Dragon Clan: Restart Your Life

Many fan authors have written a lot of things and changed a lot of plots, but many authors soon stopped writing. Faced with the situation of having nothing to write, they started to mess around, and some even went so far as to eunuch. I can only say that these fan fictions are like a blur. I have read many of them, but I can't remember many of them. They are far from the level of the original works. What is the most important reason? It's such a big world, why is there nothing to write about? In fact, this world is just a set stage, and the endings of the characters in it are very limited. Their ending has long been doomed, and the growth of the bad boy is the main line of the story. The biggest highlight is the changes his growth brings to all the characters. I think there are two reasons why many fans are not popular. ​ ​ 1: I read a lot of Dragon Clan fan fiction and found that the authors either set up another protagonist and let him replace Lu Mingfei. In this way, the protagonist Lu Mingfei loses his role, so halfway through the plot, Lu Mingfei and a series of characters become plot characters, and the author separates him from the readers. The growth of the declining child can no longer be felt. Whether it's comedy or tragedy. The authors avoid this issue. Therefore, I felt something was wrong after reading it. Even though some of the writing and plot are okay, it really doesn't have that flavor. 2: Some authors also let Lu Mingfei come back and force him to grow up. But like I just said. The growth of the road is the main thread throughout. In fact, what readers want to see most. It was not him who persuaded Chu Zihang to CP Xia Mi. It wasn't him who shouldered the heavy burden and helped Xianggui Zihang. Everyone in Old Tang had done things in advance. He is just a weak child without love. No one can advance his growth, and no one can delay it. The only ones who can make him grow are himself and another weak child. The problem with other characters is that their positions and abilities limit their position endings. So they need bad kids on the outside to change the world. It's simple, because Lu Mingfei is the most violent person, so everyone cares about him so much. But some people are only afraid of his violence, some want to take away his violence, and some want to use his violence to please him. But in fact, he is just a bad kid. He doesn't want to get involved in so much right and wrong, and he can't clearly distinguish the purpose of these people approaching him. He has the greatest violence, but lives an extremely sad life. Therefore, Lu Mingfei's awakening process is always the most important. His growth line is the biggest attraction. The whole world is just a stage. Lu Mingfei on the stage plays the humblest clown. He is bullied everywhere and lives the humblest life. But he is the boss of this show. If he is not happy, he can even tear down the stage. But he has been playing the clown for so long that he even forgot that he is the owner of this stage. Some authors don't like Lu Mingfei, but they don't want to touch him. They replace the person who can change the world with the author's own character, so Lu Mingfei is not important. But I would like to say that Lu Mingfei is actually more than half of the magic of this book! Twenty-year-olds can't bring in Caesar, Elephant Turtle, or Chu Zihang. What they can bring in best is Lu Mingfei. There's no problem with creating a new character, but he can't achieve the level of immersion that Lu Mingfei has. Because many fan authors cannot create such good characters. Many people just apply the protagonist template.        ，， He is the king of the world. How dare you turn a blind eye?    How dare you steal his love? Go fall in love with those cool protagonist templates of yours? This is not what I want to see. Is it good to fall in love with a mute? It doesn't look good! Too many people write about Eri Yi as being too important. But she is just a character who allows the weak child to grow up. Her most important plot is not her happy life with Lu Mingfei, that's not interesting. Her most important plot is the one in which she lets Lu Mingfei grow up. Married life is not what eighteen-year-old boys want to see. They long for this thing, but they don't care so much about the life after that. And it's really not that pretty to be giving out candy all the time.        ， How can she be so popular? Everyone knows that the fragrance of plum blossoms comes from the bitter cold. But everyone ignored it. If the world was full of little flowers, then plum blossoms would actually have no competitiveness at all. Everyone likes Eri Yi because of her beauty, carelessness and other qualities? I don't think so, it's about her relationship with Lu Mingfei and their experiences. You can have many, many beautiful sisters, you can have many different personalities, etc. But what does she have to do with you? Your closest relatives and loved ones should be the ones who accompany you through the most difficult moments in life! What she looks like or how her personality changes are actually not that important. The most important thing is this relationship! Therefore, what I want to see is not that Lu Mingfei suddenly turned into a cool protagonist template. Or create another cool protagonist. I want to see Lu Mingfei grow, I want him to feel that he is loved. I want the whole world to help him fall in love, I want him to be happy. Whoever he doesn't want to die will not die. I don't want him to force himself to grow up. I want the world to help him grow, not to grow up being hurt, but to grow up being pampered. Senior brother doesn't have it, Caesar doesn't have it, so they are all weaklings. But I want Concubine Ming to have it. In this way, he doesn't have to grow up in such a sad way. All of Jiang Nan's stories are actually to help him grow. As long as he wakes up, he can overturn the table at any time. As Angers said, we don't have to do anything, we just need to encourage him, cheer him, and wait for him to grow up. Yes, you said that, but you didn't do it. I think the biggest highlight of the first part is actually the principal's unreserved trust in Concubine Ming throughout. In the second part, Chu Zihang's trust runs throughout. The third part can be divided into Lu Mingze and Ling, Caesar Chu Zihang, the two elephants and turtles, the principal, Eli Yi, etc. They colluded through Lu Mingfei, and they always believed in Lu Mingfei, and this gave me the biggest first touch that I will never forget. It can even be said that the most touching thing is this kind of unreserved love. Scientists and soldiers from many countries are motivated by this kind of love. Scientists are trusted by leaders, the people, and soldiers, and everyone places their greatest hopes on them. Therefore they can explode with great power. It can produce two bombs and one star. . . . If you have seen the video of the bureau discussing the development of the navy and crying, you will know that their love for the country is also the same sincere love. Therefore, I think what we should do is not let him grow up suddenly without experiencing these several plots, because his growth is always the biggest highlight. But this time I don't want to think that he is still so bad. I want him to grow up in the bath of love. Someone was always covering him. Always help him overcome all difficulties in his path. After all, all we have to do is let him grow. Whether it's Nuonuo, Chu Zihang, Caesar, the principal, the turtle, or the little dragon girl. . . Their love didn't really hit the bottom of Lu Mingfei's heart! Chu Zihang is too boring, Lu Mingze cares too much about power and strength, the principal just wants him to slay the dragon, Zero is three nothings, and Eli Yi can't speak. Didn't you notice? None of them could make Lu Mingfei truly feel that kind of love, that kind of unique love. You are the most important thing in the world. You are in my heart. I love you without reservation! The whole world is terrible, but you are the only one who is doing well, no, you are the only one who is the brightest star. And Lu Mingfei is willing to give everything for this love!        ，， Lu Mingfei's perception of this love was weakened by these barriers. Thus a tragedy was written. After all, there are still many stories to be written about the Dragon Clan, and this is not the end, so Jiangnan just stopped here and just helped him grow a little.

