A Journey to the Heavens That Started with Joy as a Child

I read the first few articles, but they weren't very good. I wasn't attracted to them, and the plot and writing were not great.

Li Anran

Why did Xiao Huanxi acquiesce to Qiao Yingzi... I never understood Catfish Spirit's arrogance... Ah, no, don't the legs look good?

I haven't watched it yet, so I'll cheer you on! Nowadays, those who write about the city are worthy of encouragement. I would like to give you some personal suggestions. It is best to wear clothes. Don't wear the protagonist as a passerby or enter the plot by yourself. Soul travel is a bit poisonous. Also, write more of your own stuff. Don't copy too many plots. Just grasp a few major events. Save them first and give you recommendation votes every day.

After reading a certain book, Xiao Huanxi could no longer read it without Tong Wenjie and Song Qian.

Hedgehog girl Han Fei considers writing

It's time for the author to activate the Youth Faction. After Zhao Jinmai has grown up, he simply beats Li Gengxi. It's time for Lin Miaomiao to kill Qiao Yingzi

The heroine is actually a little loli, doesn't Song Qian look good?

In the first chapter, I looked like Fang Yifan and lost interest.

Wang Yidi

Qiao Yingzi

Come on, I want to watch Boy Pi next and let the protagonist be Jin Mailang

Will there be a boy group or something? I have been obsessed with Zhao Jinmai recently, and I am undoubtedly a Jinmai Lang.

Dear author, can you write the beginning?

Some worlds are really not suitable for multiple female protagonists. So one female protagonist per world is indeed good, but if you encounter a suitable world, multiple female protagonists will be fine.

Recently, I read that many people think that the previous attribute points are very poisonous, and some people even attack them personally, so I have modified the first two chapters. If you don't want to read it again, it's okay. This is just a small modification for book friends who think it is poisonous, and the plot content has not been changed. PS: Post a few pictures to suppress the post, please don't troll, please be merciful, and thank you in advance.

What we are saying is that in this kind of fan fiction, you can either directly replace the person, or you can use the name of the person in the original drama. Don't you feel embarrassed by the way you write it? Why, you are really free to choose names. There are three surnames in the family.

Personally, I suggest that it is better to use the name of whoever you are in time travel, or else dress up as a passerby, with one side being Fang Yifan and the other Li Yi, which is very entertaining.

The heroine is a hard lick. What you learn in Zhutian is to improve real life. You can go to Qingbei to get the results. In order to chase the heroine, you go to Nanda? Boss, you must understand that it is not your task to chase the heroine, it is to make the Fang family happy. . . There is also the skill of Lucky Star to prevent speculation. Having this skill is the dream of all losers. . It turns out that there was a bunch of delicious food in front of me that turned out to be expired. . .

Newbie, new book, please read it. I would like all book friends to please turn to the end of the latest chapter within 24 hours of the update, and then slide it. There will be a "To be continued..." Interface, please!

To be honest, I won't subscribe because it's too damn long. You can check out the Little Joy copy of the book Wandering in the World of Film and Television. If I hadn't invested in this book, this book might not even be on my bookshelf.

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Now I don't even watch the heroine if it's not Wang Yidi or Tao Zi. I mainly feel that Qiao Yingzi is too violent. She has a resentful face at such a young age and is also very scheming.

Goodbye! Hope there will be improvements next time

Can I see 237 there? ? How about you create a group? ? ? 🤓

It's okay. Keep working hard on your writing. It's okay.

The writing is still a bit childish! The plot concept is too dull! The emotional description is relatively hard and weak! It feels like the sentences describing feelings are like reading a speech instead of reading a novel.

I read the entire book for free on my new QQ reading account for a limited time, and I came back to order "The Sky of the Wind Dog" all by myself. I feel that this new copy is really well written 😁😁😁 However, I still haven't subscribed to Marriage and Little Joy 😅 Forgive me.

It's a bit long-winded, and the supporting characters don't need to play so many roles.

How about a TV series to surpass it? Skaters, don't always wear soul clothes, try some clothes too.