I Can Smelt All Things

Regarding the poisonous points that have emerged so far, I thought about it and decided to write a post to summarize them. I didn't think enough about it in the early stage of writing a book, so I try to avoid it later. Friends who are new to this book can also take precautions in advance. 1. Female nun Sun Wei: This character arrangement was indeed ill-considered, and her feelings for the protagonist were a bit abrupt. At that time, I positioned her as a tool person to promote the plot of the story. Looking back now, there was too little foreshadowing. The reason why Sun Wei had feelings for the protagonist was not clearly explained in the text, which made it a bit inexplicable when watching it. This line was also cut out as soon as possible in the book so as not to affect the main plot. 2. Money Manager: This character has some foreshadowing in the front (unable to break through, depressed, narrow-minded), but the line is a bit long. He is originally an insignificant supporting role. When reading the book, he may have forgotten it later, and then suppressed the protagonist, which will feel a bit abrupt. There is no problem in the process of just looking at the plot, but the foreshadowing and the explosion are too far apart, which leads to a slight poison. At present, based on your feedback, the controversial areas are roughly these two. I will try my best to avoid them when I write later. I also hope that you can comment more and put forward your ideas so that I can get feedback, so that I can write better works. Thank you to everyone who supports this book. 🙏🙏

Find a sparsely populated place and start melting from a mountain! Find a sparsely populated sea and start melting from a drop of water! Find a planet where no one lives. . .

Open an opinion forum. If you have any ideas, you can come here and put them forward. It's not easy for a newbie. I hope you guys can support me 🙏🙏

Is your IQ online? Is it a dog licking article?

This kind of smelting oneself is the most difficult to write, because shouldn't smelting be about investing in oneself? You are your greatest source of confidence. So what you wrote is a bit different. The first one is that you should invest in yourself.

A good novel, enjoyable to read. Come on＾0＾~

13 Recommendation votes are given to you. . Isn't your picture a bit miserable 🙂

There's nothing wrong with the writing style, but I can't see the highlights and it lacks the appeal to continue reading. I look forward to the follow-up.

What about today's update? No more updates?

Smelt the eunuch's cut off flesh to get...

Generally speaking, the writing is still good, it is getting better and better, keep up the good work!