It was the first year of junior high school when I first started watching Dragon Clan. I loved Dragons then, and I love Dragons now. It is a pity that since the single book of "Dragon III: Tide of the Black Moon", Jiangnan embarked on the path of no return of magically changing the plot and destroying the setting, until "Dragon V: Return of the Mourner" completely collapsed. This fanfic written by the author is my favorite among the long fanfics of "Dragon Clan" that I have read so far. In my opinion, the core artistic and literary quality of the book "Dragon" lies in "the choice of ethnic groups and individuals", "the balance of love and power", plus a little bit of "the growth of a young man". The author's handling of these issues gave me a very comfortable reading experience. I still remember that I just finished watching "Dragon Tribe III: Tide of the Black Moon", and I was really speechless. I don't know how many readers now have read the serial version of "Dragon Tribe III". Lu Mingfei in the serialized version is already a qualified team-fighting support, and he has no feelings of self-pity due to unrequited love. However, when revising the single book, perhaps because he was immersed in his own fantasy about "a girl who is ignorant of the world, only trusts you, and is waiting for you to save", Lu Mingfei was infinitely weakened by Jiangnan, so weakened that many readers became angry after reading it. Eriyi, who was originally just a passerby, was directly transformed into a symbolic shell, serving as a character tool for emotional dramas and tear-jerking tragedies. In addition to satisfying his own fantasy about "girls", Jiangnan may also want to give Eriyi the attribute of "Lu Mingfei's reason for growth". That is, the young protagonist must lose something before he can truly grow up. This is a very old-fashioned way of writing. What is even more tragic is that because of the decline of "Dragon V", Lu Mingfei's "growth" vaguely reflected in "Dragon IV: Odin's Abyss" returned to before liberation overnight. Up to this point, "The Growth of a Boy" is completely cool in the original work of "Dragon". The main character was criticized for being murdered, and it returned to the level of macro issues such as "power and love", "ethnicity and individuals". The same is true for Jiangnan. Until now, there is still no reason why. In the Dragon series, "Dragon I: Dawn of Fire" is positioned to reveal the basic world view and the main characters. The role of "Dragon II: Eyes of the Mourner" is to ① explore the issue of "Can dragons and humans reconcile? When the interests of the group conflict with personal interests, how should we choose?" Through the pair of CPs Chu Lu, how should we choose? ② The seven deadly sins auction is used as a prologue to unveil the world's mixed-race social pattern. "Dragon III" was originally supposed to serve as a link between the past and the next in the entire series. Through "The White King's Resurrection", the author can officially expand the plot stage to the entire mixed-race social game, and can also bring the hidden power of the dragon family to the forefront. But Jiangnan failed to do it... ... In the serial version setting, the Genji brothers were not controlled by pontine surgery, the Gattuso family was not the mastermind behind the scenes, and Tachibana Masamune and Herzog were not the same person. The stand-alone version forcibly tampered with these settings, leaving a lot of bugs behind. When the plot advanced to "Dragon IV: Odin's Abyss", I wonder if Jiang Nan was influenced by Harry Potter when he wrote this book. In general, Chu Zihang and Angers were forced to flee from Kassel because of both reasons. But... Even though the plot stage has been moved away from the academy, there are still no clues about the power structure of the entire mixed-race society and whether the dragon family has hidden power in modern society... The whole book has become Luno's emotional personal show. It would be great if Lu Mingfei completely awakened from his shell after this one. Unfortunately, after watching the plot of "Dragon V", we can know that he has not. (Sigh jpg) Since the plot quality of "Dragon V" is really too low, I only read it once during the series. Originally in this part, Lu Mingfei could use the power of the Sheqi Bajia or Zero (Lu Mingze) to go to new places and meet new people with a new identity. This allows "Lu Mingfei" to jump out of the role of a chess piece with high force value and gradually grow into a player who can manipulate the game - after all, with such a grand world view, the ending will not really be like fighting the White King, or Harry Potter fighting Voldemort, relying on a few people to fight in a group, right? But Jiangnan may be limited in space, may not be able to write about macro-games, or may want to put these plots into the story after "Lu Mingze" awakens. In short, the bad boy is still a puppet. Although he has been exposed to the so-called "dark side", he still can't change anything. He can neither compose his own script nor save the tragedy of important people. Now, the impression that can be left about "Dragon V" is that Chu Zihang has become wise, Caesar has become a puppet, the characters of Lu Mingfei's parents and Chen Motong's mother have collapsed, and Lu Mingfei's ability to support the "student union minister" has disappeared overnight. The last memory I have is that Lu Mingfei was instigated to kill the little devil in the dream like a childish girl from the original world. To this, I just want to say... Jiangnan, can you stop being a fool? Ahem, I went a little far, but back to this book - in this fanfic written by the author, "the choice of ethnic groups and individuals", "the balance of love and power", and "the growth of young people" are all well taken into consideration. Perhaps many book fans will prefer the pure sugar-filled Modo Modo and the domineering plot of cheating all the way, but I want to say that such works can only be fast-moving consumer goods that rely on the original work to exist. In this book, I can see that the author's literary quality and thinking about the world shine between the lines. Maybe one day, when the author picks up the pen and starts creating original works, it will definitely be a great work.

