
Battle of Two Cities: I Have the Sharingan and the Immortal Body
双城之战:我有写轮眼和仙人体
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 334k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Update update, I liked it for a few days but it disappeared after a few minutes. I feel that the protagonist's strength is almost the same, and Pi Cheng is like that. With dozens of times the physical strength and Sharingan, paired with a good sword, it can be pushed directly.
Do you, Li Fei, know how to be a silver dragon from the sky?
It seems that many people have misunderstandings about Naruto I will post about Naruto's performance here Dilada's self-destruction covered a radius of 10 kilometers Nagato destroyed Konoha, which was hundreds of kilometers in diameter, with one full blow Tsuchikage easily carried Turtle Island with a diameter of several kilometers In the second stage, 10 Tailed Beasts can continuously attack the surface of the ground.
If Payne really traveled through Valoran, except for those true gods, demigods and ascended ones would all be chickens and dogs, capable of killing at will.
I would like to ask if the Sharingan and Senshi are the original version or the weakened version of Pinxixi. Recently, I saw a lot of special abilities of various gold fingers at the starting point that were weakened. It was as if Pinxixi collectively purchased them. . .
I just hope this isn't a League of Legends hegemony article. I'm really sick of reading it. Every day it's about the country's political system and social contradictions. It makes me bald. Nowadays, many League of Legends fans write around this nonsense, as if there's nothing to write about.
The Immortal Body: Comparable to the chakra of tailed beasts, with strong recovery power and extraordinary physical strength, any ordinary ninjutsu can be turned into magic in its hands The Sharingan also uses chakra to drive, why does the protagonist seem to have no chakra, and the latest chapter takes three or four days to regain combat effectiveness. This Immortal Body must have been chopped off by Xixi
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Why do we all want the protagonist to have no chakra? The protagonist, a Sharingan and a sage, must have chakra, and chakra is just a name for energy, which is the energy of the body and spirit. The energy of nature is natural chakra. Even if you think it's low-level, it's not because the chakra is low-level, right? Is this a problem with the world setting? In the final analysis, chakra is just energy, and its level is not static.
Intuitively, you can use a gun as a stick, you have eyes, you have a fairy body, but what about chakra? Don't say you don't have it. How can you use the Sharingan without it? Study the escape technique! Isn't this better than fists?
Even though they have immortal human bodies and immortal eyes, you still want to find a recommendation from a member of parliament to start working as a civil servant in the parliament? And the force value is too vague. When I look at it now, I don't know what stage the eyes are in or what the protagonist is capable of. I just know that the protagonist is very good at fighting and has strong recovery ability.
What kind of energy is used? I hope it's the power of magic runes or something. Don't use any chakra.
People like Camille who think that the world is exquisite gray and that elegance never goes out of style should be dragged to Siberia for labor reform if they appear in the real world.
Respond to the most recent comment section. According to what you guys said, the protagonist is super-evolved and is fast and invincible, which seems pretty cool. But if you look at the word count of this book, it's only a little over 100,000 words... It's so invincible, what else should I write next? Don't worry, everything will be there.
Hello book friends, I am the author of this book. Thank you all for your reading and support. I hope everyone can work together to create a healthy and harmonious atmosphere for the book review area and this chapter.
It is enough to add the Sharingan and the Immortal human body settings. Do not add chakra settings in Valoran. Chakra is not needed for these two things, so there is no need to add extra effort, as it will look weird. Sharingan does not require chakra, it uses pupil power. The immortal body does not need chakra, it is a special kind of body. The sharingan can be carefully designed to upgrade. After all, this thing requires sacrifice. After upgrading to the kaleidoscope, you cannot use it casually, otherwise you will go blind. However, the protagonist certainly does not have direct relatives with sharingan eyes that can be transplanted. You need to think carefully about how to solve it. If not, you can sacrifice a wife. If you upgrade directly from the kaleidoscope to the samsara eye, it will be considered a cheat. Later, you can also upgrade to the Nine Magatama Samsara Sharingan, and then learn Kaguya Otsutsuki's Yayogami Air Strike, Hiraizaka Hirazaka, and Kill Ash Bones skills. It's not too impressive at all. As long as you don't encounter those awesome demigods or protoss, you can kill them randomly. There is a limit, but you can consider planting a sacred tree and then harvesting the fruits to eat. It seems that if you eat a few more fruits of the sacred tree, you can become a god, Otsutsuki Ishiki said.
It can only be said that the title of the book has little to do with the content. People who are attracted by the title will basically leave. For example, I came here just because I saw the title of the book, but when it comes to immortals whose bodies are injured by bombs and it takes three days to regain their combat effectiveness, I don't really want to read it. But it's much better to add someone who is affected by Hex energy and understands everything. If you haven't read this book for a while, your interest will drop a lot. After a while, when you look through the catalog, you will find that there is nothing you want to read, so you will basically delete the book. And those who want to read this kind of clever plot-oriented book will basically not click on it because of the title of this invincible novel. So, let's talk about the importance of the book title.
