Be Invincible from Ascension

If I were the protagonist, it would be almost impossible for me to run out of life. I will sacrifice blood to the common people, and I am still a time traveler. Then I will become the strongest queen in this world. There will be darkness and turmoil, swallowing up all living things. Then sacrifice the world with blood and devour the origin of the world to achieve oneself. Do you only need herbs to make elixirs? Wrong, my alchemy requires hundreds of millions of star cores as fire sources, the supreme spiritual treasure of alchemy refined with billions of black holes {cosmic bodies} and billions of neutron stars and the will of all living beings. Then use the essence, blood, soul, soul, rule fragments, etc. Of all living creatures and races to practice the elixir. This is what makes alchemy. Those who go against heaven will be eternal, and those who follow heaven will have endless reincarnations.

This is equivalent to monks from the mortal world coming to the spiritual world. The monks from the spiritual world think they are from the fairy world😂

Xiao Wu is a newbie, and his writing is unsatisfactory in many places. He doesn't know how to write popular topics, and he doesn't know how to write systematically. I hope you book friends will be merciful. I would like to thank the book friends who have been chasing books and thank you for your encouragement. Because of you, Xiao Wu has the motivation to continue writing! Please let Xiaowu clasp your fists! ! !

You can still take a look at the first 50 or 60 pictures, but after going to the Star Alchemy, they became more and more rubbish, still invincible. laughing to death

How to put it, it gives me this feeling: I can blow up a house with one punch, I am awesome. I saw a bald head knocking away the clouds in the sky with one punch. It's okay. He's just a little better than us. Let's go and collect the bald head's protection money.

Author, have you ever seen an old movie that is somewhat similar to yours? The plot is similar to yours. The plot is that space teleportation technology is very simple. At any point in time in the world, someone may discover him, but we humans just don't discover him. However, when all other technologies are fully activated, an alien spacecraft made of wood suddenly comes and attacks him with a gun. One person hit him, and then other aliens on the spacecraft came down with bows, arrows and machetes. Then the humans were confused at the time. After reacting, they told the aliens what the phobia of lack of firepower was. Then they used the space technology of the alien leader and found that it was very simple. Then the entire human race rushed out of the earth to colonize the universe.

Stop showing off in front of these novice monks. For example, people don't show off in front of ants. All species are different.

One said it looks good in the front, and the other said it looks good in the back. I suggest they have a fight.

It feels like an average movie. The supporting actor meets the protagonist with mindless ridicule. The supporting female role looks like the protagonist wants it. The protagonist has a classic appearance and is mediocre. It's enjoyable but not very enjoyable. It's just so-so.

The first fifty chapters are quite poorly written, but the latter ones are pretty good. It is estimated that many people cannot bear it. The latter one has a bit of flavor.

The advantage is outstanding, that is, the overall creativity is relatively novel, and although there are similar books, there are not many. The disadvantages are more prominent. The writing, plot, and rigor are too blunt, and there are too many bugs. The most prominent thing at the beginning of the article is that after 3,000 years of practice, I can't get out of the starry sky. This is the basic point of the whole book. I need to focus on explaining the reason, but it is obvious that the reason is too far-fetched. In 3000, when my cultivation reached its peak, I found that I couldn't get out of the starry sky. I didn't show any subjective initiative to think of a solution. I was just lying flat. One can develop skills, and the other can use external objects. If it is the protagonist who has not tried various methods, then it is because the protagonist's IQ is not online. If the protagonist tries, but the author doesn't write it out, then it's a writing problem. Moreover, there is another method that you can try - Gang Qi. In the article, the Gang Qi layer is connected to the starry sky, so Gang Qi can resist the starry sky. Why not study it more? On the contrary, the answer given in the article is that the starry sky stones are common in the outside world, but not on the protagonist's planet. OK, barely qualified, but what is the original text of the author. There are some around the protagonist's planet, but they are rare ~ I will post the original text below. If you can't stay in a place, but you find something that can stay in it, will you use it to study it? It would be understandable if there was nothing around the protagonist. But in the year 3000, as the original text states, these stones will still touch the aura layer of the protagonist's planet. Have you been blind for 3000 years and haven't seen a single person? I was immediately discouraged from doing so. Obviously it can be rounded off, but it should still be a matter of writing style and experience, and there are many small and large flaws. Lao Bai may not be able to stand it, but if Xiao Bai just enjoys it, then this invincible article can satisfy his hunger. If the author wants to go further, I suggest revising these key points.

This is a monk from the spiritual world who has gone to the mortal world. The mortal world thinks he is the immortal world, and the spiritual world thinks he is the mortal world.

Isn't this the "7 Billion Mad Dogs Escape"?

Originally, I deleted the first two negative comments because I thought the subject matter was quite good. Then when I saw the girl Luo Yu'er, I couldn't help but leave a negative comment. I was too lazy to criticize. I also saw that the author's level could only write some retro routines. It's just a pity for such a good subject.

Wherever there is invincibility, there is me

Very good, not many people follow it, don't be a eunuch Don't give up, author, write more than a million words in the first book, and the next books will be good as it accumulates popularity

Are the newbies nowadays so scary? This power is as good as that of the great masters - awesome!

Somewhat like a retro fairy tale novel. For example, the fight scene could have been killed instantly, but it ended up dragging on for several chapters. It's obviously cool, but writing it like this makes it toxic.

When I saw that woman, I felt a little bit poisonous. Maybe it's because I hate this kind of thing. Personally, don't spray U•ェ•*U

Xu has clear grievances, but in the end he only complained but did not repay kindness.

First

The introduction is very attractive, but the reviews are polarizing, so I might as well try the poison myself.

To be honest! The plot design is good! Mainly because there are too many unreasonable places! It looks incoherent!

The plot is good, but your logic is not good. You killed all the invaders to show decisive killing, which is really funny. You finally waited for the opportunity. You can't imprison them first, and then enslave them after you understand the outside world clearly, and then take a spaceship to other planets. Your plot is very thoughtful and indeed very attractive, but the logic of these things is really lacking.