After so many years, I gradually let go. From the novelty when I first came into contact with the Dragon Clan, to the sadness of Eri's death, to the hatred of iron that cannot be transformed into steel until the collapse of Dragon Five, and now looking back on the past after reading this second creation, I found that I only have emotion for the Dragon Clan. Speaking of which, I am a little grateful to Jiang Nan. Although this bastard thrust the knife into my heart one by one and finally smeared shit on my face, I have to say that he stuffed a grand and tragic story into my mind, which made my blood boil and sad even if I look back on this story many years later. Think about it, a group of people pulled you up from the ground when you were at your most confused and sad, showed you a whole new world and invited you to join their great team to save the world. This is so cool, isn't it? Lu Mingfei's decline and his killing spree make you sympathize with and yearn for you. This is the reason why we can't forget the world of Dragon Clan, isn't it? The growth and loss on the small road slaying the dragon do not just correspond to our boyhood. I also want to thank Niannian for allowing me, a dead child, to see the perfect ending of this story before I completely die. (Please don't ask more from the author, he has tried his best to make this story perfect) Finally, two beautiful pictures of Lidian

This book is already a "treasure" for me. I have been reading it carefully recently. Sometimes because of the bad environment, after reading a chapter, I turn back to the beginning of the chapter. I plan to find a quiet environment and watch it again slowly.

How can I put it this way, it is indeed a good thing that the author wants to break out of the Jiangnan framework and expand the world view, but why do he use the same old routines? The Mayans predicted the end of the world 10 years ago. The recent meteorite virus was a frequent visitor to science fiction works in the last century. It's not that it's bad, but it's just that it can keep up with the times. When I saw these, I really felt like I was a primary school student watching Dragons 10 years ago.

It is recommended that you read this book after reading the first four Dragons. This book is definitely a redemption work that makes up for the regrets of the original work. Only when you have read the original work and read this book will you burst into tears with excitement, and will you know how gratifying Lu Mingfei's changes are. Author, I like you so much. Come on! !

After reading it for four consecutive days, I only had time to take a rough look at it. Maybe the writing is not as good as Jiangnan, but the world view setting, macro setting, etc. Are several times better than his. As a long-time fan who has read the original Dragon Clan more than ten times, I am really lucky to have seen the ending of Dragon Clan in my mind, instead of waiting for several years for the disgusting green-faced beast to die. My biggest feeling after reading this fanfic is that if the review of the finale of Green Faced Beast is not particularly good, I will not read it again. It may be a good choice to let the dragon clan end here. Although the growth process of Ming Fei is missing, at least he has grown up into a person that I will not regret. If I have time to read Nian Nian's "Dragon Clan 5678" over and over again, hh, if possible, I hope Nian Nian will stick to writing. Maybe one day in the future, maybe I, or one of the many book friends who are moved by you, will get the copyright of Dragon Clan, revise the ending of this Dragon Clan fan we love, and turn it into a genuine version. Come on.

What is southern flavor? I think this issue has its own point of view in the eyes of every reader of Jiangnan. In my opinion, Southern Flavor consists of gorgeous writing style, strong religious and mythological background, coupled with secondary and bad words. In this regard, I think the author is excellent enough. What is even more commendable is the author's loyalty to the original work. Most of the characters follow the behavioral logic of the original work relatively well. There is no OOC or forced self-promotion CP like other works. Although the second design seems a bit uncontrollable after super expansion, the overall shortcomings are not concealed. I think this book is a good enough explanation for the youthful obsessions of many of us.