The protagonist is incompetent and cannot be dealt with
Let's talk about the things that didn't go well. First of all, I didn't understand the purpose of the protagonist entering the college in the upper city. Then, due to the contradiction between the upper city and the lower city, it is impossible for an upper city student to be the boss in the lower city to convince the public. Furthermore, taking such measures without solving the survival problem is even more natural. Funding Jace is also unreasonable, and using Caitlin's family to become a shareholder is even more inexplicable. You can just grab it directly, buy it, or go through Victor. I think it is much more reasonable.
I have subscribed to a lot and I just can't bear to say more. The author has stated since the time it was put on the shelves that there will be two chapters every day, and each chapter will cost 3k. However, after such a long time, the goal was only achieved on the first day it was put on the shelves. After that, updates were interrupted frequently and the update time was unstable. Let alone 6k words, it could not even reach 2k words. What's even more outrageous is that the promise of a total of 6 updates on the 2nd and 3rd days a few days ago was treated as a fart, and two chapters totaling 4k words were updated, without a single explanation after that. A promise is a promise, no matter what your reasons are, if you can't make it, don't make it easily. There are only 0 and countless times for eunuchs, and there are also 0 and countless times for malicious interruption. Once the interruption lasts for a long time, the number of readers will decline and the data will become worse, which will make the book closer and closer to the eunuch. The reason why I say so much is that I feel that this book is really well written, and I couldn't bear to see the final result of giving up halfway. I hope the author can make a choice and make a decision as soon as possible, either to write well or to simply make a statement and destroy it, so as to save us readers from suffering.
I was almost dissuaded by the title of the novel, but after reading it for a while, I found that the writing is really good, but the updates are too slow. If the quality is still the same in the future, and the updates are stable, I will give you my monthly and recommended votes directly.
Why are all good books like seedlings? It's so painful to catch up on updates
The writing is very good. I originally thought it was a novice novel. I have read a lot of books in Shuangcheng. Many of them are about people who have some kind of awesome status in the upper city, or are some kind of system cheat. Many people say they can't understand what the protagonist is doing. I think it has always been very clear. I think the protagonist and others are seeking different paths. The root of the problem in Dicheng is rotten. People who have fully integrated into the bottom life cannot escape from Dicheng, and they cannot change the status quo even if their personal strength is invincible. Even if Hilko really achieves his goal in the film, the people of Dicheng are still in the same environment. Hilko succeeds, but Dicheng just changes its leadership. Hilko may follow the city for the benefit of Dicheng, but the people of Dicheng are often the victims of Hilko. In the later period of his reign, the proliferation of Shimmer was also poisonous to the people of the city, and it was a bit too unscrupulous. The bottom city needs more than just the right to speak. There are many other things, such as the ideological changes and educational reforms of the people in Dicheng. And changes in the entire socioeconomic structure. To climb to the highest position in the bottom city, what is needed is prestige and force, and the upper city has the same approach as the upper city. The protagonist of the bottom city breaks the situation with violence, takes over the stalls of Fandel and Hilko, and integrates different forces at the same time. Only then can action be implemented. In Shangcheng, the technological and political lines were chosen. In the book, I saw the protagonist's thoughts on the society in the city. The protagonist's dealings between the two cities have not yet begun, but the protagonist is climbing up step by step. Goldfinger or something is no longer the protagonist's goal and constraint. There is no system to frame what the protagonist must do, nor does it turn the protagonist into a puppet who only knows the power of mindless violent pushing. More often than not, the protagonist uses the Sharingan and the Immortal Body to achieve something that would otherwise be difficult. Maybe I think too much, but what the protagonist showed, I think is really good. I don't like violence, but I am unambiguous when it comes to using violence to quickly solve things or achieve the purpose of shocking. When the protagonist only knows the names of places and a few heroes, and does not know the world view at the same time, following the local people's methods is very good for integrating the entire world view. At the same time, the best thing is to solve the problem of Hilko. It doesn't take a long time to find it and kill it. I think the protagonist combines Hilko's ruthlessness in doing things and Fandel's attitude towards ordinary people. Of course, there are still some flaws in the description, such as the treatment of the miners, and the lack of good ideological guidance for the younger generation. Although Runeterra is a world of high martial arts, with exaggerated power, if the perspective is limited to the Twin Cities, when Feng Nu and even the Feros family do not intervene in the situation, the Twin Cities are properly low-military, fighting with fists, and there are no messy light cannons. At this time, the whole Chakra, Susana and other things, dimensionality reduction strikes, then there is no need to write about the Twin Cities, run to Shadow Island, Ionia and other places, let's go.
It's pretty well written, but I think it's a little too short and weak.
So well written. I can't find anything wrong with it, so I'll just keep going like this. A book of fairy grass is about to be born. ………… The title of the book is both a shortcoming and an advantage.
The author must be persistent and not cut off.
My rating: A good novel
Come on, come on, the writing is really good.
Wuhu
Yes, the text is very good and a good guide.