Having Passed the Window Together Has Never Changed

I'm really going to vomit. Most of the previous chapters are plot dialogues. The key is that the protagonist doesn't have many roles. Sometimes a chapter is so long that I can't find three roles for the protagonist. And later on, the author doesn't even name the protagonist and just names the protagonist. Brother, don't be so perfunctory.

Why is Xiao Huanxi's writing so much better than this one? This one looks so uncomfortable from the front╯╰

The name I want to make is to make money, but to make money you must also have a money-making attitude. Each picture is like a chat record without any emotional description.

I might as well watch a TV series and read your chat history

It's rare to write about people who went to school together, so come on!

The writing is terrible, the dialogue has no emotion, it could be a little more serious, the dialogue is just dull, and the content, expressions and emotions are all eaten away, it's very tiring to watch.

It's your junior year, don't you plan to write something?

Is this book really that bad? Give me a recommendation vote.

The author failed to sign the contract, this film and television dialogue eunuch

Is there anyone else? Recently, we went to school together again. Personally, I think Ren Yifan is really a good match for Forsythia! I really hope there is a fan who can let them be together.

No, don't you think there is something wrong with what you wrote? Why is the protagonist called the protagonist? Because he has more roles and is more profoundly portrayed. In your book, each chapter contains less than 100 words about the protagonist. You are just a passerby. Moreover, Li Shuci's confession to the protagonist is also weird. What way? When there is a problem, instead of solving it, we hug each other and end it? You are writing a novel, not Liu Beiwen. You want to make money by choosing a name. You are just something that people can read. How can you still make money even if this disgusting person is here?

Did you copy the TV series? Watching this is worse than watching a TV series.

Come on, author. Although this book has some problems as a training book, I still read it from beginning to end. Come on for the next one.

This is the end. It's so fast. I have nothing to write. I only wrote about practicing my skills. Now I'm the only one left.

Of course, if possible, I hope you can write another novel about someone who went to school together. Of course, it won't be as perfunctory as the rest of this one.

Can you write well? Write something different.

Come on, work hard and finish writing is the most important thing

Author, are you writing a script? What the hell are you writing? It's so tiring to read!

You really don't need to save words when writing a novel.