One thing that surprised me about this book is that it did not dilute the existence of Lu Mingze In the author's 1.0 Ending, the little monster retained Lu Mingfei's human side, but if he was just an ordinary human, he would not be able to play the protagonist, and all the links as a non-human are in Lu Mingze Just like it is impossible to imagine Xia Mi ignoring Fenrir and focusing on falling in love with Brother Chu, Lu Mingfei is lonely. In the long loneliness, there is only one close relative. Now he has his beloved girl, trying to save the world, but before starting over, only Lu Mingze stands with him at the top of the world There was once a little monster who was willing to share his little world with him, but before and after that, Lu Mingze never hesitated to share the whole world with his brother If he wanted to be the king of heaven, he would bow his head and accompany him; if he wanted to fall in love with humble humans, he would play with him in the world. Maybe it feels good to have power again, but seeing his brother sad, he hopes to let him do it again The world is afraid of Lu Mingfei's awakening and dare not let him despair, but he just feels sorry for his brother's loneliness and is reluctant to let him despair Friends and lovers let Lu Mingfei learn to reconcile with others, but he still needs to face the deep and profound entanglement with Lu Mingze before he can reconcile with himself In the past, they were two conjoined twins with fragile hearts, huddled under the same leaf to keep warm on rainy days. Now that they have grown up, just like children who always leave their parents to form a new family, they should always learn to say goodbye to their loved ones and find their love In this regard, I am quite looking forward to Lu Ling's emotional line. After all, Lu Mingfei was abducted by a little monster, and Lu Mingze should have a destination other than his brother.

I have been reading books for 5 years and have always read on Kindle. This is the first time I have visited Qidian in five years, just to reward the author. I never read fanfics. This is my first time. Maybe I want to make up for some regrets of the Dragon Clan. Regarding this book, I can only say that it is very well written, and the writing style is better than that of Jiangnan. Think about what I think, think about what I think, write down my regrets. Thank you author.

There is probably no best Dragon Clan work that I have ever read. Anyway, it is better than Jiang Nan's 😁. Both the setting and plot are perfect, highly recommended

I watched it on q before, come here to make up for the full order, I think the Dragon Clan fandom is peak

I am currently the most comfortable Dragon Clan fan, please write a few comments: 1. It has a complete world view structure and story line, the logic is clear, it respects and inherits the original setting and expands it 2. The writing style better inherits the characteristics of Jiangnan, the writing is good, the description is delicate, and it is easy to read. Come and feel comfortable 3. The foreshadowing and suspense set up are all taken care of, and they are not deliberately titillating, and even fill in a lot of pitfalls in the original work 4. The CP is basically saved, the change of concepts of the two people in the Chu and Xia line is written very reasonably, not to mention the road painting, in short, all the CP have been corrected

Ten more updates! ! !

God among gods, he can write better than Jiangnan

I declare that you are the dragon clan, Jiangnan fellow

I stopped reading after reading the plot of Long San. Thank you to the author for writing this novel. After reading it, I have a clear idea.

The Road Painters were overjoyed, and there were group portraits The only thing they didn't understand was Chapter 256 When Minamoto said goodbye to Uesugoshi Uesugoshi was on a plane, Minamoto said it was a smooth journey, (Can't airplanes fly against the wind?) (It's the same as being on a boat)

Father! Why did you stop updating again? T^T

I have been moved many times by this book. Although it can indeed be said to be an apple picked by standing on the shoulders of the original work, it is true that the feelings and touches this book brought to me are comparable to the original work. In my opinion, the author's three lines are so long and interspersed with the topic of justice and love. That's right. The place where the one you love stands is your own justice. Although all kinds of people do not love this city, there are people in this city who love them. So they are willing to rush into the fire like moths to rekindle the fire. I remembered what a villain in a game said. He asked: "How far does a person have to go to get back to his original self at the end of time." In this book, in the third line of the dragon, those dead children in Tokyo spent their whole lives reincarnating. I saw the warmest things in this book. The world can really be gentle! ! ! (๑ १д१)

The only Dragon Clan fanfic I have fully ordered

This is one of the strongest fanfics I have ever read.

