Little Joy and Youthful Feelings

This book is really good. Other little joys started in high school. Your book started directly as a baby.

Come on, come on, come on! ! ! If the later ones are better, I will definitely pursue them and reward them.

Give the author a comment. The author's writing style is very comfortable and the story line is clear, but there is no excitement or focus. Many people who read this book came to criticize the protagonist and Yingzi's CP, but the author obviously did not describe the climax and make love. Therefore, although the whole novel is smooth, it is very dull. Let me give you a few examples: 1. When there is a fight in the kindergarten, you can write a special scene where Yingzi is a little sad because of being pushed. The protagonist says next to him: I will always be with you. 2. Song Qian is divorced. Divorce is a very big deal for children, as if the sky is falling. The author's treatment is very bland; he could write that Yingzi ran away from home to find his father and cried alone outside. In the end, the protagonist, the princess, carried her home and stayed with her by the bedside all night. Focus on describing the dialogue and expressions of the two people. There are sweet moments, climaxes, and conflicts. 3. Because Wang Yidi is jealous, we can focus on how Yingzi became jealous, how he reconciled, and whether he was made to blush by the protagonist? Focus on this aspect. In summary, although the author's writing style is smooth, it has no key points and exciting points. The interesting points of this kind of novel are just sugary. The author's treatment is very bland, there is no conflict, and there is no description of key scenes. It is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it. I hope the novel will get better and better Finally, dear friends, I have only been called a handsome boy since I was a child, and I have never been called a handsome boy. Are you willing to say "Hello handsome boy" in the comment area below?

There is no other way, please post some beautiful pictures!

Little joy without Dong Wenjie is soulless

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Why is Xiao Huanxi the heroine of Qiao Ying? I don't think she is as good-looking as Wang Yidi, and his character is not good either.

To be honest, your writing is okay, but the plot concept has no life experience at all and is too unrealistic. The protagonist has always been called Song Qian and Qiao Weidong's uncle and aunt. If you adopt a baby, you will call it mom and dad. Otherwise, it will harm the child's growth. Even if you want to bring the protagonist and Qiao Yingzi together, you can also set up a foreshadowing in the later plot, such as finding out that they are not biological. Although the blood relationship law prohibits marriage, the adoption relationship can be dissolved. Later, Song Qian was asked to help take care of her cousin's child. Song Qian was divorced. Her cousin was Qiao Weidong's relative, and she was a distant relative. The relationship was not close. This was completely incomprehensible. Qiao Weidong could take care of her, but Song Qian couldn't. The plot arrangement was simply unbearable.

Is Qiao Yingzi really that good-looking?

I really don't understand the meaning of Shen Meng's cheating. Do three science masters know nothing about biology? Having sex while drunk is a joke. There are no biological instincts. The man can't even get up. If he goes to have sex, you have to say that he is directly drugged. It is still possible without being drunk, but it is the man who drugged him instead of being drugged. He can't even stand up. . . You really trample the top student under your feet and use him as a toy. . .

I really can't stand the harem watching Xiao Huanxi, and does anyone really think that Fang Yifan's goddess looks good? Yingzi is still pretty

Is Xiao Huanxi considered a two-dimensional person? I call you good guy

After reading Chapter 10, is the author writing a running account?

