Lord of All: Starting from the Card Drawing System

Is the protagonist a lord or a bodyguard? Do you know the author? The main character is called the neighbor's uncle, which makes him look like a copycat bandit leader.

The author doesn't even read the comments. He doesn't pay any attention to book friends. His name is written wrong repeatedly. With this attitude, this book is not long.

It's okay, but the progress is a bit slow. Author, you can slow down the pace a little bit. For example, when you were making a wall, you directly confessed that you had been trading stones with other lords before. You should more or less say how much equipment can be built in a day. It is best to add the equipment and build it so that the lord can accept it and then give it to the knight. It is best to be more detailed and not mention every detail. But you should at least let people know what the army has and what the equipment is. Where does the food come from and what is there. Let's talk about your basic materials. Except for a piece of wood, I don't know what the rest is and where it comes from. I saw that you had basic material data when you were trading. Where it came from and how it came from, I don't know. The people reading it are very unfamiliar. The most important thing about the book is the sense of substitution. Your sense of involvement is a bit poor. Change it if you can. At least it will add a few more chapters without any effort, and people can clearly understand what is there, how it came about, and know the situation of the territory, instead of having a partial knowledge. This kind of partial knowledge is really bad. For example, if you suddenly take something out from behind, you don't know where it came from in front of you, so you just take it out suddenly? If this happens a few times, a group of readers will be screened out. By the way, there is another author. It seems that your lumber factory did not explain how much wood it produces every day. To summarize, the plot is good, the characterization is good, and the writing is okay, but the information introduction is not good, making it confusing and confusing. It is a bit unclear what the protagonist is and what his needs are. I think your book will be successful if you write it well. If the author doesn't know how to make changes, you can read novels of the same type and borrow them. You can stop updating for a few days and optimize them. Just post a single chapter saying that you want to optimize it. You don't need to make major changes. You just need to add information and be more detailed.

This book is well written! First of all, the author's treatment of the character Song Jiang is novel and unique. This completely broke Song Jiang's previous style of obeying Tang Monk's advice. Tang Seng is not like before, always chatting with Lin Daiyu and not doing his job properly. Secondly, the description of the battle between Xiahou Tan and Xu Sanduo is extremely accurate and lifelike. It completely subverts the sinister image of Xu Sanduo in our minds. Moreover, Xia Houdan did not have a crush on Hua Qiangu from the beginning as in the original work, but he only developed sparks with her after experiencing Mei Changsu's transference. The logic of the plot becomes smooth and smooth, refreshing the readers. Finally, the storyline of this book is intricate, fascinating, and full of ups and downs, making you immersed in the story. For example, why did Duan Yu save the Haier brothers regardless of the danger to his own mother? Did Teletubbies have a revenge plan against He-Man? Who caused the big belly of Mr. Cang, the wife of Roaring Sky Dog? These questions firmly attract readers' attention. It is worth mentioning that the final fight plot between Zhu Bajie and Donald Duck is both unexpected and reasonable, and the open ending makes readers have endless yearning and reverie for the love song duet between Taishang Laojun and Marilyn Monroe. In particular, the atmosphere of vicissitudes of life when Big Big Wolf misses Zhou Zhiruo in the Akina Mountains immediately highlights Ren Wo Xing's delicate inner world when he steals Huba, the sacred object of the Uchiha clan. In the book, the stand-up comedy session between Comrade Sha Ruijin and Chu Liuxiang and the ingenious idea of ​​Mr. Bean visiting the thatched cottage and asking Charlotte to help his grandfather are also highlights!

Rubbish novel, poisoned to death.

At the beginning, it was said that there would be a one-month novice protection period, but within a few days, a lord was killed by bandits. What kind of setting do you have? You can come up with it as soon as you think of it.

I feel like this is something from a studio, just to get a vote. Looking at the author's account, there are not a single comment, so everyone should be cautious.

I have a weak question: Is this forcibly suppressing the pig's feet? It takes a lot of effort to defeat bandits of the same level, but it can boost higher-level ones in seconds.

Cool writing from the studio, no brainers required

It has to be your lord lottery article. Basically, the heroine will be introduced within 10 chapters. Tsk tsk tsk tsk

It all depends on peers. If we maintain this level, Lord Wen won't be able to finish in the top three. Give a competitor a little more pressure. "Lords of All: Starting from Goblins"

After reading Chapter 25, I have a question to say. You just ransacked a small village. You yourself said that the true strength of the territory was not known to the bandits. Why did a third-level person come? Three fourth-order and a dozen first-order come to rob? I think even a third-level bandit should be a top figure! There should be 1 to 2 second-level players at most, and a dozen third-level players coming to grab them. I hope the author won't deliberately target the protagonist. Otherwise, if the protagonist cheats and cheats, it will be so uncomfortable. Will the others still survive?

The writing is weak, the plot is blunt, there is too much nonsense, and the writing is unreasonable.

In addition to starting to draw cards, I saw Chapter 27, and I didn't even talk about drawing cards once. Is it appropriate to have a level 34 elite monster in the novice stage? Is this good?

Not bad, much better than the novels of the same period, come on!

It can no longer be described in short terms.

Compared with other lord novels, it's pretty good

In my opinion, there is not much difference between ten consecutive draws and single draw, and if you use it immediately, you can develop it earlier. As the saying goes, one step first, one step first.

Rubbish novels, all kinds of poison, all kinds of anti-intellectual! It's obviously a personal start, but bringing in an undead pet is just a piece of shit! !

Knight → refers to a profession that walks on its own? Speechless Knight, Knight, if you don't ride a horse, what would you call a knight? Can you call me a warrior? And can you use a lance without riding a horse and walking? Speechless! I'm really speechless about infantry using lances! There is also a one-meter-wide city wall. What is the use of a one-meter-wide city wall in the Magical World of Laughter? Your level 3 hero can break this wall in one go, right? Just use a meter as a hair.

If everyone faces the protagonist's level of difficulty, if only 100 people out of 100 million survive, then I lose. Moreover, the protagonist only gets some first-level soldier summoning scrolls at the beginning of the game, and any player who is killed has a second-level soldier in his remaining soldiers. Are you sure you're not kidding me?

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Not enough

The Lords article is quite good, but some minor mistakes have not been corrected which is annoying.

I seem to have seen this opening somewhere! ! !

In the second chapter, I got a beautiful woman, so horny

I am speechless. A wild boar is divided into 4 units of food, each unit is ten kilograms, so a wild boar only weighs sixty or seventy kilograms. You are killing wild boar cubs, right?