I clicked in casually, but I didn't expect it to be out of control as soon as I saw it. I spent a whole day doing nothing and catching up on updates Advantages: 1. A novel world view construction, and there is no Riddler 2. It makes up for the regrets of the original work, and the writing style is very good In line with the style of the Dragon Clan 3. The author is compassionate and compassionate, remembering the poor little characters who died in the original work, and rewriting their fates, even EVA is not left behind, which is very surprising Disadvantages: 1. Slow update p. S. It seems that the only unlucky ones are Ye Shengyaji and Professor Mance.

Note: This post has been edited. …… …… Original ending version introduction: …… The elegant principal's office. In the evening, the respected old schoolmates Caesar Gattuso, Chu Zihang and Fingel were murderous in the attic. Principal Lu snorted coldly and looked sideways at everyone, saying that he would definitely kill all these rats tonight and throw away their armor. The head of the Uesugi family walked upstairs slowly and said that dinner was ready. Let's continue playing after eating. Principal Lu held the hand of the head of the Uesugi family and said, "My wife, let me play two more games. I am very lucky now!" Nono, or Mrs. Gattuso, was sitting behind Caesar, the school director, impatiently pushing Caesar and saying, "Get out of the way, let me play a few games!" If you lose like this, you will lose your pants! Xia Mi stood behind Chu Zihang and made plans, humming this weapon to make sure they all kill! eva casually propped her elbows on Fingel's broad shoulders, rested her chin on his forehead, and smiled peacefully. The phone vibrated on the table. Principal Lu picked up the phone and impatiently asked who it was. I had to choose this point to call. If you have something to say, say it quickly, and if you fart, hurry up! The little devil said on the other end of the phone that he was watching a beautiful woman on the beach in Rio de Janeiro. A wave hit and all the swimsuits of various colors fell off! Brother, how are you doing lately? Principal Lu was immediately shocked and said, why don't you take care of my son and go to Rio de Janeiro to see beautiful women? ! The little devil said, oh, of course the arduous task of cultivating the next generation should be left to the most suitable person! ...... A small town in the south. The white-haired old man, wearing a crisp suit and elegant, took out a red rose from his pocket and gave it to the girl in front of him. He walked towards the new era facing the sunshine. …… ……

