the discussion forum or not. If the author himself looks at his book from the perspective of a reader, it should be improved. The author probably doesn't write much practice work.

Write a book quietly, why do you have to deal with so much?

The legendary Master, or the Master of World of Warcraft, isn't it delicious? Thunder and lightning, fire wall, meteor shower, magic shield, ice roar. Warcraft's, Pyroblast, Ice Spear, Blizzard, Ice Cone, Frostfire, Refrigerator, Flash, Teleport, Meteorite, Flame Storm, Arcane Explosion, Frost (Fire) Bomb, Dragon's Breath. Which one is not the ceiling of Master? Which one is not a hundred times stronger than Voldemort.

In Chapter 49, the protagonist is still a junior mage with 0 experience? A semester has passed, I have gained some experience in skills, but my career level is still 0... It's too useless.