Side Story: Starting from the Mass Graves

Nowadays, people who write about cultivating immortals all have great ideas, but they all add systems and stuff, which just doesn't make sense. If they're not about systems, they just introduce items or something like that.

It looks good, the only true immortal in the world, the immortal of the side sect, the magic of Tiangang and Earth, no heroine, come on! ! ! !

What you can write can be current, hoping to be self-interested and have a high IQ.

It's another article about the exemption price. Isn't it reliable? He won't follow the trend again and then enter the palace after a while.

The plot description is a bit confusing, and it jumps to the past suddenly, and the sense of fragmentation makes reading stumbling.

The subject matter and the exercises practiced by the protagonist are both to my liking, but the scenes often change suddenly and the writing in some places is awkward and a bit confusing.

In the world of cultivating immortals, the protagonist never changes his name or surname, which is too low.

I said at the beginning that I wanted to be a eunuch, but the author said that he would only leave for a few days. After more than ten days, I came over and saw that it was finished, and he was a eunuch. I was really convinced.

The cultivators in this book walk as slowly as ordinary people. Shouldn't Qi cultivators be able to walk tens to hundreds of meters in one step? Martial arts can shrink to an inch, what? Are you running step by step here? Are you still being chased by others for 100 meters and 50 meters? ? ? ?

The Tengu eclipses the moon and disrupts my elixir and cauldron's profound energy. I'm going to do it.

Physical strength means physical strength. The physical strength is amazing. I jumped up the city wall. I think I can change it here. I hope it will be adopted

The writing is quite good, but I suggest that some restrictions be added to the functions of those things (for example, 8-level ones cannot handle higher-rated ones, etc.), Otherwise as long as the protagonist's IQ is slightly online, it will be easy to be invincible! If you are so fast in the early stage of being invincible, readers of other genres (non-invincible flow) will run away.

Don't keep swallowing your saliva, author. . Looks disgusting.

Thanks for the post Thanks to some readers who have raised questions and were corrected by me

Not bad, IQ is online, not a virgin or anything like that, more updates, don't be a eunuch

Click on the avatar, there will be a surprise, my life as a villain who cultivates immortality, and see how the old villain Tong Huotong kills everyone in the world of immortality, and rises from humble beginnings!

The number of monthly tickets is seriously inconsistent with the number of investors.

Collection of posts from the sidelines. rt. May be adopted.

Which immortal breaks the Nine Heavens with his fist?

Water one, I think it looks pretty good

Come on, it's so beautiful. The more you watch it, the more interesting it becomes. I keep following it.

An eight-character title looks so tiring

I just started reading the first chapter, and it happens to be on the shelves today, so I'll give you an initial order. Don't worry, author, the first order for a newbie is generally not very good. You still have to watch what happens next, don't get discouraged too early.