Start with Infinite Magic Power

How to put it this way, when I see a punishment system now, I only have one thought. The system is the capitalist, and the protagonist is the worker. As long as the protagonist completes the task, he can get unlimited rewards, but if he fails once, he will get nothing. Although the author will keep winning as the protagonist, it is not pleasant.

After reading dozens of chapters, my impression after reading is that the protagonist is smart at first, but later starts to stop thinking and is not afraid of death. He always needs to be reminded to make progress and has no independent thinking ability. His trick is no longer effectively used. He acts more and more recklessly without regard for danger. His character becomes more and more self-sacrificing. The more I read, the more unhappy I became.

After reading Chapter 20, I have a few questions. 1. The protagonist is not infinite in spell power, but has the ability to deceive. Others think that the protagonist has whatever abilities he has. The hook is very high, but the acquired abilities cannot be permanent. Although there are patches later, there will still be some discomfort in the front. 2. The system has tasks, and the penalty for failure is to lose all the magic power. It seems meaningless at the moment. It just forces the protagonist to participate in a certain plot, but it is quite disgusting. 3. I can't tell whether the protagonist knows the plot at all. He shows that he is very familiar with the plot characters, but sometimes he seems to not know the plot. His invincible ability caused the death of the white dog, and the leaky pot was rescued. I can't see what impact the protagonist has on the plot.

Don't you think it's outrageous that you're a sophist and a logical twister, and yet you're still a weakling after you've given me such a big deal?

The writing style is acceptable, but I'm not good at describing emotions. Maybe I won't comment too much on the author's emotional experience. But here's the advice again: don't write about things you're not good at, otherwise it will be embarrassing to write and embarrassing for us to watch. Both the development and the settings are pretty good. The first poisonous point is the punishment. It's not that punishment can't be written in today's novels, but that no matter how many rewards you get, as long as you don't complete it once, you will return to before liberation. The second poisonous point is the emotional scenes. With the addition of emotions, the plot suddenly becomes a bit childish. It's not that you can't write about emotions, but this kind of innocence, like that of a junior high school student, should make most experienced readers feel embarrassed. At least the male protagonist can negotiate something. Then there are some suggestions at the end. Since it is a different world and not just about spells, we should finalize the tone of the male protagonist and use this to filter the readers, because I believe most of them come in for spells. There are few people writing about this subject, and it is even more rare to have such a good setting. Finally, one's imagination is limited. When writing about some abilities or settings, some readers may have published some pretty good ideas. The author may consider copying them directly or referring to them, (funny)

Why do you all like to write about swords? Isn't it cool to have a big gun like Kungunir? Every inch is longer and every inch is stronger.

It's such a big deal, but it's written in such a way that I can't tell how awesome the protagonist is.

I've only read Chapter 20, but to be honest, I don't really understand it, especially the protagonist's combat power. I always feel that the writing is weak and strong, and I feel the same about the protagonist's IQ.

The writing always feels off topic The protagonist, a cheat, only needs to do two things 1. Create a character 2. Deceive people Wechat business knows, you can mention Lamborghini every day The difference between the protagonist is that as long as one person thinks he has a Lamborghini, then he really does. Then he took it out naturally. Others also believed it. No extra skills or practices are needed. If you think I have it, then I have it. You just need to describe this deceptive process in a wonderful way.

I hope that the protagonist can develop steadily and become invincible, but I didn't expect that it would be so easy to fall into the trap. I'm quite disappointed. Even if there is a cheat, he is a useless protagonist. Use cheats more to develop the plot. This has not been used. It is really boring to rely solely on the original plot. It feels like being in the water. The writing is good but the ideas are not good. (This is purely a personal suggestion, feel free to change it or not)

Wouldn't it be possible to become a god instantly if you could directly engage in religion with this kind of ability?

I don't understand it a bit. It feels like a sophist alone can crush the world, but why does the system need to provide both spells and spell tools? Spells and other spells should be obtained through sophists' fraud, and most of the spell tools are of little use. There is also the use of abilities. The Sophist's ability used by the protagonist is very blunt and lackluster. The twisting rules do not describe in detail how to twist, which makes it a bit confusing.

