The Heavens Begin with the Angry Clearing of Xiangxi

In order for the protagonist to show off, the grandfather and grandson really suffered. I just want to ask, the world is so chaotic, how did that girl grow so big? Is it possible that at this age, grandpa is still careless and has no sense of precaution at all? Let's not talk about women disguising themselves as men, let's just pretend to be the ugly head office.

In the first chapter, where to leave, the grandfather and grandson suffered a lot in order to fulfill the protagonist's pretense. The most important thing is that the protagonist, as a time traveler, doesn't know the plot? Then what is the use of your status as a time traveler?

Sorry, I dismissed the first one. Are the bandits of the Republic of China so rich? More than 30 people have revolvers. Brother, you said the leader has one. I won't say anything. A bunch of poor bandits have so many pistols, and the government troops don't have that many. Pistol teams.

I just want to ask the author if the protagonist knows the plot. If he doesn't know, I won't read it.

This protagonist is fundamentally bad, worse than some yellow men. Has he never killed anyone after he has reached the level of a boxing master? If true, that would be really weird. The name of the sharpshooter Li Shuwen came from killing, so you dare to compete with him? The old man kindly gave him a ride, but you just watched him vomit blood and fall to the ground. It's really...

I feel like the author doesn't know what he thinks about how there is a female protagonist. The protagonist said in the early stage that there is no chance of a long-term love between children, but later on, a woman suddenly appeared and he fell in love with it inexplicably. . .

There is no mistake! You have come into contact with Buddhas and demons, so you go to the world of peerless twins! Are you going to show off? At least it's a somewhat mythical world of martial arts like Fengyun!

The biggest failure is that I don't know how to write emotional scenes, so I just write them by force. The first one is like this, and the next one will definitely become a loser.

If the protagonist doesn't know the plot, don't copy the plot from the original work. That would be embarrassing!

After watching it for a while, he then licked the monk. All monks and bald donkeys deserve to die. They should be killed. Then there is a burning book pit, monks and bald donkeys.

Shen Nong is dead. He has absorbed more than two thousand years of skill. His fist strength is 1,700 to 800 kilograms. Let's just say you don't know how to cheat, so don't do it.

It is indeed a daily guide to poison. Just reading the comment section will tell you how poisonous this book is.

Everything was fine up front, but once he got to Peerless Twins, he was useless. He followed Jiang Xiaoyu every day and gave away the techniques he created.

Find a class 😅😅

Although the astronomy is being used, the protagonist is like a native and doesn't know anything about it. Sheep heads were hung and dog meat was sold. If you are writing about an original world, then this is not unusual. You are not original in the world, it feels like a bit of a trap

The writing is so messy! The author is not up to the mark when it comes to character history or novels and movies! Forced fusion is so fucked!

Shen Nong is dead. Goodbye.

In the past, when people wrote martial arts, they understood that there were many things that could not be explained, so they had internal strength. In this way, people are still people. It's just that I have inner strength, so it's different. Nowadays, when people write martial arts, they feel that the internal strength of the past is not enough. So the Chinese martial arts fortify the body and the body becomes a tank. Basically, there is no explanation. I just tell you that the protagonist is not a human being. It's so baffling. Actually, I really dislike writing about martial arts as science fiction. If you write martial arts, just write martial arts. If you write science fiction variations, just write science fiction variations. I write like the Five Thunder Whips of Tai Chi all day long.

I've only seen a few pictures, and it seems like I don't know that I've been reborn in Nu Qing Xiangxi, and I feel like I'm useless.