A new Internet cafe opened on the corner. The owner is a middle-aged man, a bit shabby, who is always worried about the rent. The boss lady is a Japanese woman. She is very beautiful. She is naturally shy and always hides behind the boss. She and the boss nest in the small space of the console and watch various animations together. Sometimes she would quietly watch her boss play StarCraft and write a big message of good luck in her notebook with a water-based pen. Occasionally, a cold man will come here with a woman. The woman is very lively, and the years have not left any traces on her body. The boss seems to respect the man very much and always calls him senior brother. When they are drunk, the man People always become gossipy, teasing the boss by yelling about breaking the axle, etc. The woman on the side was holding a Coke and laughing at the two drunk people, joking with the boss's wife Once or twice, a slutty blond foreign man came. He was quite handsome, with some beautiful breasts. He looked very rich, and I heard he looked like an Italian playboy. He also had a beautiful red-haired girl with him. When everyone saw her for the first time, they thought she looked a bit like the boss's wife. Everyone didn't understand how the boss could know a rich foreigner at first. It wasn't until the boss called the red-haired girl Senior Sister that everyone suddenly understood. Every time, the saucy blond foreigner would always bring a bottle of good wine and have a drink with the boss, and by the way, he would book out the boss's small Internet cafe. The boss's senior sister always teases the boss when he is drunk and plays games with the boss's wife. The picture is stunning. It was probably last spring, when the cold man and the flirty blond foreigner came to see the boss. I heard that a German who spoke in Chinese as a thief came to the boss. I don't know what they talked about. The next day, the boss temporarily closed the Internet cafe, saying that he was taking the boss's wife on a trip. Hearing that he was going away for a month, the boss generously told the curious neighbors that he would first go to Japan to see the performance of the famous Master Kazama Ruri, and then go to France to see his brother-in-law. It is said that my brother-in-law is in the suntan lotion business, and it is very prosperous. Finally, the boss said that he also wanted to visit his alma mater and visit his principal and vice principal. The boss chose an ordinary community in Beijing for the last stop of his trip. There were two couples there. The younger couple was fat and had marks from acne on their faces. The old aunt had a fat figure and a loud voice that seemed to make the room tremble. The uncle, who was a bit stooped but had his hair combed as shiny as if it had been licked by a calf, hurriedly took the gift from the boss, with traces of time imprinted on his smiling face. "I'm going home. I'll just stay a few more days. Your aunt made dumplings stuffed with chives." I heard that the boss's wife was pregnant after the trip. She was pregnant, and the boss was surprised and panicked. He heard that the landlady's two brothers were going to rush over to take care of her, and there was also a little boy in his teens who was very beautiful. He kept talking about power and power, brother, your life is mine, and your child is also mine, and he must raise it, etc., But the boss did not agree. A few years later, the old man with white hair, wearing a crisp suit, holding the child's hand, walked into the new era facing the sunshine.

I declare unilaterally: Jiangnan Old Thief's Dragon Clan is just a popular science book about the world view of the Dragon Clan and shaping the characters. This book is the orthodox one.

Zhuo, I suddenly discovered that when it comes to other fan fictions, readers tend to find fault with the authors. But when it comes to Dragon Clan fan fiction, those who scold the old thieves all at once can only say that we are worthy of being poppies, right?

I thought it was a cool article written by Lu Mingfei, but I wasn't happy. I felt uncomfortable after seeing Long Sanwan. First, the author had been laying the groundwork for so long, saying that many forces were going to show up in Tokyo, and Lu Mingfei also wanted to get back his original power. He said that the feast was about to begin, but what happened next What is it? The White King who was destined to die died, and nothing else happened. Several secondary characters and Li Wuyue appeared, but none of them died. I don't understand what the feast you are talking about is? Secondly, the story of Akira Sakurai and Mako is well written, but I am very confused about Akira Sakurai's teacher? Aren't you going to explain Sakurai Akira's inner thoughts and subsequent developments? I don't understand. Since you want to write a story about these two people, why do you need to add a female teacher's character? It makes me feel very uncomfortable. So when you write about Sakurai Akira's love for the female teacher, it becomes a joke? Don't you feel happy? Finally, you explained why Lu Mingfei didn't crush him forcefully, but how do you put it? It feels far-fetched and uncomfortable. You don't plan to start a head-on war, but can you just clean up the rats in the known stinking ditch? I understand that you want to write a group portrait, but don't you think your protagonist has very few opportunities to show up? Lu Mingfei didn't do anything in the whole process, but just beat the white king from behind. I really felt no emotion when I saw it. The second line of dragons still moved me, but when I looked at the road drawings of your third line of dragons, I always felt that there was something missing and I didn't feel much. So when you wrote the family dinner, I didn't feel warm and felt very embarrassed. The dialogue between Uesugi and his children was too similar to that of Sekiro. It was really embarrassing.

The orthodoxy of the Dragon Clan is at the starting point, who is against it 🪖

I'm halfway through watching it but I still can't stand it. The matchmaker is really boring. The main character is Lu Mingfei. It's better to say that Chu Zihang got the grandpa with him. He's been busy matching up your senior brother all day long. Is this what you came back to do? The world has been destroyed once, but you come back and work as a matchmaker all day long to match this and that, and the protagonist acts as a commentator throughout the whole process and watches others hand out dog food.