This Star Wants to Retire as Soon as He Debuts

Knife in hand, follow me Kill Chen Gou and snatch Youwei

After reading two chapters, the writing is too superficial, which is a failure. For a 25-year-old to join an idol group, you are a bit too old. Also, isn't it a bit disappointing that the protagonist travels through time and continues to want to become famous on the road to becoming a group? The 25-year-old predecessor has no idea, and the protagonist you have passed through still has no idea. I can only say that you have not grasped the essence of the title of the book. So, the title of this book is invalid. There are too many books nowadays, and readers are disappointed with the character and temper of the protagonist at the beginning. What else can you do to retain readers? It is recommended to directly draw from a certain retirement novel and keep the characters and reopen it. Of course, if you write and play on a stand-alone machine, just pretend I didn't say anything.

Author, I am very happy to finally have multiple female protagonists in an entertainment novel, but what you wrote is too ink. There are more than 80 chapters in this competition. I really can't stand it anymore. I have withdrawn it. I will use this to make up the number.

The author should probably find more kind-hearted colleagues to PY it It's really good-looking, but I don't know why it's not popular yet If there are not enough recommended resources now, you can try as mentioned in the first line This may help you take off earlier The male protagonist is very thoughtful in designing the female protagonists Work for him One: He didn't lick, two: He was aloof (he wanted to be a capitalist) Secondly, the age of the male protagonist is older and the song selection range is wide, which is good So there are almost no poisonous points in this book, nothing to question In addition, there are many female protagonists YYDS

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At our age, everything else can come later, but studying can't come later!

To be honest, I can only accept books with single girls like entertainment.

I started poaching people to start a company and do some sexy stuff, but I ended up doing a romance here. It's watery and ink-stained. I skipped a few pictures and ended up not having any dyslexia at all.

The writing is quite in line with my taste. The characters all have high IQs. Is there any pretentiousness or slap in the face? Good luck to the author. I'm just sorry that I can't give you a recommendation vote or a monthly vote (I voted for an author with hemophilia who writes sports articles, I feel he needs it more), so I can only give you a reward occasionally. It is also suggested that the author can read more similar works to learn from their strengths and weaknesses. Like "Debuting from the Queen's Concert". This is the most responsible author I have ever seen. He explains clearly to you why he chose this song, this movie, and the chapters. Sometimes he even gives you references. Come on, I hope the author can become the next great god.

I'd like to encourage you. It's well written. There's nothing poisonous about it. I just read that the comments have a strong reaction to ancient poems. Actually, it's not bad. There aren't many. In addition, the pace is relatively slow and the plot cannot be advanced. Everyone knows that following up can make this book better recommended, but you have to read more. Otherwise, readers will read two chapters and feel that they have read something but not feel it. This is the disadvantage of a slow-paced book, and it is easy for people to give up reading. Praise should be given, give the author some motivation