The Miracle Grimoire of Another World

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The plot of the marriage is really weak-minded and poisonous. I have never heard of any country marrying its only heir, or a female heir. It is more reasonable for you to write that the current emperor goes back on the spot to try to have another child than to use the only heir to marry. Others, even the protagonist, have their wits reduced. While writing about the protagonist's past life experience and wisdom, he is not aware of this kind of thing. I think you have worked hard when you write a child-in-law. Child-in-law is no more reasonable than marriage. I don't know what the author of this plot is thinking. It is not such a feeble way to create conflicts in the plot. If this plot is not changed, a wave of people will be dissuaded. The fact is that a wave of people have been dissuaded, and new readers will also be dissuaded. Author, you have to think about who this novel is for. If you write it for readers, don't be embarrassed. This plot is left here as a legacy. Change it when it needs to be changed. If this is a self-pleasure article for you to read, just pretend that I didn't say it.

The beginning is indeed ambrosia, and college life is also very good. As a result, it suddenly jumps to the national level and marriages. Especially since the protagonist is still so weak, it feels like the progress is obviously going too far. To be honest, the content of the marriage should be posted on the shelf before being released, so that we can see the actual popularity, so that we can control the plot based on the rise and fall of subscriptions, otherwise it is useless for you, the author, to just read the comments. Everything should be based on subscription. More subscriptions means more people like to read it, because people who read it may not comment, and people who comment may not necessarily read the original version. To be honest, I have seen several books killed by reviews. One of the authors left a deep impression on me. He said: "Writing according to what the reviews like will lead to lower subscriptions. What you like and the normal pretentious plots will lead to higher subscriptions. Since if So, it's better to follow your own pace." Finally, I can't help but complain. In fact, there are no questions at all in the book, mainly about the marriage. As mentioned before, the heroine is a three-generation single, and based on this, there should be no marriage scenes with the heroine. This is not very logical. But the author writes as if this is normal, as if the heroine of three generations, the only granddaughter of the king, the only princess of a vibrant and emerging country, and the only heir of this country in the future, can be used as a marriage tool at will? This is a logical flaw!

Hey hey Yanxi hey hey Yanxi hey

The characters with Chinese names in Western Fantasy Magic are too awkward, just like the traditional immortal cultivators with Western names are as out of place.

Read on slowly and you will find that... You are reading very slowly. Haha, this book should be a very slow one. When you read it very slowly, you will find the book quite interesting (the kind that you stay up late to read)

Combined with the writing style of the author of "Big Hero", Lu Yuan's ability to seduce girls is definitely full of points. First, we created a three-person team, one man and two women, with plenty of space to get along. With Lu Yuan's skills in flirting with girls, both women should be together with Lu Yuan. Secondly, I found that the author was very careful when writing about the relationship between men and women, and the emotional lines were very delicate. I inferred that there should be a long plot before Lu Yuan and the two women confirmed their relationship. It can be inferred from this that the chance of a third heroine appearing is not very high, and it would be too confusing to write more. In summary, I think the dual heroines in this book are just right, more distracting and less boring. I believe that the author will not write emotional lines randomly. I hope that the emotional lines of Yan Xi and Kening will be written more carefully. The more delicate the better, wait and see.

I really want to watch the plot of this release. It's crazy and clever. I didn't expect that the only heir would get married.

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There is a question. The academy knows the protagonist's talent. Teacher Luo asked people who have reached one and a half crystals to raise their hands. I really don't understand the point of the protagonist hiding his clumsiness and not raising his hands. What will the academy think?