Jia Lian's Struggle in the Red Mansion

I just want to know, how old is the author? How many years have you been writing compositions? Have you ever seen Red Mansions? What the hell is this writing about?

I didn't know what a running account was before, but I just saw what a running account is today.

Alas, the system has ruined web articles. Whenever you see the system, a voice will tell you that this is a joke.

Let's rewrite it. What kind of system does Red Mansion have? Read more Red Mansion articles. The Red Mansion next door is very good

Is this book even recommended? Is the editor blind?

A highly poisonous thing, I start with the Three-Character Classic, then Hundred Family Surnames, then the Thousand-Character Classic, and then copy the original work. There is no need to read the first ten chapters. There is no punctuation mark after the tenth chapter. It is uncomfortable to watch. The main character is downplayed throughout the whole story. It is a systematic start. It is also a strange person to be able to write like this.

Just like a running account. It's a good entry point, and it can definitely expand a lot of content. The result is that reading, taking exams, mining, and all kinds of people's psychological activities are still half-complete. If you are not interested in playing tricks, it is recommended that the eunuch prepare from the detailed outline again.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a bad online article. To be honest, even beginners' articles are better than this. It's really just a running account.

The writing style is so poor that it is not even as good as a middle school student, and is roughly on the same level as an elementary school student who has been exposed to composition writing for one or two years.

It's hard to find a single line of dialogue in this book, it's like a running account

What does this say

It gave me a headache. I have learned so much from reading novels for so many years, and I even wrote an outline.

It's good. There is no system. In ancient times, there was no way for people to rise in strength if they could not become civil servants.

I would venture to say that the author actually has a good idea, and the outline is okay, but the writing style is not good, and the writing cannot express the flavor. It is too white, and the characters are all facial makeup. This book should be used as a practice for writing. I wish the next book will take off.

Learn more from other people's "Jia Honglou". Stop writing blindly.

The idea is okay, but the writing is like a running account. After reading dozens of chapters, I really can't stand it.

I haven't read the book yet, but I've seen that most of the people in the comment area have just registered. Which peer is jealous after seeing the author on the hot list?