I feel that the ability of Sophist is not suitable for Shuangwen because it does not provide enough security.

At first I thought that since there were so many discussion forums, the book must be good. Then I watched seven of them, and the plot transitions were blunt and the characters were stereotyped. In some places, the sentences don't make sense and it's really embarrassing to watch. I suggest that after the author finishes writing, he should read it several times to see it from a reader's perspective. If it feels awkward and stiff when he reads it, it is best to revise it. The subject matter is good, but the initial ability selection is wrong. Let's see how the protagonist's ability is used when he fights within five seconds of meeting you. Then let's see how the protagonist in your plot is used. When I first saw this ability, I thought it would be more interesting. As a result, it was just hard-written, and the other party would believe it if it was really just a pig's trotters. For example, if Main said that he had a lot of magic power, Hui would believe it? However, according to the character of the original work, it is simply impossible. If a stranger tells you that he has hundreds of millions, your first reaction should be doubt, right? Once doubted, it is impossible to activate this ability. So you might as well change your abilities, the writing is not good enough and it looks too awkward.

It's still not fun enough. The protagonist has made me so embarrassed in recent chapters. He cheated but not fully.

It's terrible to temporarily enhance the sophist's ability. If you want to improve your strength, you have to trick people into believing in you. I'm speechless. What's the use of tricking people when others believe it? It's better not to choose this ability.

The author made a big mistake and downplayed the cheats in the novel, which is unreasonable. It is recommended to add restrictions to the cheats, and do not forget the cheats. Also, you need to be careful when using cheats after adding restrictions!

Front row reminder, the protagonist was secretly plotted to develop a second personality

Infinite magic power is a lie

As mentioned, after reading almost ninety chapters, I feel that the story of the article and the protagonist's own strength are seriously separated. As a result, I always have to think about superfluous things when reading, which makes readers feel tired. Although I have not read the paid chapters yet, but only from the free chapters, this book is no longer suitable to continue writing. I will consider starting a new book

Although the old-school unlimited flow in the past had punishment mechanisms, such as erasure, in fact we all know that the mission cannot fail and the protagonist cannot die, but we are not disgusted with it. Why? Old-school infinite flow setting, First: the mission is difficult to a certain extent, but the process is still very thrilling, and the protagonist does not have so many hangups, and even though we know that the protagonist will not die, the team members may die. Second: The setting of the main god space itself is an elimination system, the weak can eat the strong, the law of the jungle, it is very cruel from the beginning, death is the norm And in this book, First: the protagonist is extremely powerful, and the task is simple, but the punishment is heavy, it basically means that it is impossible to fail, so the punishment is not meaningless. Second: If it doesn't fit the setting, why should we punish the protagonist? What's the meaning? Are there other reincarnators? The setting of this book itself is not one where the protagonist struggles to survive, but rather a semi-invincible one. To sum up, author, don't rush to start a new book. Write it first, communicate more with readers, discover more poisonous points, and prepare for the next book.

I read Chapter 9 and can't stand it any longer. The good guy has all kinds of contradictory logic. He was upset one second and started laughing ferociously the next. The plot is confusing. I can only say that there is no connection between the previous sentence and the next sentence. The idea is quite good, but the writing is too poor. I can only say that the author has no grasp of it.

Have you watched the original plot? I feel like it's the same whether there's a protagonist or not, it's just that a passerby character was added to the original plot.

To be honest, after reading dozens of chapters, I felt confused, the writing was a bit bad, my strength fluctuated, and my character was not well developed. I felt like I had a split personality.

Except for the world plot, the content is so redundant. It's hard to see if it's interspersed with settings.

I took a look at the book circle. Although I haven't started reading this book yet, I feel that the author can communicate well with readers and it should have potential.

So Ashem, are you satisfied with this journey?

See Chapter 7, what a mess of settings

Shi is the biggest bastard. He is even afraid that you won't know how to use it. The logical result is that Shi seems to have a protagonist, but in fact there is no plot. It is exactly the same as the original work. The system also has a punishment system that makes the protagonist jump up and down.