Let me share some personal opinions after reading the novel After reading the novel just now, I think the author has made some progress. From the first chapter to the latest chapter, the structure of paragraphs and so on makes people feel much more comfortable. And Xiao Huanxi is an urban novel, so I personally feel that novels with only one female protagonist are good now. After all, having a harem in a modern urban novel is really unconventional. I also suggest that the author should not write Xiao Huanxi into the Zhutian Wireless genre. This will give people the feeling of being like duckweed without a fixed home. Although many stories can be derived, the story can be made up by oneself. There is really no need to write the Zhutian Wireless genre. As for the expanded content, I personally feel that Xiao Huanxi has a strong sense of life, so I suggest that the author should also focus on daily life, and write some ups and downs in ordinary daily life. Just like the overseas travel in the latest chapter is good, and now that the protagonist has been raised by Song Qian since childhood, Qiao Yingzi may not be forced into depression by Song Qian in the end, and there will be no plot of going to the beach to seek death. Moreover, Song Qian and Qiao Weidong also chose to remarry because of Qiao Yingzi's behavior. Therefore, the author needs to come up with some stories for the protagonist and Qiao Yingzi to act together, and for Qiao Weidong and Song Qian to remarry. There is also Liu Jing's illness. I feel that the protagonist can intervene in advance or remind Liu Jing. These can all be written, depending on how the author writes it. Also, if you only write about Xiao Huanxi itself, there is not much to write about. The author also knows this, so the author needs to expand some content and stories. For example, he can write about some campus life, such as school sports games, etc. Furthermore, he can also write about what competitions he will participate in. I feel that urban combined with academic writing should be good. Personally, I feel that the author should not write any bloody plots. Those who have read Xiao Huanxi will not think that there will be any bloody plots in Xiao Huanxi. Novels like Xiao Huanxi are originally about daily life, so I think the author can refer to some daily life TV series or other, and then writing novels may be a better choice. This does not mean integrating many TV series. The author can refer to some suitable plots and move them into Xiao Huanxi, which can expand a lot of things. I hope the author will not write too fast and be too busy finishing it. There was originally a novel about Xiao Huanxi that was very good, but because the author of that novel was too busy finishing it, a lot of things were not written. In the end, the novel ended haphazardly. This is really bad, both for the readers and the author himself. So the author must slowly write a good novel. Xiao Huanxi is originally a relatively niche novel, so the audience may not be as large as other novels, but I think readers who like Xiao Huanxi will not let down a good Xiao Huanxi fanfic. Finally, come on, author, it's really not easy to find a good Xiaohuanxi novel, come on! ! ! 😡😡😡

Why does it feel like the author is forcing a confession? There's not a single incident that escalates. You peek at me secretly and I peek at you secretly and then you confess. It feels like the confession is a bit abrupt.

I hope everyone will support us!

It's really good. In my opinion, it's the best among Xiao Huanxi fanfics. Keep up the good work! ! Will continue to support.

The biggest drawback is that a child who has been raised since childhood is asked to call him aunt. To be honest, it is really awkward and is not conducive to the healthy physical and mental development of the child. It can be justified without changing the name, and it can be read if the child is adopted as a friend. However, this title is really uncomfortable. The author's writing style is still very good.

The Shen Meng written later, how should I put it, the author is out of his mind and would arrange it like this, and he just doesn't understand the readers.

We are collecting college stories. If you have any good ideas, please send me a private message.

It's really not interesting at all. Such a subject is written like vomit, with a boring protagonist, childish dialogue, and a stagnant chapter!

It's Chinese New Year, it's Chinese New Year, happy New Year to all readers!

Come on, the writing is good, and the subject matter is quite fresh. Come on! !

I just finished reading it, the writing is good, keep it up ✊ I have been a childhood sweetheart with Yingzi since I was a child. The subject matter is very novel.

Author, that drug addict is considered an illegal drug. It feels inappropriate for you to do this. First of all, have you thought clearly about the source of this drug?

There are only three situations in the following 1. The best friend deliberately framed the male protagonist for his money, which is less likely 2. The so-called Mr. Sun tried to divide the remaining money with the male and female protagonists 3. Mr. Sun and the male protagonist have a grandfather-grandson relationship in order to test some things Finally, I feel that the chapters written by the author after May 13th are very sha👃🏻

Is there any reader who can help collect a wave of new books?

It's over soon, and the false advertising pounces again.

I don't know what I'm looking at. It's just plain and simple.

The subject matter is good, but it's a pity that the author is not good enough and the writing is a mess, making it impossible to read.